《Immortal World》Book 2 - Chapter 13
Advertisement
-- Aster --
The world changed. The battlefield was gone. Replaced by a silvery storm of power, flickering and fluttering out of existence, the churning of energy calmed and dissipated until it resembled small motes of dust. Revealing an incredibly dark room with little particles swirling around. A completely black room revealed itself. Little particles swirled and winked in and out of existence, the only things visible aside from me and my friends.
The darkness was strange with no light present, though my friends and I were still fully lit. Why was no one was moving? We were all just fighting those wolves...no that wasn't real.' The memories came slowly, as I parsed out where the illusion started and real life began. 'The rooms.'
I was able to piece everything together, and I looked at everyone again. Every one of them was standing in place not moving. Their eyes were open, just staring at nothing, eyes completely out of focus.
I moved tentatively towards James while calmly calling out. "James."
"James? Can you hear me?"
A shiver went through me looking at them all. "I still don't even know if you can hear me, but James you should know this is pretty creepy."
I started to make silly faces in front of James. "Come on James I can do this all day." I kept contorting my face until I felt silly at his lack of response.
I leaned in close to James and whispered in his ear. "Hey, if you don't do anything. I'm gonna tell Bay you're super into her."
Moving in Bay's direction, "I'm gonna do it."
I got even closer. "I'm gonna do it."
At about halfway I stopped. "What am I doing?" Everything was just wrong.
"James, please do something. Anything" I waved my hand in front of his face. "Even just fucking blink."
My knees were wobbly as I asked "What happened to you?"
I couldn't just stare at James, I was starting to lose control barely keeping it together.
I took one last look at James before trying with Bay.
"Bay?" I waited, receiving no answer.
"Bay, I'm hoping you can hear me. I don't know what you all are going through. But you all need to move, blink, do something. Anything, even just go through whatever motions you were." I begged
I felt my eyes grow hot as I pleaded. "Please. Please. I...I can't. I can't die with you all stuck in this place. You're all supposed to be ok."
I couldn't stop I needed to keep moving. Try to get one of them to respond. I moved through each of them pleading and begging until I physically started to shake them. One by one they collapsed to the floor eyes open and unresponsive. They were all breathing thankfully but they just weren't there. Their minds had fled somewhere and I couldn't bring them out.
I had nothing left. So I dragged them all next to each other and just talked.
Advertisement
"You know. My last year in school was rotten." I let out a long sigh. Sitting down next to their comatose bodies.
"I'm not blaming any of you, but I wish that one of you would have reached out. Bay you tried but I don't think you understood how bad it was." I paused and thought.
"I supposed that was probably my fault. I played down how bad it was, and James you just didn't understand." Shaking my head.
"Decay, I wonder if I made that year worse on my own?"
*Snort* "Turns out the whole thing was orchestrated to test me. Somehow, I both passed and failed. I wanted to tell you all I'm a Keeper now. But I suppose none of you would believe me." I looked over each of them hoping for some type of response but nothing. I looked back into the black.
"Violet. I'm sure you knew, but I've got to ask did you know I had the biggest crush on you?" I laughed at myself.
"Yeah, I know stupid. You never really liked me at all, but I think it might have been a way to help me through the year. Deluding myself like that."
By now my eyes were watering tears not quite falling.
"And Rowan. We were never close but more like acquaintances. Don't know why we never really became friends over all these years but, you were still a good guy."
The tears broke through, and the tenuous hold I had fallen apart.
"I'm so sorry everyone. I don't know if I can save you. I don't know if I can finish this on my own." Tears flowed freely down my face for a long time before I was able to gain some semblance of control again. Looking back over them, I nearly lost it again. I somehow kept it together and smiled down at them.
"I don't want to die, but I don't think that's in the cards anymore. But I will not die without trying my damnedest to get you out of here." I said almost flippantly.
That's when a blue screen appeared.
5 of 5 have passed.
Rooms in area 1 have been cleared.
All party members have survived
Connecting to next challenge area.
Manual Override detected.
Next Area loaded.
'5 of 5. Did. Did me not being here make them fail and have to start over?' I looked back to the rest of the team horrified at the implications.
'No. It was my fault. I wasn't there. If I was there we would have passed through all these rooms like it was nothing.' Then something occurred to me. 'Why didn't they tell them?' I started to grow angry. 'They would have waited or have not bothered with it. They're smart people. Was it that asshole of a mayo? When I get back...I don't know what I'll do but I will find out if he knew.' I stopped that line of thinking, I didn't even know if I would be alive long enough to confront him. My goal now was to get my friends out before I expire.
Advertisement
It was with that cheery thought that I saw a white light, appear in the blackness. I turned toward the glow as it grew up from the ground like an opening portal. Looking down at my crew, all still collapsed and unresponsive on the ground, made me want to laugh. None of them were even remotely in a condition to walk let alone what was beyond that door.
The thought of dragging them through was not very appealing, especially because I didn't know what was waiting for us through that door. What new challenge or pain was waiting for us all. I didn't want to be the cause of any of that, so I moved forward on my own to scout out what was beyond. Inside the light. 'Maybe I could pull them through and handle the challenge. Whatever it was.'
I stood just beyond the door to the next area, looking in trying to see what was next. The room was similar to the other rooms, being bright white throughout. Though this room was missing a door, and in the center was a large silver circle with arcane symbols throughout it. It reminded me of the time I used a portal wizard to get my equipment back.
"If everything tracks. This will probably summon something." I looked back to the group thinking aloud. "The question is will it be safer in here or there?" I didn't know what would happen if I just left them all in the darkroom. Maybe there was a time limit or the room ceased to exist? I just didn't know. But, it did appear to require everyone to move forward. So I decided to take a risk and started to pull the group into the chamber. Pulling them inside I placed each of them near the corner in case I needed to defend them.
At least that was the plan. As soon as I pulled Rowan through the door the ring began to light up, and spin. Arcane symbols appearing disappearing, moving as though through 4 dimensions. The circle splitting into appearing like a 3-dimensional astrolabe. Moving faster and faster, until becoming a giant sphere.
'Please don't summon a dragon or something.' I pulled Rowan to the others setting him down turning toward the dome of light. I readied my dagger and waited. My heart was racing, I took one last look back at my friend's. Everyone laying behind me, listlessly looking at nothing. I had to protect them. I needed them to be free.
I crouched reading myself to lunge. I knew whatever was going to come through would be made for five people, my only chance would be to take whatever came through by surprise.
The glow from the bubble bloomed brighter, condensing and forming into something humanoid. I sprang forward to strike, only to be thrown back into the wall by a wave of energy. Hitting the floor I kept moving rolling back onto my feet to face whatever came through. Who greeted me made my jaw drop. There standing in the middle of the now inactive circle surrounded by a cloud of dissipating energy was a man I knew. A man who had helped me for years back home. A family friend. Cane. He was just as tall, and sturdy as I remember. Still wearing a big brown beard. As always he looked to be in his mid-forties, that suddenly struck me. 'How old are you really?' I had never seen him without his foresting gear, but today he wore thick leather armored and held 2 curved swords. He was smiling without it reaching his eyes.
My mind was overflowing with so many emotions my brain short-circuited then Cane spoke.
"Hello, Aster."
-- Cane --
I watched with anticipation as Aster and his team entered the room. One by one each person fell into a trance. This was the most critical part. If Aster failed then they would have to go through the whole thing again, and again until he passed. Aster didn't disappoint. I watched the screen as Aster came woke up from the mental illusion, on the first try. The others had come back as well. As much as they would. They all just stood there, eyes unfocused. Every round their condition would deteriorate to the point I no longer knew if they would even be able to come back for another run.
With them successfully finishing the room it was now my turn. I had long readied everything for them on the off chance they succeeded, redirecting the next set of rooms to a final one.
This was my chance to free them or at least give them a chance. We had stumbled on a long-forgotten protocol, the manual override. That we could use to adjust the testing. The only hitch was it couldn't be used to change an existing set of rooms, and by the time we found it. It had already been a week, with all the current rooms locked in. Still, it wasn't a likely chance but it was something.
Even with the manual override, there were still rules that even I couldn't change. It still had to be a challenge, and I couldn't just make it easy to let them through. I was hoping that if they made it this far their minds wouldn't be far gone and they would be able to fight. They were all but useless right now, and despite seeing how much Aster had grown. I don't know if he will be able to handle this on his own, but we would soon find out.
I finished putting on my armor and picked up my swords. I moved to the teleportation circle and waited. Now the only thing left to do was fight. "Let's see how you've grown."
Advertisement
- In Serial43 Chapters
Sixguns and Spellfire
Completed Story. Texas Lawman Cash Renshaw gets pulled into a world of magic and mysticism that he never knew existed but finds himself uniquely suited to handle. Alhambra Sheriff's Office Detective Cash Renshaw is about to wake up. He learns that there is another world out there where all the creatures of nightmare and magic are real. Not only that but he finds that he is a special type of person called an "Archetype" that derives powers from the collective power of human imagination. Now he will join his new partner in the Agency for Metanatural Investigation to investigate a strange new type of Runic Tattooing that allows normal humans to tap into magic powers, at the cost of their lives. Cash will learn that his new reality is as deadly as it is mysterious, and his first case might be his last.
8 197 - In Serial74 Chapters
Paladin
When the first derelict alien spacecraft fell to Earth, humanity took what was found in it and propelled themselves to new heights. In their new Golden Age, humanity developed technology that they had only dreamed about. The following years saw hundreds more ships crash into the planet, spurring even greater technological leaps. An unassuming spacecraft, one of the dozens that fell yearly, descended on Siberia in 2021. The world took no particular notice of it. However, this one contained something beyond the miraculous technology that had made humans so prosperous. Three years later, in a top-secret underground facility in eastern Colorado, the automated construction of an army of Paladin Mobile Infantry Suits was underway. With this new, state-of-the-art weaponry, the military would turn the tide against the alien incursion that was consuming the planet. Humanity fell before that could happen. Sam was an engineer responsible for overseeing the facility. Now alone, he lives in utter boredom and near insanity, his only company the base’s pseudo AI and an army of empty Paladins. With the world gone to hell around him, and the things that caused it still living above, he decides that he is much better off staying exactly where he is. Unfortunately for him, that is no longer an option. This is the first novel I've written. The first fifteen or so chapters are going to be a little slower. I want there to be time to get to know the characters before they start blowing stuff up. Also, though the MC will be strong relative to the world, he won't be OP, and won't win every fight. Not every fight will be physical either. Currently, I'm aiming for something like 5 fairly short chapters a week, after the introduction part is done, but we'll see how that goes. Thanks for reading, and please let me know if I've made mistakes!
8 63 - In Serial7 Chapters
Dungeon Soul
Odracir Hilers finds himself as a dungeon core after a 'failed' experiment to make a golem that thinks for itself, he must now progress and level up to protect himself against all the would be adventurers looking to plunder his depths.
8 121 - In Serial7 Chapters
Astral Attachment
#anime #urbanfantasy #magic #ecchi James lived as little more than a magical weapon of war until his awakening. The controlled him like a puppet, but he's taken control of his life and is learning to live for the first time. This world is much like ours, but magic users known as Clients are controlling major world events from behind the scene. His family, the Landos, are magical Clients and are known as one of the powerful and shadowy rulers of the planet. They usually pull the strings from behind the curtains, but that has started to change. There is an invasion of superpowered blood-sucking ghouls known as Lamia. These Lamia are master Clients as well and have set their sights on the Lando family. Follow James as he tackles magic users, falls in love, slays vampires, is tormented by terrifying monsters and is driven nearly to the depths of hell.
8 101 - In Serial15 Chapters
Mistakes Lead To Success
Mistakes were made and it led to the death of Natalie Freemen. Her soul was captured and cared for by an young god but such protection come with a cost. Instead of taking the original offer she decided to make a deal. She would rome the multiverse and steal the essence that thrives them. In return she could become a demigod. Updates at random Romance is not the focus but a major plot point. I will take suggestions and corrective criticism. *Important Note* This makes for sense as you read along. This story is created by the viewer but there is a twist. Some chapters are static, meaning that it is to propel the plot. Others have polls that will affect other chapters but without a question. This means you don't know what it effects or in which chapter. I wanted to added this effect to create a suspense, something I didn't feel as much in other reader interactive stories. Your vote could create fortune or misfortune for the main character. I know what it will effect because have a chart that tells me the possible routes. You just have to wait and see what your choice have done. I'll even write which poll effects the chapter in the authors note. Characters could die in the story and they won't be leads anymore. In comments you can ask for a detail chart for each poll but it will only be for one answer per poll. I will chose the most requested answer. I do not own the photo.
8 175 - In Serial14 Chapters
The Forgotten Valley
Fate chooses the unsuspecting to serve its whims. The gods are fading, and their old enemy emerges from the shadows. Like threads in a great tapestry, three lives are bound together to mend what the gods could not. As sparks of hatred threaten to reignite an ancient war, new alliances must be forged or the world will be consumed by darkness.
8 190

