《Corrupter of Worlds》Chapter 2 The Ultimate Being
Advertisement
Praedo stared down his supposed brother as Deus withered into black dust and entered Praedo´s chest.
"Hehe, well what now Daddy?" Praedor asked the entity with a giggle, as for being scared or confused, fuck that! he was incomparably excited! if this really was the truth, then his only purpose was to have fun!
"Praedo, you were The Destroyer but as you now have consumed The Creator, you have evolved into The ultimate being with the powers of both Creation and Destruction. this means your Entities can be modified simpler by you now in the start. but remember, you only have access to a fraction of your true strength as your soul and body can't possibly hold all your power." the entity answered with a hint of anticipation in his voice. this Praedo had immediately asked for the man in front of him without knowing he was the creator for the sole purpose of watching this big man suffer in front of him! he was truly a ruthless sadist. and as for when he found out that the entity that he had consumed was the creator and his own brother? he was even more excited and satisfied...
Praedo smiled then continued to ask "how do I get stronger? whats the limit of my Entities? what do with the planet?" the entity was pleased with his questions and swiftly replied "you get stronger by consuming Corruption energy into a Symbol of your power, which we can get back to, you have absolutely no limit to your entities. they are created through the available space after another being has been killed by either you or your entities. you can have billions upon billions of them and you can merge them together to create more powerful beings that you can modify into whatever you want. for example, you could have 1000 entities that each has the strength of 10 men each, which is the basic and least powerful of the entities. or you can merge those 1000 entities into one entity that has the strength of 10 000 men.
Advertisement
as for what your goal with the planet is? you must kill every being on the planet and convert them into your entities, then you have to cover the entire planet with your entities and use their bodies to refine the planet into a Corruption Star, then consume said star which will unlock 1% more of your true strength. remember, you have to create your symbol of power by infusing the essence of Deus onto your Spine and twirl the essence through your very being and finally create a visible symbol on a part of your body"
Praedo nodded and proceeded to close his eyes and will Deus´s essence through his spine, then through every inch of his body then finally through his soul. he then proceeded to envision his Visible Symbol of power and grinned as he recalled his favorite symbol. He started drawing the symbol on his hands with his own essence combined with what he had taken from Deus and drew a profound symbol, a symbol that transcends common logic and the laws of the universe. he drew a smiley face!
Praedo opened his eyes proud of his achievement and lifted his hand to see his handiwork, only to see that his smiley face had morphed into the most terrifying smiley face that was hyper-realistic with black tendrils surrounding it and anguished crying face emojis underneath it that were all being consumed by the tendrils. it looked like a live photo loop where the crying face emojis constantly were being consumed and the sinister smiley face was getting stronger and stronger until suddenly a large unique symbol resembling a P emerged over the smiley face.
Praedo was stunned ad he stared at that cruel scene that was playing on his hand when the Powerful entity from before spoke in his mind "I see, your mark is of consumption and destruction. this mark will get more and more profound the more Corruption energy you consume. it may even evolve into something else that will increase your strength in the future. Now that that's over, I will open up a portal to earth for you. remember, earth is the least significant world of them all."
Advertisement
Praedo grinned and nodded as he walked towards the Edge of the ship and jumped off the grid, The entity panicked as he meant to open a portal in front of him and now that Praedo had jumped off into the Void he had to quickly consume almost 25% of his power only to rip him back up from the terrifying grasp of the void.
"YOU FUCKING IDIOT! EVEN I STRUGGLE IN THAT TERRIFYING VOID AND YOU JUST JUMP OF FOR NO FUCKING REASON!" the entity raged as he stared at the sheepish Praedo.
"It seemed cool..." Praedo muttered as he couldn't help the grin on his face becoming wider,
the entity sighed as he just directly teleported the lunatic back to earth as he started deeling pity for earth, this fucking lunatic wouldnt do things swift and easy for sure...
__________________________________________________________________
Back on earth, in a small village in eastern China.
two small children were playing around in the creek next to the village as they heard a loud boom next to them, of course as young curious children, they walked up to investigate.
what they saw upon reaching the crater stunned them
"Big brother! is that a giant?" the little girl asked as she clutched the older boys arm.
"I... I don't know little ming, I have never seen such a big man! and he has such pretty silver hair!" the older boy exclaimed nervously and slowly approached the man for a closer look.
as he was merely a meter away from the man, The two children saw that the man's eyes suddenly opened and they froze as they saw the swirling darkness in them. what followed horrified them to their very core. because the man's hand which had some sort of tattoo on it started exuding some type of Golden tendrils from his pores which covered his entire hand, then arm, then eventually his whole bad. showing a creature standing at about five meters tall, with an insanely strong looking body and a face looking like something out of a nightmare, the creature smiled revealing rows of insanely sharp looking teeth.
"Seems like i can see what my Entities look like hehe" the creature giggled in a powerful dark voice. he jumped out of the crater landing with one leg each on the childrens faces. he looked down on their muched heads and complained "fuck that was too quick!" as he said that the bodies of the two children got sucked into the golden exterior og Praedo and corrupted their life force. he spat out two wrigling messes of black goo, which started forming up to reveal a similiar appearance to Praedo only completely ink black and only standing two meter long with a mouthful of sharp teeth and long grotesque looking tongues.
Praedo looked down upon his own personal race and smiled "yeah that´s baddass hahahahah, hmmm this minion race of mine will need a name...." as he observed these minions of his which only exist to obey his will he smiled as he came up yo them and said "form now on you´re race name shall be Enforcers, as you shall enforce my will on the multiverse!"
Advertisement
- In Serial38 Chapters
Beast
A threat to the galaxy has come from another, and the Union of intelligent life will go to any length to stop it. Military Quarantine has held for hundreds of thousands of cycles. Traders, merchants, colonists, and Pirates live risky lives along the fringes as the politics from the inner systems fail to see the larger threats beyond their borders. A lone human finds himself far from home with no memories to how he arrived. A failing Trade vessel plays on a desperate gamble, while a malicious parasite searches for a suitable host. ............................................. Author's note: Beast is a story that I wrote a long, long time ago. Some of you might have read it then, back when it was posted on reddit over at r/HFY. It was my first webfiction and made in the spirit of that subreddit's "genre" of humanity being awesome. But, it is also a story that has bothered me a little bit. Just like most new writers tend to do, I made mistakes and errors that feel painful to reread. A Space Opera will be a Space Opera, but I had prose that makes present-me cringe. Still, at the same time, the story is still very much a tale I've never given up on. It was my first adventure into fiction: Beast was a crazy adventure with bodysnatching aliens, galactic war, threats from across the universe... Posting this story here is a way to try and redeem myself a bit. I won't call it a complete rewrite, because it's not, but I have wanted to go through and correct some of the major issues Beast has for a long time and put it somewhere more accessible to read (instead of as posts/comments on reddit) and I figure that now is as good a time as any. Additional corrections you might notice are welcome.
8 182 - In Serial75 Chapters
(First Draft Old Version) Ruins Of Isulia ~ Book 1 : Awakening of the Emarine
My updated version has been released but this version is still getting views so I will leave it up for now. This is the old (First draft) version. Go check out my latest version. **************** Creatures once believed to be legend have invaded the kingdom of Vulkira. King Erik must overcome this crushing responsibility or let it consume his people. A haunting past eats away at the Queen of Xer. Cara is hellbent on protecting the ones she loves and the future of her kingdom. Balancing the greater good, she fights to keep her head above the waves of guilt. In a remote town, Henry, an energetic bookworm is thrust into the world as chaos engulfs his once seemingly peaceful world. His lord has a task for him, one in which will change his life forever. Wars brew, betrayal is at each corner, shadows step into the light, a supernatural force awaits the time to strike. Awakening an ancient civilization from their past may be their only hope now. A spiraling doom awaits the world of Isulia. **************** I put the gore and traumatizing warnings not because my book is overly gory. However, there are a few moments that may be traumatizing to some people. As for the gore, it shows up fairly often but not extensively. I've always loved violence in movies and books, (The Boys, Banshee, Kingdom of heaven, Vikings, etc.) I am descriptive of the scenes with gore. So be warned :) I have multiple MC and as a nooby writer, I've had a harder time writing from a female POV. Just a heads up. Don't kill me if I make the woman in my book seem weird. If you'd like to consider supporting my work, there is a link to my Patreon.
8 173 - In Serial9 Chapters
Murder Hobo Society
These are the grotesque tales of the flamboyant Murder Hobo. Kendrik is the newest member of the Murder Hobo Society. First goal? Recruit a team of semi-competent adventurers. Second goal? Kill stuff. Third? Let's not think this through too much. ------------------------- This is an Interactive Discovery Writing (IDW) work of fiction. That means that audience input helps drive the direction of the story. For this work new chapters are usually posted on Wednesdays and audience polls posted on Thursdays. Thanks for your input and interest!
8 166 - In Serial8 Chapters
The Labyrinth of Dreams
Having caught one attempted murderer and proven to the world he isn’t one himself, things are looking up for Kayden. Sure, recent revelations about his spell mean he needs to rethink his entire worldview and his future, but he’s been doing that every couple of months since getting his scholarship, so he’s had practice. From here on, it should be smooth sailing; nothing to worry about but trying to keep up in his magic lessons and not letting his smart mouth start any blood feuds with rich kids at parties. But something’s going on. The Fiore is convinced that Kayden’s a key player in a political game he wants nothing to do with, Max is openly fighting with his idol over things he won’t fully explain, and the words of prophecies past keep haunting Kayden’s dreams. Something big is coming, and to figure it out, Kayden, Max and Kylie will have to venture places that make his Initiation look like child’s play. And make a decision that will irrevocably alter all their lives.
8 169 - In Serial7 Chapters
After the Long Burn
After the longest exodus in human history, a terrible accident threatens to turn the salvation of humanity into its most desperate struggle for survival. From the ashes of calamity rises a new human story. A frustrated scientist dedicates her life to recreating the Earth in alien soil, while another is gunned down for his sin and sets off a chain of events culminating in a desperate escape across the void for an opportunity at redemption. Around a distant moon a deep space miner stumbles onto a secret, the key to which lies buried inside his own tortured mind. After the Long Burn is an anthology of short science fiction stories set in the distant Ionad System. Author's Note: I thought I might try something a little different with this story. Rather than one story, it is six stories of varying length, each taking a slightly different perspective to tell a larger story. Some are more actioney, others more cerebral but I hope there will be something for everyone. Stories over 7000 words, with the exception of the titular After the Long Burn, will be published in two parts. I anticipate an upload schedule of one part every other day.
8 199 - In Serial13 Chapters
Children of The Sky: Heartcore
In the realm of Yggdrasil, there exist nine worlds. Each and every world has unique stories to tell, but there was one that stood out--The Floating World of Speir. In the land of Speir, the impossible does not exist; this world has given birth to thousands, if not hundreds of thousands of tales, fables, and legends. The fight for the fate of the world is a common occurrence and the neverending stories of the people which reside in it were all, by itself, always unique and interesting. Now, after many aeons have passed, the world has changed. Not only the power of magic could shape reality, technology also has the ability to change the world with just a thought. And from the world where futuristic technology meets magic, I have chosen to tell you a story, a story picked from countless others. This is the story of a boy who recently entered the prestigious, and the most powerful academy in all of the nine worlds--Yggdrasil Academy, to fufill his dream. What is his dream, you might ask. Well, allow me to show you the life of Reynard Foxtale, one of The Children of The Sky. *Warning. For those who don't like lengthy explanations or long talks, this might not suit your taste. However, the setting of my story does not adhere to most of the main stream fantasy/sci-fi settings. So, you might find my ideas unique or a little too weird and complicated or both. Whatever opinions you might have, I truly thank all of you who are willing to spend your time to read my story. *The cover (which is a picture I do not own) is not in any way an accurate depiction of the world in the story. P/S I will post this story on FictionPress as well. P/P/S I'm relatively new to this website, so if I made any obvious (to regulars) mistakes, please tell me. P/P/P/S Will update every two weeks. *Important: In Hiatus for now. **13/7/2017 Update. Check chapter nine (and maybe ten) post-chapter note.
8 155