《BREAKING POINT AWAKENING》Chapter 11 ~ Being an Adventurer in a Replica Body
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Chapter 11 ~ Being an Adventurer in a Replica Body
Since I've used the Dragon Lineage skill, I am in a coma right now. I'm now using an artificial body. In this state, I'm an Immortal. Only Eleina knows that I'm wandering around using my new vessel. Yoshino and Myuser are not leaving my body alone. To be exact, My original body is my weakness, also if I take too much damage on this vessel. It will disappear or my original body will be damage.
This world contains 4 continents and we're here on the Human continent. It has 7 Massive cities and I'm currently in the HERO city. I'm planning on Adventuring for a while now. So I leave IVIS to guard Yoshino while Eleina will be the one to protect Myuser. In my last fight, I discovered for myself that, I'm still a lot weaker. I become cocky because we just mowed down The 1st grade of the Academy, But I didn't know that there are more dragons among dragons lurking in this world. Not to mention, only a low amount of people surpassed the ability of an OUTSIDE monster.
Outside Monsters are from the 3rd Continent. They far surpassed Humans when it comes to growth and the ability from born.
I'm thinking of being an Adventurer and I start my journey to Historia City. My body and faced are only a replica of my original self. So, I need to go outside to make sure no one will recognize me. I became famous for fending off a Member of the Dark Oath Guild in the academy.
For my best preparation; I made a new shadow skill. It covers my whole body and makes a masked that just looks like my old one. The 2 colors on it glow and I'm covered in shadow with some overflowing effect, I look like some badass anime character. I just called it [Phantom mode] or [Phantom], Without the phantom abilities, this is Actually Impossible. For my weapon, I can made it using shadows too. It has some overflowing effect that looks cool. The sharpness is pair in Eleina sword form, But a little bit weaker when it comes to Mana forge. I guess Eleina is the best weapon for me after all.
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Before I leave, I visit my body and saw Yoshino sleeping beside it. It's kinda hard for me. But if I didn't become strong, I feared that I can't protect her next time. My heart feels light that we reunite once again that's why I going to take some experience outside while My body is in a coma. Also, She is the target of the Dark Guild for some reason. I hope Ivis can protect her.
So I finally reached Historia city. It's a good city. But, I saw someone abusing a SLAVE! Hero city doesn't have slaves but this country is different. I hold off my temper and head to the Adventure Guild. I didn't think that I will be able to visit an Adventure Guild, which I have always seen in Anime and Mangas. I approached the receptionist.
"Excuse me? Where I can register? I'm going to apply."
The receptionist looks at me and said;
"We're not accepting applicants that will just be going to suicide."
She becomes disrespectful after seeing my appearance. I'm kinda pissed off in this type of scene. Then 2 adventurer approaches me. I feel chill in my spines because of what happens in the academy. You shouldn't be let your guard down even if you feel that you are already strong.
"Hey newbie, you should just become a merchant."
"Sorry. But I wanted to become an adventurer, sir." I talk politely of course.
"You are really draining my patience. I should just let you experience how hard being an Adventurer."
They become arrogant even I talk politely to them. The receptionist also tell to the 2 Adventurer that they should hold back.
"Kid, That 2 Man are C rank. So just follow what they said."
The receptionist persuades me and I'm already pissed so guess what happened.
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"I-WANT-TO-BE-AN-ADVENTURER!" High tone voice.
"You really don't know when to retreat huh!"
One of them throws a Punch that is imbued with Magic.
I became serious and On my [Phantom mode]. Then, Block the punch and release a massive Hex. I really look cool!.
"Now! Could you let me applied? I'm kinda pissed off now!"
The 2 arrogant Adventurers pee on their shorts. While the receptionist's face looks like faced some demons.
"Y-yes, sir. J-just fill put this form and then test your magic attributes here."
"Thank you. Also, I hate when someone judges others by their appearance."
"Y-yes, sir!"
The receptionist that assist me has been changed and test my element.
"You have fire attributes, sir. And 8-897200 Thousand Hex."
She's quite shock, well I don't have a reason to hide my potential. I forgot to turn off the [Phantom mode] Maybe that's the reason why the receptionist is uneasy around me, I really look menacing after all.
"You don't need to be cautious. I'm just a Kid I will not eat you."
"I'm sorry sir. Your really strong that's why I feel unease."
"Oh... Ok."
"This is your Guild Card, Your current rank is E. It's supposed to be F but you have the outstanding ability. You can only take Quest one higher than you. Make sure to take care of the card it will cost 1 Gold coin to reissue it."
"Thank You."
And so I leave the Adventure guild and find an Inn to stay for the night. The currency here is 100 copper coins for one 1 silver coin, 100 silver coins for 1 Gold coin, 100 Gold coins for 1 Diamond. The inn only cost 3 Copper per night.
This life might be interesting. I'm looking forward to it!
-To be Continued....
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