《Jormungandr's calamity》Book 1: Chapter 28 : Is that my Palace ?
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While we were on Dugtrio,
Breno began to sing, "The young master has come, under the reign of the young master hell will become stronger. Long live the young master, long live the young master!"
I started to look at Breno strangely indeed the latter was crazy but it wasn't that that made me look at him like that but what he had just done. Indeed the last cry he had just uttered had split the sky. He didn't live for millions of years for anything. Beneath that silly persona was a real monster.
As I was looking at him Breno turned around and said, "So you're in a hurry?"
I said "Why will I be in hurry?"
"A hurry to see your palace. "
Speaking of palace, I had to find out about it.
So I asked him, "Breno, can you tell me what this one looks like?"
He smiled at me and said, "Of course not, I can't spoil the surprise for you, but there's one thing I can tell you and that's that it's majestic. "
So I lowered my head and waited because I knew I couldn't convince him. Let's just hope this place is as beautiful as he says it is.
"May I ask how long it will take us to get there?"
Breno says, "We'll be there in about 10 minutes. In the meantime, do what you want to do to pass the time. "
In that short time, I began to review all the abilities I had. So I could use the air of the underworld to make myself stronger or to poison my enemies, but I still haven't tested the capabilities of my poison on them.
Then I have the form I call Full Power that boosts all my abilities but if I use this ability for too long my body will start to destroy itself.
Finally, I have the little black holes but I don't know how to use them to attack or move around. I think I still have new abilities but I don't know how to use them.
Suddenly Breno started to shake me and shouted, "Here's your palace!"
I was shocked by what I saw. Not because my palace was grandiose but because I wondered if it could be called a palace. In order to understand, I will describe what was standing in front of me.
There was a shed about 8 meters long and 5 meters wide but the most shocking thing was the condition of the shed. The latter was pierced by a tree trunk and just looking at the black wood that made up the hut one had the impression of having one's soul sucked out.
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It was everything but a place to reside because there was an unhealthy atmosphere surrounding it.
Breno jumped out of Dugtrio and said, "Then your palace pleases you. "
Seeing the smile on his face, he was expecting a positive response, but that's not what I was going to give him. Without even paying attention to him, I started to get off Dugtrio and contrary to what he thought I took the opposite path and started to move away from that shed.
But as I was getting further and further away,
Breno, who was just smiling, suddenly stopped smiling and with a voice that seemed to come from the bowels of the planet he said,
"What are you doing?"
I didn't know why, but I felt as if something had been placed under my throat, and as I turned around and walked towards the hut, I stopped. If I do that, I'll be ashamed of myself.
So I stopped moving and told him in the loudest voice I could use,
"I'm sleeping outside, and under no circumstances will I go in that cabin. "
As I said this I started crawling again but suddenly a huge laugh appeared behind me. I turned around and I could see Breno laughing but I could also see that the aura around him had changed.
Indeed he who normally had a happy and festive atmosphere around him was replaced by an aura of death and he who was normally white turned to black. Finally, his transformation stopped and a new Breno was standing in front of me and what amazed me was that even Dugtrio moved away from him.
He started screaming, "I'm free, free, free, FREE. "
I was astonished by what was in front of me and I knew that in no way was it Breno. This strange person then started looking around and finally, he came across me. He did something I hadn't imagined.
He got down on his knees and said, "Thank you, thanks to your help I was able to see the light. "
What do you mean, see the light of day? So who was this strange person?
Just as I was about to start talking he started shaking again. "No, I refuse, I've just seen the light of day again. I don't want to go back to that dark place. "
But no matter how much he screamed, little by little he went back to being white. As his body was about to become completely white,
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he looked at me and said, "Little one, I have only one thing to tell you, beware of Satan and Breno, they are the worst monsters that exist in this world. To help you I'm going to give you this. "
He snapped his fingers and made a feather appear in his last. He took it and threw it at me. The feather went into my skull without causing me any pain and disappeared. Now the real Breno was back. I had too many questions I was asking myself:
-The message that was left for me and the entity that possessed me.
-The beings that give me strength from the moon.
-The conflict between the creator and Satan.
And now there was the problem of Breno and Satan. I still had some, but these four questions were the most important.
Breno started looking at me strangely, "What happened during my brief absence?"
I looked at him and said, "Nothing, you just changed colors and you're back to normal. "
"Okay, but now we're going to get into the shed whether you like it or not. "
He rushed towards me but I tried to run away because it was all suspicious. But it caught up with me and I don't know what it did to my body, but I couldn't move it anymore.
So we headed for the shed. If there was one emotion to describe my present state, it would be fear.
As I entered the cabin I felt like something was constantly watching me. I was now in the middle of a circle made of ashes and when I asked what Breno was going to do I was shocked by his answer,
"What am I going to do? Very simply, I will absorb your blood and become the true master of the underworld. "
"How can you do this?"
He scratched his head and said, "I do it so I can get stronger. Now stay calm and let me complete the ritual. "
I saw Breno drawing on the floor and I started to hate myself indeed, this was the second time I was betrayed and it seemed that I was just a chess piece for Satan.
When will my fate be mine? Without knowing it, my pupils, which were vertical, were beginning to become round.
Breno looked at the drawings he'd just done and said, "Well, it's all over. I don't have to give you any more pain. "
So he began to move towards me and instead of fear invading me, all I felt was hatred. So I began to look at him with a look full of hatred.
"You can hate me as much as you want, but it won't change what happens next. Only the mighty can control his destiny. "
So he swung his claws at me and sliced me. Little by little I began to bleed out. Now I felt I no longer possessed an ounce of Satan's blood.
"Thank you, now you can die. "
He tried to dig his claws into my body a second time except a protective aura appeared around me. Breno was astonished by what was happening and I began to look at him and he was shocked that my eyes had been replaced by moons.
Suddenly a voice that seemed to be from the beginning of the world resounded "Portal". . .
A portal began to open beneath my body and absorb me.
Seeing this Breno shouted "No you can't run away"
He started to cut the sphere that protected me but nothing could break it. Just before disappearing,
I said to him "You and Satan I will kill you".
I then fell unconscious and when I opened my eyes I found myself in a forest. I started to feel my body, I had lost the bloodline of Satan but I had kept the powers of Shaman so I will no longer be attacked by the places of the creator but where am I and while I was wondering.
I heard people suddenly talking, the sound suddenly came closer and I saw two humans in front of me. A young man and a girl.
Humans?
The young man says, "Clea looks at a snake and it seems to possess a spirit. By using his blood we can make pills. "
Clea said "Great idea Yun"
So as I had just appeared in this new world two humans attacked me.
It's the end of the first arc of the first book we begin the second arc which is called Human Land. The latter will last about 50 chapters or less or more and will mark the end of the first book.
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