《The Time Breaker》a new start. Maybe?
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Atli heard the words that Calamity said, and he started going into panic mode he started screaming meanwhile he thought in his head no no this isn’t how my adventure was supposed to go why did it come to this what did I do wrong. While Atli was thinking this Gelmute started moving towards him but Atli was in panic mode se he didn’t pay him any attention then suddenly Gelmute grabbed the lower jaw of Atli, Atli finally came out of his panic mode and stopped screaming he just waited for Gelmute to do something and Gelmute did something. Atli heard a crunching sound and then felt a big sting in his lower jaw when he opened his eyes, he just saw that Gelmute broke Atlis lower jaw it hurt so much Atli tried to scream but couldn’t because Calamity went behind his and put a rag over his mouth se he wouldn’t be so loud. Then Gesume walked a little closer to Atli and put his right leg up and then as quickly as he could he stepped on Atlis balls crushing them, Atli screamed thru the cloth. Then Calamity pulled out a rusted silver spoon and put Atlis head to lean backwards then Calamity took the spoon and put it quickly into one of Atlis eye socket and pulled out his eye while she was doing that she was blushing and laughing at the screams Atli made no they were all laughing at Atli how pathetic he was. Atli was barely able to stay conscious but he didn’t know if it was good or not but he needed to stop this he can’t endure this every day, every minute, every second then he got an idea what if he just gave them his power he’s in this mess because of it but if he would gave it to them what would happen to him would they just kill him or keep him as their human pet he didn’t know he was confused then he snapped back and saw that they wanted to do something else to him he just closed his eyes and stopped thinking. Gelmute grabbed Atlis left arm and moved his eyes to the hand then he just started twisting and breaking Atlis fingers. After all his fingers were twisted Gelmute moved to hos right hand but before breaking Atlis fingers again he looked at him with a big smile on his face, but that smile didn’t last long because Atli passed out from the pain. Gelmutes face turned from a smile to a scowl. Then Gelmute just started hitting Atli with his fists he punched as hard as he could breaking some of Atlis ribs. Gelmute was done punching and out of breath he took a few steps back and looked at Atli again and just started laughing. Gelmute was still laughing and just said “look at him that baby pissed his pants” then Gesume and Calamity laughed too they were all giggling for a good minute but then all their expressions went to normal again almost instantly then Gesume started speaking “okay this was fun, but he can’t go long like this so Calamity heal him” after he said that Gesume and Gelmute walked out of the room transformed.
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Atli slowly opened his eyes and noticed that nothing was hurting anymore but that was the only moment of happiness he would get in here. Then he looked up and saw it his nightmare it was Calamity, and she was holding a cage and in that cage was a rat then before he could react, she walked up to him and smacked him so hard she knocked him out. Atli was conscious again and sensed something hot on his belly but also a lot of pain then he opened his eyes and saw Calamity blushing and she also had the biggest grin he ever saw. Calamity noticed that Atli woke up and said in a crazed voice “hey Atli we are starting you torture journey with my personal favorite” then she looked at his belly and Atli also looked “the rat torture” Atli was horrified he saw a cage and in that cage was a rat and that rat was digging into his belly then suddenly all at once the pain finally hit him it was bad and he couldn’t do anything he was tied up on a wooden table he could only struggle but the rope seemed that it wouldn’t budge he could only bear the pain. He could feel everything the rat crawled inside him he could feel it running inside him eating his organs and trying to get out and then finally the rope loosened. Atli fell from the table onto the hard rock floor there was some pain involved but it wasn’t as painful as the rat torture. When he fell his intestines spilled all over the floor and Atli was horrified then he looked at Calamity and he was even more horrified it looked like she was enjoying the show and that was the last straw for him he just passed out from the pain and the horrific display in front of him.
Atli woke up again and it was almost the same as before he was completely healed up and Calamity was in front of him again but there were Gelmute and Gesume behind her, but it wasn’t the rat torture today it was even worse but that’s only the start they did all sort of horrible things like: the blood eagle, the rack, the thumb screw, dunking, the boot, the breaking wheel, flayling and more. After about a month of more torturing Atli was almost broken he was just a husk he didn’t even register the pain he didn’t even scream anymore the jus started into nothingness but there was still the thought in the back of his mind that he might get out of there he might survive but after about another week of torture he was just wishing for death in his mind there was just death on his mind the same word over and over again. One day they just healed him and walked off they said they needed to take care of some business and that they would play with him later he saw his opportunity he saw a knife on the table next to him he could take his life it would be the best option he would get out of this misery and, they wouldn’t get his power. He smiled a little and started reaching for the knife he was almost holding it but then someone smacked his hand he thought it was one of the demon lord generals he thought that he missed his opportunity but then he looked up Atli thought he would see Calamity or Gelmute or Gesume but no he couldn’t see anything just the same room as always he thought that that was weird but then he heard someone speak into his ear “hey I know your down bad. How about we make a deal?” Atli got spooked a little but he wasn’t surprised he honestly didn’t care anymore so he just replied:
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“sure”
“great then let me introduce myself.”
Atli couldn’t see anything but then he regained his vision, and he was in a different room he looked around and it was beautiful the walls were probably dark wood with red details, paintings on the wall and in front of him a table a nice table. On the table was wine glass filled with wine and then there were flowers in the center of the table, but the weirdest thing was the plate in front of him which was snow white but Atli didn’t pay it any attention and just looked in front of him. There was sitting a young boy who looked like he was probably about twelve he was wearing a black suit. Atli thought he looked kinda funny, but he didn’t care in the moment, so he just said to the boy:
“so, you are the one who spoke to me?”
“yes, that’s me Fenriz Salem Nephthys one of the archdevil spirits.”
“okay so what’s an archdevil spirit anyway?”
“are you dumb and archdevil is one of the strongest species but there are two types of archdevils first ones are just archdevils they are less strong than archdevil spirits, but they have a physical body and arch devil spirits are more stronger nut we don’t posses a physical body so all we can do are illusion like this to try to posses humans and other species. But you’re in luck my friend today I was feeling bored, so I was just looking for some humans to posses and then saw you man it was fun watching you get tortured. Anyways I will give you my power and just let me watch from your point of view.”
“that’s all or are they some other downsides.”
“oh yeah I almost forgot there are two the first one is that there is a high chance that you will die but as I saw your cries for help you wouldn’t mind and the other one is that you will be in hell and unfortunately you will need to climb your way out of it so that’s all is it a deal or not?
“ok you have a deal I don’t mind crawling my way out of hell but there’s one thing how do I use my magic.”
“let’s see you have affinity for dark magic like I so you will get all of my magic so the only thing you will need to do is to tell the spell in your head and then extend your arm and it should work. And for your time magic I have no clue I think one of the demon generals know how it works and lucky for you he has a castle in hell so you can visit him if you will survive”
“ok then let’s get this contract started what should I do.”
“you see the rose in front of you drip some of your blood on it that is all you will need to do on your part I’ll take care of the rest.”
Atli just replied with a nod and then followed Fenrizeses instructions and then he tossed the white rose now stained with his blood to Fenriz. Frenzes catched it and then disappeared. After about an hour Ali suddenly started feeling dizzy and passed out.
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