《Reincarnation at the Naruto World》Chapter 1: Error?
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POV: Zagan
So as I was born,My mother whom apparently was an Uzumaki clan member died after giving birth to me. Why? Well apparently her vitality is very low because she was sick, So giving birth to me successfully is already a miracle. I also found out that Fugaku is my distant uncle his actually a cousin of my father and he's too young right now.
That aside,Right now I'm nothing more than a baby and I can't even do anything aside from doing some Chakra control with my Shadow clones training in my Mindscape. During the last training I actually struggle to see my Stats.
"System are you there how can I check my Stats?" But at that moment this something actually shock me the most
[Oy brat try to say -Status- via talking or think of it]
"Wtf! Who are you?! Your not the system, How come you can talk fluently?" I was really surprised the moment I heard his voice.
[About time to know.. Who else can I be? I'm God, That system is just a device to make sure reincarnator can enjoy their life through the usage of FP and your FP is apparently an error. So to have balance in the cycle of the Reincarnation your expected to do some quest for me kid. Now why don't you check your Status.]
The actual fuck. I thought I could have a headstart and dominate this world..
Well here goes nothing "Status!" I said it through my mind and the results..
Name: Zagan Uchiha
Age: 3 weeks old (17)
Affinity Mastery:
Lightning: 70%
Fire: 60%
Wind: 60%
Affinity:
Lightning,Fire,Wind
Natural Talent:
X10 Chakra Control, X10 Chakra Reserve, Unbreakable Mind, Mindscape, Steal
Skills:
Devil Fruit:
•Ope Ope No Mi
Haki:
🔒Kenbunshoku Haki
🔒Busoshoku Haki
🔒Haoshoku Haki
Zanpakutō (Asauchi) LV 1
•Soul Energy (0/10)
Doujutsu:
🔒Rinnengan
🔒Eternal Mangekyo Sharingan
🔒Mangekyo Sharingan
✓3 Tomoe Sharingan
This actually made me rage and said
"HEY WHAT HAPPENED TO THE FP POINTS I JUST INVEST TO MY SKILLS?"
Like why? When I actually thought that I can enjoy my life here without hardships, This made me feel like creating a new character to play my favorite video game where I always grind.. but the situation is different if I can't use this skills then I'll have to get strong from scratch.
[Hey you should be thankful you know? Your punishment is supposed to be is returning your in your orginial world as a baby again not being able to Reincarnate if you die and this little punishment might actually help you enjoy more of your life though hardships. Oh and you also have a Forced Quest]
"What?! You fucking serious?"
[New Forced Quest!
Mission: Rule the Shinobi World
Note:
To make things exciting, God has force your Mangekyo Sharingan to revert into a Three Tomoe Sharingan to make things more fun
and your Haki are sealed and can only be unlocked in certain requirements.
Duration:30 Years
Penalty:
Host is force to return to his original world as an infant forbidden to Reincarnate and is sent to Hell endure eternal punishment of burning.
Reward:
Permission to Reincarnate again if Host died.
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-God (Kami)
]
"Oy Kami-sama is the only way?" I said regretting the fact that I have to go through Hardships..
[Yeah sorry kid, You'll have to deal with it]
"Oy oy, are you serious?! Answer me!"
I shouted in rage
"DAMN IT ALL!!"
After 4 years
I've been practicing All Martial Arts I know from Earth from the previous world.. Considering that I can finally use it here I began to train it once again to master it, And this is where Unbreakable Mind comes in, I can actually watch my previous memory in my Mindscape that's why I was able to still practice it. My only problem is my appearance is actually a little similar with Sasuke except with the longer hair with bangs in the middle and white ,and during this days I started training with my father with Shuriken and kunai and I also started attending the Ninja Academy.
The thing is.. my appearance seem to be really eye-catching..
POV: 3RD PERSON
There's a flock of girls near Zagan but they didn't try to get near him because their afraid it might anger him considering that he likes to be alone "Look it's Zagan-kun he's so dreamy! Hiyah" said by one of the girls.
And after that some group of bullies notice it and then"Oy teme! You think your cool just because girls flock on you? I'll show you who's the boss here" Said by this big fat kid.
While Zagan just walk past through them
,The girls laugh because of how they were treated just like air.
POV: Zagan
"Oy Perry I think he needs a lesson" said by thin guy with the fatass who's ticked just because I didn't gave them attention which made them look some dumbasses.
Then suddenly someone just threw a rock on Zagan and he immediately grab the one from behind and throw one of the incoming rocks leading to a domino effect hitting all the incoming other rocks.
"Oy would you please shut up and mind your own business I'm touring the academy here" I said in a intimidating tone, seriously why would my luck be really unlucky, Other bullies just attack me because girls are talking about me.. like come on.
And the bullies got scared for a second and they decide to attack me with numbers but unfortunately they lack taijutsu training.
"Tsk!Dumb monkeys.."
I said because of their stupid thinking. After beating up this bullies they apologize and won't do it again.I finnaly found my room now it's time for the class session.When I open my door countless eyes where landed on me.I even saw Obito, Rin, Guy, Kakashi, Anko, Kurenai, Asuma, Yugao. Hah this might be another problem again.. I sitted on the top left window seat.
POV: Kakashi
So this guy is the Uchiha Genuis huh? I hope he's not like Obito, Who always shouts on being Hokage.
POV: Rin
Eh at First glance you can see that this guy is unapproachable he seems to be hate it when peopl are trying to get close to him
POV: Obito
Ohh so he's the guy, From what I learned he's the Genuis of our clan but from the looks of it he looks more arrogant than Kakashi, and Kakashi might even be better than him.
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POV: 3RD PERSON
"White hair, pale skin, long eyelashes, thick eyebrows but not as thick as Guy's, his appearance is perfect, he must be Zagan Uchiha, Why did he only go to class today, From what I heard he's the Genuis of the Uchiha clan born with already the Sharingan." Anko said
"Ehh so is Anko-chan also a fangirl of Zagan?" Said by Yugao
"Ehh well um... Jeez shutup Yuu-chan" said by Anko
"But you've gotta admit he's handsome.." said by Kurenai.
And the three nodded and went silent seeming to come into an agreement.
"Alright kids! Settle down today we'll have Taijutsu class. Alright gather a line now we'll go to the arena" said by the teacher who barged in.
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Arena
"Alright let's have a Taijutsu match between all of you, Winner would be excempted in the next paper test!" Said by the teacher
POV: Zagan
Wait there's even Paper test in here?
And after some time I was next and my opponent was Reiji Kuro he's probably just a side character.
"Oh White haired genuis I hope you won't disappoint me" Said by this cocky guy.
While I have expressionless face and said "Uh can we just fight already less talk more fight."And the teacher said
"Alright begin!!"
From the start I knew my opponent wasn't a match for me so I just rush into his back and made him unconscious.
The other students were surprise on how fast I am and the teacher..
POV: Teacher
I didn't expect this Uchiha will be this good so thats why Lord Hokage to watch over this kid he might even be a better Ninja in the future.. such potential..
POV: Zagan
"Ahh sensei?! We're done right?"
I ask because this dude just got shocked on how fast I am. Hmm there's probably only Kakashi who could be a match for me
After some time, Me and Kakashi were the Last fighter and it actually made me excited on how would he deal with me and in this match we we're allowed to use kunai only.
"Begin!" Shouted by the Teacher
I rushed in doing a Left jab followed by a right jab and did a tornado kick. This surprised me that the Shinobi wolrds Taijutsu is really more good than just Earth's Martial Arts I've learned.
After that he blocked my kick with both of his arms in mid air I spin again to follow up with a Left kick and he got hit by it. But for that he was able to hit me too in the chest making as both fly back..
"Ehh your good" I said with a smiling face
"Your not so bad either, I didn't believe that your good with Taijutsu" said by Kid Kakashi
This actually made me sad that their treating this Martial Arts I've learned as Taijutsu it made me feel like Cheating but if I fought with a Real Taijutsu Expert such as the Grown-up Guy, I'll lose no doubt.
"Let's finish this'" said by Kakashi
And I only nodded
Then I rush in once again with this time with a kunai same with him and I actually use the kunai in my Right hand like a Tonfas not really a Tonfas but the way I move is like using a Tonfas except with the use of fingers how? Well remember that there's a hole in the Kunai I switch with Tonfas fighting style to Short knife fighting style from the Martial Arts school from Earth and my own Style of using a Kunai where I drop the Kunai mid air and try to eyepoke Kakashi and use the dropping Kunai as distraction and as I thrust my finger through the Kunai's hole to eyepoke him he immediately use a body replacement technique and throw a Kunai at me then as he hit me I also used Body Replacement Technique and I won by appearing after Kakashi's back with a Kunai on his neck ready to slash.
"I won" I said and he was a little dissapointed that he actually lost to someone thinking that he needs to train more and I said "Hey Kakashi do you mind if we spar sometimes? I feel like we can learn from one another" As I said that he was actually surprised thinking that I would be bragging because I broke his winstreak.
"What really? Umm sure?" Said by Kakashi,And I followed up with a
"Great dude we're friends now alright lets Meetup after class outside the academy." as I said with a smile, And his reply was
"Um sure.."
After classes we meetup and I was a little late.
"Your late Mr. Showoff" said by Kakashi.
"Ehh since when did I became a Showoff? Just so you know I'm the most Low-key person you'll probably know!" I said as I disagree then Kakashi sighted and point his left side with his right fingers then
"Hiyah! It's Zagan-kun he actually looked at me!" I immediately said to Kakashi
"Damn it your right.." then Kakashi laughed and said "I'm Zagan Uchiha the most Low-key person in Hidden Leaf Village. Dude just so you know your appearance is very eye catching Haha" he said in a mocking tone. Then I said "Hey! Just so you know I'm trying to be low-key as much as possible you know!" And we both laughed as we arrive in Ichiraku Ramen.
"Today's my treat alright I actually enjoyed hanging out with you than those other kids you know?" I said in all honesty, Because out of all Kids I feel like me and Kakashi are the only matured ones then I heard from my back .
"Oh Kakashi.. and Zagan?" Said by Obito and Rin in unison. Then I said "Oh it's you guys Kakashi's been also telling stories about you guys too" I said with a smile and ask them "Oh and by the way the treats on me tonight you two can join".
After that I became friends with Obito,Kakashi, and Rin and said while watching the moon."I can't believe that I'm really having more fun than what I anticipated to.."Being born in Kakashi's generation might not be bad after all..
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