《Surpassed the Gods》Chapter 1: The being
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Opening his eyes from a short slumber, Chu Chu was thinking on what to do. He, who is unkown from the rest of the living beings out there in the other realms is bored. Chu Chu suddenly stood up looking at the lower realms below his feet, thinking to himself if he should descend or to stay. Once he leaves his cultivation will be temporarily sealed, unless he decides to break it using his power. His power can't be contained or sealed for long, at most, it will only be sealed for six monthts to two years.
Suddenly, Chu Chu took a mirror from his space and look at his current appearance. After observing the immortals and mortals below him, he learned what beauty is. Chu Chu thought to himself, "ai ai I might need to cover my face, even this so called 'goddess of beauty' is considered nothing when compared to me."
Putting the mask on, his appearance that not even hundred millions goddesses of beauty cannot compared to suddenly disappeared revealing a simple blank ordinarily looking mask. Suddenly, he used his fingers and created a ripple leading to the mortal world.
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Descending slowly from the clouds gathered below his feet, he thought to himself "hmm.. this world is too small, maybe I should have went to the primordial realm or maybe perhaps the god realm? ah who cares!"
Landing on a cliff near the ocean, Chu Chu looked around noticing that he creatied a massive hole beneath him. "EHHHHHHHH! I thought that all my power and strength is sealed... Looks like a really tiny portion of it is still leaking out.. good thing no one is here! haha!"
Opening his space, Chu Chu took a pill that he created and swallowed it. Walking continuously in a straight line for 12 hours, he found a kingdom nearby, suddenly he ran as fast as he could to get there. Near the gates, he found a group soldiers whos' cultivation level is uknown to him, he was still new to this realm so he calmly asked, "Greetings brothers and seniors, but may I know what is this place?"
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The soldiers looked at him and asked, "Ai ai, are you new to Fenghuang Empire?"
"Indeed I am Brothers and Seniors"
The leader took a glance at him, "hmm.. you don't seem to be lying so I will give you a free entrance fee just for today!"
"Thank you Seniors and Brothers!"
As he slowly made his way inside the Fenghuang Empire, he was mesmerised of the the houses and buildings, it was his first time seeing these things. His heart palpated, feeling overwhelmed.
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In the primordial realm, the primordial beings were slowling discussing the events that occured in one of the mortal realms.
"Did you all feel that ominous power from one of the mortal realms?"
"which one? we're not responsible for those lowly puny little things." commented by a young handsomely loooking man.
"The one that gave me extreme fear, I can feel that it can destroy this realm with just one touch."
"old man, you're thinking too far, how can those gods, immortals, and mortals goes against us? We're on top of them without them knowing anything." replied by a pretty female being.
"haha, old man you should retire and give me your position" says a middle aged looking man.
"haha, even though I can feel only a tiny portion of it, perhaps not even a speck of dust, it is very very dangerous. You all should be careful and inspect the realms below."
"tsk, fine old man" replied by all the primordial beings.
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Chu Chu was currently walking around when he saw an inn, entering the inn, he saw a beautiful female who's currently talking to the innkeeper. He was mesmerised, but the lady felt a hard pressure pressing on her back, she turned around and saw a man with a mask. The innkeeper was looking at her body whole heartedly, but when she turned around he was angered. He looked at the man and yelled, "Why are you here you peasant looking man?!"
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Chu Chu was of course appaled, his clothing can be considered high quality, he cut space itself, creating a full set of clothes using a space sheet. Yet this man, yelled at him and called him a peasant, Chu Chu was of course not angered, he cannot lower himself to these mortals, not even the primordial beings can be considered something to him. The beautiful lady walked up to him, and asked calmly "May I know your name?"
"Hello Beautiful, a 'toppling country beauty' my name is Chu Chu, and what about yours?"
"My name is Liu Ting"
Suddenly, before he can react Chu Chu was hit on the stomach resulting for him breaking the wall of the inn. Chu Chu coughed out a mouthfull of blood, Liu Ting looked at him and slowly said "Never looked at me again."
He regretted sealing his power completely, without having his power means he will trasform into a mortal unless his power is unleashed. Even a a very tiny of portion of his power can save his life and give him the strength and power of an annihilator who can kill thousands of primordial beings. But the pill is currently in effect and will end in after 12 hours, slowly his sight vanishes and fell in deep sleep. Liu Ting looked at him and carried him back to her requested room.
Looking at Chu Chu, the innkeeper laughed inside, "You fool peasant, you looked at the young mistress of the Liu Family and dared to have malicious thoughts without excuses, haha."
Inside the room, Liu Ting was looking at the man before her slowly taking off the mask-
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