《The Echelon Tower》1 - Space of White
Advertisement
…
While something extraordinary was happening outside, Jonathan was being teleported to an unknow destination, oblivious to everything.
A white diagram had appeared and shined its light on Jonathan, who then sensed a strong distortion. Each minute passed like days and his body seemed to have turned into slime while his vision was extremely blurry.
It felt like he had taken some crazy mix of drugs to the point that he wanted to vomit.
Thankfully, everything eventually went back to normal.
After that weird event, he was back in the same white space with the same inability to move, however, one element had changed.
There were now about five thousand people around him. They too stayed immobile, all looking towards the same direction.
From the corner of his eyes, Jonathan recognized a familiar figure.
‘Steph!’Although he had wanted to say that no words came out. In fact, his mouth couldn’t move at all. It was if his body and mind had been completely disconnected.
If his body could react, he would be sweating bullets. After all the feeling of essentially being a paralyzed cripple was terrifying.
[Attention.]
A monotone, almost robotic voice resounded through the white space.
Suddenly a globe of blinding light appeared. Although Jonathan would have liked to close his eyes, he couldn’t do so.
Thankfully, the light soon dimmed down, leaving only a golden globe of light in front of the group of humans.
[Greeting, Earth’s humans. My name Is System, and you can address me as such when you are authorized. Do not fear, your body is not truly paralyzed. This is simply a measure of crowd control. When the transition will be complete, you will all regain your former level of control over your body.]
The globe of light paused its speech, as if it was waiting for the people here to nod their heads in agreement.
Everything had happened very fast, leaving Jonathan in somewhat of a daze. However, the bit that he could understand shocked him.
Advertisement
‘The phantasm has the ability to block out all communication between the brain and the body? They had previously said that this was only partial to make sure that people would feel if something dangerous had happened in the real word. But it seems as if somebody could be having a heart attack and not know about it.’
This thought made Jonathan doubt the situation a lot. As a person who preferred taking the initiative in everything, refusing to be under any level of rule from another person, this reality pissed him off.
[I imagine many of you have your questions, so I will establish your situation for you. All of you, along the rest of humanity, is being transferred to another world. Even those without the Phantasm are included in this transition through special means, as you will certainly be able to observe soon. The purpose of this transfer is not disclosed as you will discover it yourselves. As for the matter of the Phantasm is but a trick or a scam in your terms. The Phantasm and RealVision are only tools to start the process of the transfer and are in no other way connected to these events. Now, you will be authorized to ask questions. To ask a question, simply think, “System my question is: insert questions here.” I will only answer each of you once. Proceed to questioning.]
‘A question? And one per person? What the hell is this…’ Jonathan was confused by this, so he proceeded to do what he always does in an unforeseen situation. See and analyze.
“Where are we?”
Jonathan heard a man ask out loud not too far from him. The man could easily move his facial features as if he was normally talking, but his body was still frozen in place.
Jonathan recognized this man, who was the science teacher in grade 12 at his school.
Advertisement
[Answering. This a waiting area till the transition is complete.]
“What kind of transitioning is this?” It was now a female voice that spoke out loud. It seems to be boosted by something, making it easily hearable from far.
[Answering. This transitioning is essentially a teleportation, with a few variances added.]
“What are those variances?”
Although the questioned followed up as if it was by a single person, it was truly different people asking questions. In fact, it seemed like “System” was cherry picking questions.
[Answering. 1. All objects that you are touching but no storing with you will be removed. Example: The Phantasm. 2. You are teleported with the group that you are currently with, which is the organization you registered you RealVision account with. For humans who have no registered a RealVision account, they will be placed in groups according to their location at their last moment on Earth. 3. You age will be regressed by 5 years upon your transition, to allow for more proper development.]
“Where are we transitioning to?”
[Answering. Name of the location undisclosable. Level of danger undisclosable. General terrain undisclosable. Technological advances undisclosable … only 1 information disclosable: Salivation is where the sun shines brightest.]
“What are we supposed to…”
For what seemed to be hours, over 3000 people asked questions. After that, Jonathan could make a general outlook of his situation.
“The Phantasm is a scam that forced all of humanity to teleport to an unknown location. When we arrive there, we will be 5 years younger. We will also appear there along with fellow members of our school, including teachers. We do not know why we are sent there, what we are supposed to do there or what is going to welcome us when we arrive. Our only objective is a place where ’the sun shines brightest… This all sounds like an even bigger scam … maybe if I…”
“What is all you are saying is lying and that the Phantasm is actually functioning just as normal and we are simply in a virtual world?”
Eh? Jonathan moved his mouth and asked out loud.
He didn’t expect that “System” would choose him to talk. He had previously tried to ask a few things but was skipped. Adding to the fact that no questions like “What the f*** is this” popped up, it showed that “System” didn’t like questions that refuted what it said.
[A lie? Hahahaha.]
It was the first time “System” had answered by a question. Even more shockingly, it had laughed. Its voice had also changed to be more human like, making Jonathan doubt that it was a machine.
[I’m not supposed to answer to questions like this, but I feel benevolent today. Hear my advice, and make sure it is printed onto your heart, even your soul.]
“System” sounded even more human like. Jonathan was convinced that it wasn’t a machine answering him.
[The ones amongst you who believe that this is a joke or a scam will be the first ones to die.]
What Jonathan heard shocked him. Especially the last word in “System’s” answer. Die. They could die? Although some questions on danger had popped up, system refused to disclose information on the situation.
But now that they know that people would die, this meant that their situation wasn’t good.
“What kind of death will this be? Real death or death in a gaming sense?”
[Transition complete. Best of luck.]
Without answering the person despite allowing him to talk, the globe of light disappeared.
All became once again distorted.
Advertisement
- In Serial24 Chapters
Epimanes Warrior of the Gods
According to the Gods there are three kinds of men, the first type wants power for the sake of power, the second wants to be superior to other men for the sake of their vanity and the third just want to live a mediocre and comfortable life, until the sweet release of death. Our protagonist is the third kind, he just wanted to continue to grow in his white-collar job and retire in a middle management position with little power but a good remuneration, and enjoy his last years with his second wife and grandchildren’s. But the Gods had other plans, they need a champion to do their binding, a man competent enough to get the job done, but not ambitious to try to forge his own path. They will lie and use him as a toy, he will be the bottom of theirs jokes. Nevertheless, even the most passive of men have their break point, it may take a while and he will suffer a lot, but the Gods will weep, because the most destructive persons are not the ones that want to destroy the world, but the ones that want to save it.
8 218 - In Serial13 Chapters
The Traveling Technomancer: A Westward LitRPG
When Owen Westward dies in a bank robbery, he is given a second chance at life in a new world filled with magic, adventure, and mystery. Although he is out of his element, he will use his knowledge of the old world in combination with the magic of this new world to become The Traveling Technomancer. Story is aiming for PG-13 levels of content. Tagged with Profanity & Gore just to be safe.
8 153 - In Serial17 Chapters
Necromancer's Resolve
Foster Locke's life wasn't the harshest it could have been. But it wasn't the easiest either. Despite losing the last of his family and having immense debt thrown on him, getting the chance to keep practicing Martial Arts pulled away, and having a completely messed up sleep-schedule, he usually tried his best to stay positive to the outside world. Of course, that wasn't always possible, especially not when he was staring into the glowing eyes of a man-eating creature he had never heard of before. The glowing message-box that accompanied it wasn't much better either. Not to mention the fact that he was suddenly in a dark forest instead of the train station. This isn't a story of great anguish, inescapable peril, or heroic world-saving. Rather, it's one of a young man trying to get by in a world that seems to try his best to kill him. I hope you enjoy the read. --- Cover Image temporary [participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
8 155 - In Serial40 Chapters
Vigilantes Make Us Safe: Rebel Rebel
When the world was on the brink in the 1940s a group of men and women with uncommon ability pulled the world from the brink. They inspired generations to come and led to a golden age of vigilantes protecting the world. Times change. By the early 2000s almost nowhere was willing to tolerate unregulated men and women dispensing their own form of justice. The dawn of the internet made operating in the shadows virtually impossible. Everyone thought the days of vigilantes were done but presidential candidate Richard Hughes, riding a wave of populism, has promised to bring these men and women into the light and empower them to keep us all safe. The passing of the Vigilantes Making Us Safe Act changes everything. All teenagers feel like they don’t fit in at times. Ryaan Asfour knows the feeling well. As part of an immigrant family in a country turning against immigrants, there’s a lot of people who don’t think he belongs. The election of Richard Hughes and the passage of the Vigilantes Making Us Safe Act hasn’t helped matters. Suddenly anyone who wants to discriminate can just say they’re keeping people safe and do whatever they want. Sudden popularity at school after hitting a game winning shot makes it even more apparent how much he doesn’t fit in with the rest of his world. A clash with a pair of vigilantes on his way home from school puts things in perspective. What can Ryaan do to protect his family and his neighborhood? Vigilantes Making Us Safe will follow a variety of lead characters including Serenity, Toxic, Hitbox, the Rebel and more. I'll keep the cover image and title updated to reflect the current protagonist but I encourage you to check them all out.
8 234 - In Serial8 Chapters
The Fracture
It was a normal day for the inhabitants of ERT-5901, more commonly known by the populace as Earth. A beautiful planet with lush resources and fertile land, well at one point anyways. Children were born, the elderly died, and Man was as corrupt as ever. But hey, what can you do about that? Can’t change human nature… But that's not the point. Basically the planet was peaceful, for the most part. Certainly they were better off than the species on FTL-3470… We don’t talk about them. Better to leave that book unopened. Anyways, that was all until January 5th of the year 2025. When the sky broke. Fractured. Stunning ocean blue cracks were spotted in the sky all over the planet. A spiders web of cracks and crevices littered the blue skies, tearing all that global peace to shreds. All while Wyatt Walker, a sad example of a human being, was black out drunk in a bar somewhere in LA. This is a post-apocalyptic, portal isekai, high fantasy kind of story set on our very own green Earth! The world has fractured, broken. The inhabitants of ERT-5901 are in for quite the quick and dramatic change in their way of life. Murder, theft, and death have become the norm. Survival of the fittest to the extreme. If you can’t keep up, then good luck playing the game. Hello, Kaiser here! I am the author of this lovely story and I would just like to put a few disclaimers down here. First, English is, in fact, my first language. This by no means I will have perfect grammar and there are bound to be spelling mistakes (please forgive me) and places where I accidentally put plot holes. If you find anything, I would appreciate it if you could let me know so I can fix / change it. I also welcome any constructive criticism or opinions you might have about the story (doesn’t always mean I will change something). Second, I am by no means a professional writer here. Just a confused student who wanted to write something. So, uh, here's my story? Third, if you can’t handle any of the following I recommend you find a different story as I will by no means change any of these topics. [Gore, Profanity, Twisted themes, Dark scenes, and Death] If you’re a sensitive person or a queasy person I would highly recommend a different story. Fourth, I would like to write with freedom so I will by no means be lenient with my writing. I intend to write without mercy. Characters will die, bad things will happen, blood will be spilled, and humans will continue to be humans. I would like to write things as realistically as possible while still having that dash of fantasy. Not everything will be all dark and gloom, there will be happy and funny moments mixed! (Hopefully, not a lot of edge) Enjoy! ッ
8 141 - In Serial12 Chapters
Seoul Sisters In Atlantic City
Yoo In Na and Lee Ji Eun (IU) are lifelong best friends in Kbiz. They are spending a Memorial Day trip to Atlantic City, especially for a Vietnamese concert. Facing all feelings that are inside out during the concert, how will they keep a better friendship when there are new and unexpected moments?
8 145

