《Phoenix Rising》(Later) [FIXING MISTAKES] Plan to correct past chapters
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Hello, everyone.
I am thinking of correction some of the things that I completely messed up in doing in the past chapters. That could be making Lucky WAY-TOO-IDIOTIC. I mean, for story/ plot purposes, he was rendered as such and I'm sure those who passed chapter 220 would've understood that already. Anyway, I've decided to edit the old chapters and improve their quality to match my own at this moment because of the great improvement I went through over the last two years :) I will make a new story page for it and link it to you in another announcement later on, so please look forward to it!
My friend also told me to do the same and not change because of all the haters. That's fine and I don't think I wasted my time writing a few chapters in the new version and think of it as an improvement of how I write stories right now. So, thank you, everyone, for the undying support and encouragement you're giving me and stay tuned to THIS version of the story! The edits won't change the story, just flat out differ with certain events playing out. You could say that v2 is the better version of the original, which is like a draft.
As for fixing past chapters where there are some unexplained parts, I'll get to it later. I'm not really trying to publish this story or anything, just writing for the thrill and the fun of seeing readers liking it. :)
Let's go!
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