《Violet Fear: Diary of a Demon Lord》Prologue- The Legend of the Party of Heroes
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Hi Everone!
this is a rewrite of my own web novel and sharing it publicly, I hope you guys can help me improve in terms of grammar or spelling, the story itself and proofreading (since I don't have a proofreader). So If you guys see any mistakes/errors kindly point that out for me and I will surely give my best to correct them.
Shout out to Escribo and Sle202 you guys gave me such a huge advice!
Anyway, I hope you guys like it! Enjoy
PS: English isn't my first language and I suck at it, so please bear with me :3
The story of the heroes can frequently be heard on almost every town in Rune Continent, It inspired many adventurers to become swordsmasters, wizards, paladins, archers and etc., but the thought of no one actually wanted to be a cleric bothered me somehow. I Sighed. Yup, because clerics can only heal and debuff the enemy which is why it's probably the last resort for those who aim to become adventurers! how cool is that!?. In a world where everbody becomes overly manly because they recieve fame and glory after accomplishing quests, who the hell would want to stay at the rear and support? Everybody wanted to step into the spotlight and be the hero of the party by recklessly swaying their swords, shooting arrows and whacking their wands while casting crap onto their opponents! Anyway the story was told like this...
Long ago a Supreme who called himself as the "Demon lord" suddenly appeared along his death horde, wreaked havoc across the Rune continent. After years of inflicting fear and chaos into the hearts of men, The empire of Rune continent, Malkonov, spread the word across the land in search for a party who can slay the Demon lord in exchange for wealth and glory. Many parties tried and risked their lives to kill the demon lord to avenge their relatives and friends, but none of them returned alive. A party of four "L" rank adventurers "Pentagon" was formed to slay the Demon lord itself. The party consisted of different classes, a swordmaster, paladin, high wizard, and a high archer who later on became known across the empire.
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The battle took place somewhere in the continent of Rune, the small town of Quin being at it's center. The party of heroes kept on advancing as they went near the town of Quin as they slay their way through. Finally reaching the demon lord, the heroes knew that a decesive battle will take place as they charge to slay the demon lord. The night became day and day turned to night. As the dawn came, the heroes managed to push the demon lord down to it's final breath. The demon lord couldn't accept his fate and attempted to take the heroes with him, Casting his most powerful spell "Death Bringer".
The sword and bow hero offered their lives to seal and minimize the casualties as they bring the demon lord to his end. The heroes won triumphantly, but only two heroes came back alive and the village of Quin was wiped off from the face of the earth. Later on, the high wizard Fyn was given the title of "Wand of the Arcanus" since he came from the family of Arcanus while paladin Phon was given the title of "Light of Corleone" since he came from the Corleone family. As for the fallen heroes, The swordmaster and high archer were orphans so they were given the title of "Sword of Demonbane" for Swordmaster Ren and "Bow of Farseeing" for the high archer Xion. Soon their names and titles reached every corner of the world as the heroes of Malkonov empire, inspiring countless adventurers to become the next heroes of the empire. The End.
Or so I thought...
Little did I know that this story will forever change my view in life.
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