《Apocalypse : Judgement's Day [Rewrite]》Arc I - Chapter 11
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Somewhere within Floating Island near South Korea, there's big forest that seem eerie silent. Strangely there's space ship with crack all over its surface, not long after it's arrived there its door was opened then there's a girl about teen appearance come out from it.
"Woah, where am i? is this still same with my plane? earlier the space crack suddenly swallowing my ship when i'm going home, this land is like paradise but i need to go home before my mother is angry with me! though father will defend me if thing get bad hehe" - Unknown girl
"My ship should still enough to go home if this still my home planet! eh what's wrong with my ship? it's energy is disabled? why? there's barrier that repel my ship technology? so, i cant go home? really, where is this place? why can't i go home? MAMA! PAPA! *sobs want to go home, help!" - Unknown girl crying
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Somewhere within Seoul - South Korea
Within Biggest library building, there's young man trapped within mountain of book. His name is Han Junhyuk, his appearance is quite handsome but not too the point it's could tempt any women out there.
His eyes is bright accompanied edged nose with standard handsomeness form of face, but right now his body cant be moved because that mountain of book above his body. It's relief his head didn't get buried together so he can still breathing to stay alive.
"Hah, is there's something that can help me go out from this hell hole? its almost a day already that i'm trapped here without way out since earthquake earlier, i'm regretting the fact i'm staying within library when the apocalypse started! why did i suddenly choose to stay a night here, i wonder?" - Junhyuk
"Ah, that box! could i get something that at least can help me to get rid of this mountain above me? please god, OPEN GIFT BOX!" - Junhyuk
"...." - Junhyuk
[Initializing temporary Helper, 10% ... 50% ...85% .....100%]
-Congratulation for helping world system to create new feature for helping disabled people
" .... the fu*k, disabled? all of your family is disabled man!! huft ... huft! Ugh!" - Junhyuk complain with anger is interrupted by sudden light appear in from of his own eyes
"*yawn, huh? where's this place? oh, now my job is helper? so earlier the voice that who told us its can help us from enemy attacking us is this? so we're transferred into another world? well, its good! at least we can avoid our fate as extinguished race! so who's my client? huh? is that you sir? why are you trapped there?" - Fairy
"urgh, fairy? ah what? i don't know how or why do i get trapped like this but can you just hurry help me here?" - Junhyuk's face is red from embarrassment
"Understood sir, so what should i do to help you from your current predicament? as you see my body is small so my strength is low, please don't expect me to help you with that burden above your body!" - Fairy
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"Ah, no! no! just please get that box to here so i can open it!" - Junhyuk
"Hmm? that box? Ok, it's easy! wait a minute!" - Fairy
*srrkkk ... [sound of pushed box]
"huft... huft, [*wiping sweat in forehead] haizz it's tiring! here it is the box, sir! is there other thing you need me to do again?" - Fairy
"Nope, not for now! alright now its close to my hand, so I'm sure it's possible to be opened now" - Junhyuk
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Back to Raven POV
Within Lumdia City, Happy's inn at 5th floor inside of room with number 57. The three is discussing their next plan while resting.
"So, Master where will we go next? is there some specific location you want to reach next?" - Risha
"Nah, just slow down alright! my advancing quest is easy but i feel that we should get another route that will give more reward! So my girl, can you give us some specific location for that type treasure?" - Raven
"Hmm, Ok! Wait a minute! ... alright, we can get it from monster nest nearby here! err... the monster seem like troublesome type but with Master's strength i doubt that they can hinder your way there!" - Risha
"So what's monster that Occupy that nest?" - Raven
"It's Lizardman, but this lizardman is different with one you know from your time playing game or reading novel! because this lizardman is almost have 20% of dragon genetic, so it should be hard for other people to attack it but with your strength its should be just piece of cake nya~" - Risha
"is that right? then tomorrow we should act! ah by the way is there a way for me to get stealth skill? because it's best if i can get that treasure without fight, the experience is wasted if i kill them just to get that treasure! at least after my class got upgraded, they can serve as my experience after my lvl unlocked" - Raven
"hmm, i think it's possible! wait a minute [closing eyes to search information within her brain], ah it's nearby! there's auction about 30 minutes later within this city, there's treasure pavilion here! the skill book that people don't know it's use will appear there but my knowledge from world record, that's book is stealth skill book" - Risha
"Good then, we should go now! while I'm rich i will get it, and maybe there's another item that will be useful for us! Let's Go!!" - Raven
"Roger nya~ / Understood Young Master" - Risha / Gabriel
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Lumdia City, Treasure Pavilion.
V.I.P room number 07.
The three sitting within room while waiting for time the start of auction, Raven checking his room with curiosity then he sent command to Risha with their brain connection.
"Risha, check if there's monitoring device here! if it's exist, track it end line so we'll know who's monitoring us" - Raven
"Roger nya!- Risha closing her eyes with attempt yo detect her surrounding.
"There's 1 monitoring device, it's nearly in front of us! i think that's our face has been seen with it! then the end of this device is this treasure pavilion office, there's 2 people with early advanced class and 1 middle stage of advanced class" - Risha
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"Heh, this pavilion is quite strong! though its not that scary enough for me to feel scared! just hopefully they'll not offend me here or my peaceful life within this city will come to an end, well whatever! now the time has come for auction, we should focus, ah don't forget to check their hidden description later darling." - Raven
"Roger, nya~" - Risha
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Treasure Pavilion, Head office.
"This time you all should get this event finished without any accident, should something happen! your head will be separated from your neck so do it right! Understand?" - Office Leader
"Understood sir!" - all worker
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Somewhere within Unknown island, in the middle of forest but close to ore mine.
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[*sfx hammer connected with metal ore]
-Congratulation, you've successfully creating something that not yet exist within new world
-World Card has been created
-Fame +10000 has been awarded
-1000 Gold Coin rewarded
-10 mini gift box has been rewarded
World [Card] - Godlike
STR +1
AGI +1
WIS +1
INT +1
DEX +1
CON +1
Charm +1
Charisma +1
Luck +1
Effect :
[Card's Create] - Basic Sealing [Card] x1, once every 4 hour.
[Fuse] - Basic Sealing [Card] x10 = Advanced Sealing [Card] x1.
[Fuse] - Advanced Sealing [Card] x10 = Expert Sealing [Card] x1.
etc
[Buff World] - Unlimited card can be saved within, every card that has something sealed within it will be counted as buff with its effect STR +1 AGI +1 WIS +1 INT +1 DEX +1 CON +1 Charm +1 Charisma +1 Luck +1 [Duration 5 Minutes / Cooldown 30 Minutes]
[Card's Equip] - Get one time buff from one of sealed card within your world card to increase your attribute for 10 minutes (Cooldown 1 hour)
Function :
Basic Sealing Card = Could be used to seal Basic Monster or Item, can't be used to target other possession unless it's owner has been killed.
Advanced Sealing Card = Could be used to seal Basic Monster or Item, can't be used to target other possession unless it's owner has been killed.
"Finally, its finished! my ultimate work, this should be something that can create bloodbath if it's revealed." - Groda the blacksmith
"Eh, master is that what you create by wasting almost 50 year research? it's so plain looking, not cool at all!" - Dirgia [Groda's Student]
"Shut up, this is good! the thing that plain looking is not always ordinary,and it's good that this thing is so plain so there's no one who will know if this something that priceless! here's for you, earlier there's something announcement about our land has been transferred and merged with new world so the law here is still new! Go! be my pride and be happy with your life, for this 10 year your master skill has been transferred into your body and brain so now i can rest in peace" - Groda
"Master! What do you ... " - Dirgia
"Shut up, just listen! now use this as your protection, even though this new world is something that it's law still new! the people here will not that easy to please, the law this world use is strength! strength is everything so be strong and maybe later you can get your own friend that you can rely but until then be careful" - Groda
"But ..." - Dirgia
"Ssh, now go! I'll use my treasure to transfer you to outside of this island, go and travel for your own happiness! you've inherited all my skill so you'll be fine as long as you careful out there and shut up damnit! dont cry like a brat you're 15 already! and i'm not dead yet so just scram!" - Groda
"MAST .... " - Dirgia
Dirgia didn't finish his cry because he's teleported already.
'Good, now everything has been placed as the fate want it to be! now my life should end soon, so it's good for me to stall my disciples enemy! the truth is that i want to see him until i died but the situation can't help it, at least i can use this weak body of mine to help him for last time. Hopefully he can arrive to safe place for him to settle with his life' - Groda
"Dirgi, My Son! even though you're not me real child but within my heart you're my own son, i wish for the best with your life and forgive this useless old man for not giving you chance to choose but just this once! i'll become egoist father, at least you can go out from this island because your parent enemy is almost arrive here! for this 15 year is most happy time for me to get you within my life" - Groda
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1km from Groda's home there's space crack opened and 20 people with black suit arrived.
"Finally, we can get that traitor family location! and we can get that card shard then our mission is fisnished! Now, all of you spread and make sure there's no one that can get a way from here!" - Black Squad Captain
"Roger!" - 19 Black Squad's member
'Now, this mission should be easy! because from intelligence that the target is just 2 people, one blacksmith and the son of traitor! at least the item should be with one of them, at least i can be at ease about this mission' - Black Squad Captain's though
"Alright, now i have to go to target location so i can finish this Mission! with the reward of this mission, i could retire from this tiring job" - Black Squad Captain
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Back to Raven's POV
"Haha, now it's almost starting! hopefully there's good item aside from my target so i can use my wealth to get everything that I fancy here muahahaha~ *cough *cough Oops hehe" - Raven
"..." - Risha / Gabriel
"Welcome to Treasure Pavilion's Auction, Everyone here should already impatient so i'll start it immediately! Then everyone, the auction is started and now First ....." - Auctioneer
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