hi guys like you see the first vol end

1.so I want to hear how it was, it was my first ever story?

2.what I can improve?

3.ideas to powers for our Characters to get?

4.the next world our characters go to and what will be there mission?

5.interesting new Characters to join the group?

few things you need to know

1. English isn't my first language

2. I do it four fun

3.there will not be a chapter in the next few weeks until I decide where our Characters go next

4. don't forget to follow

atemments the story it gives me push to keep writing the story and improve