《god Dimension》Eden no Ori chapter 4-3
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A twenty-second before
When the bear bite Oscar's shoulder
Lee who stands aside with the other look on the situation [this is doesn't look good I need to help Oscar]- jack take that flash Grenade and Pull the pin, throw it Behind Oscar in ten seconds
jack- okay, wait for what I throw this?
Lee -just do it jack, I have to go to help oscar
Ira who sees it somehow understand what Lee wants to do and nod to him- go lee I help him to use it as you want
Lee felt grateful to her and starts to run to Oscar direction
He looks ahead of him and see Oscar stab his gun in the eye of the black alpha bear rono and shot but for some reason he feels bigger danger approach them but Lee was worried about Oscar, so he runs at him with his maximum speed, when lee see the black alpha bear rono he finally understand why he felt that danger, he pushes himself forward and run faster than before to Oscar direction
Lee legs muscle start to feel pain and heavy from the passing his maximum running speed but he keeps running forward, Lee sees the bear charge to Oscar direction faster than his running
Lee [I can't reach him in time ]
Lee suddenly remembered the feeling of losing his father but mostly his bad feeling when his little sister Noami dispersed in front of his eyes, the frustration that he could do nothing to change that
[ like hell I let this happen again, not on my watch I have to move faster] Lee think, his legs Scream at him to stop but he didn't listen to them and keep pushing forward
"Aahhhhhh"
Lee hear the system voice in his head
Break Reaction Speed limit
Gain 250 points
Gain 15 points to Reaction Speed
Gain 15 points to Strength
Gain 10 points to Cell Vitality
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When the voice ended lee feel much stronger than before, With the power he gains from breaking reaction speed limit Lee move much faster than before, making it in time to reach him, the flash Grenade pass Lee and, when it passes Oscar Lee yell to him- Cover your eyes
Oscar cover his eyes
The flash Grenade explode
The black bear keep running to collide Oscar but Lee arrived at him first and push him what made him roll a few feet meter to the side and the bear to miss
BACK TO THE PRESENT
Lee look at Oscar bleeding wound shoulder and think [ this looks like a series wound ]-Oscar rest a little I and ira handle this from here
Oscar pulls out his bull medallion and starts to treat his wounded shoulder quickly
Oscar- I take a pretty nasty bite, I need five minutes to treat this wound that it will not be a critical condition but I can't use this hand well for the next couple of days after it
[i actually need twenty minutes to treat this wound but I can't let them fight this thing alone I have to hurry up] Oscar think to himself
Lee was about to refuse but when he looked on Oscar Serious face he knows that no matter what he says to him, Oscar will don't listen to what he said
Lee sign- okay but treat your wound first, came to help us after you finish that, we will need every help we can get to handle this one
Oscar nod his head and go back to treat his wound
Roar
Strong roar heard
the bear gets up from the stone that fell on him and looks angry at Lee who causes him to miss
Lee pick sharp wood branch from the ground and start running to the right side of the black alpha bear rono with the sharp wood branch in his hand he stabs it on it neck, he was about to take out the sharp branch but he felt resistance the branch was stuck in the bear muscle neck, the bear gives him mocking smile and with his neck he strike Lee stomach, Lee didn’t have time to dodge and take the full hit of the bear
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"Strike"
Lee that takes the full hit couch blood and was sent flying four meters to the side
"Couch"
Lee spit bleed while saying– man that hurt
The black bear was about to finish Lee but was interact be the shooting of lra
"Shot shot shot "
Ira- Lee hurry I running out of bullets here
"Ding ding ding "
But the bullets of ira guns still can't penetrate the black bearskin, The blake alpha bear rono was annoyed from the shooting of ira but she was too far away from him to reach, so the bear rise up his two front legs and slam them hard his on the ground
"Boom"
From where the bear hit Small Stones were sent flying in every direction, Ira who still pretty far got a hit by one of the flying stone on her head, Lee look around him and see Oscar trying to treat his wound but the wound was bleeding badly and big pound of blood surrounded him, Ira which just now got stone hitting her head start to bleed and Jan and Jack hugging each other in fear for what will happen, When he sees his friends in this state he filled up with anger, so much anger that something inside him break
crack
In lee consciousness
The shadow was still imprisoned in three chains but his Teeth eating one of the chains and his eyes watch what lee was doing Curiously
shadow- from the first time I enter this body I could not use my strength because of the kinds of food he eat doesn't have enough Calories energy I can't even us the power I have and now this mere guide trying to seal me, but one thing is good for me Lee enter the GOD DIMENSION start to cock even if it just Entelodon soup that worth a hundred times more energy than Earth hamburger in this DIMENSION I can finally get the rest of my body
The shadow see lee friend Injured and He felt the anger that flooded Lee mind, the desire for revenge on the black alpha bear rono
Shadow - at least he is not a wimp one
The eyes lock on the cracked chain in his mouth
Shadow- it's about time
The shadow open his mouth and bite hard on the cracked chain
crack
From the bite, the chain Broken but there are still two more chains holding him
Shadow - I can't let him handle this alone he will die if he fights like this, I have to help him even if this will delay the release of the seal on me
The shadow begins to eat the Entelodon soup in lee consciousness
The two chains feel the shadow desire, began to absorb more energy and tighten themselves up
[ it's still not enough energy] the shadow think
oh well it same I have to eat the last one,melon-like fruit rise to the air [the last calorie bomb] and the shadow eat it
boom
more energy create in the shadow but the chains keep fight him back
the Shadow look with a Disrespectful look on the chains that were around him- you think this enough to stop me, you maybe forget but I am still a demon appetite
The shadow gives a small amused laugh and starts to release a grey color aura around him
The two chains keep to absorb the energy but without the third chain some energy leak outside of him to lee
Shadow- it's up to you now Lee
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