《god Dimension》Eden no Ori chapter 4-2
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Lee, Ira, and Oscar take a step forward and stand in front of the other
The first one to make her move was Ira, Ira pulls her two Glock 17 guns and starts shooting on the face of one off the bears.
shoot
shoot
shoot
"Howl"
The bear feels pain from his face but the wound is a light and makes the bear feel the pain of sting of bug, the bear recover quickly and raises his right paw and uses it as a shield from the bullets.
Ira keep firing and say to the other guys while keep shooting -this bear is different from the normal bears we know, he much Tougher my guns aren't making as much damage as it should've had been and he is also smarter he uses his paw to shield his head
Oscar- let me try something Ira cover for me
"Shot shot shot"
The bear was being shot in the head from Ira guns, he raises his paw over his head what makes him couldn't see clearly around him
Oscar move forward and us the chance ira give to him too get closer to the bear, Oscar us Military technique he learn and give palm strike with his left hand to the right shoulder of the bear, the bear felt stunned from the oscar strike but what Oscar felt was that he hit study tree his hand were paralyzed But luck was with Oscar and the bear paw was paralyzed for a second too
the bear was the first one to recover ,he moves his left paw to hit Oscar face, Oscar that see the bear paw, moves forward and collide the bear shoulder, The bear who felt the collision was furious That he cannot move his paw so he moved his head forward and bite Oscar's shoulder, Oscar feel pain in his shoulder from the bite of the bear, with oscar other hands he rise his gun in the bear left eye and fire three shots inside the bear eye
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shot shot shot
Oscar hear the system voice in his head
Kill short face bear get 150 points and D rank reward
Oscar yell - guys this is not the alpha bear rono the hidden mission talk about
"Roar"
The other bear was revealed he was much bigger from the other one before, he's furred was black Color With a fresh scar on his right eye that scar came from another animal and aura of danger emit from him
The bear was furious that his little brother died and start running to Oscar Direction
oscar- oh shit
Ira who see it start to fire her guns on the black bear face
"ding ding ding"
The bullets of ira guns couldn't penetrate the skin of the alpha bear rono at all and they fell to the ground
Oscar feels the deep danger coming from the black bear in front of him, from all his missions as a soldier his body learn when he was in danger and now his body screams to him to move ,When he tries to move, He found that he couldn't because when the other bear was killed, by instinct the bear locked his jaw on Oscar's shoulder, Oscar dropped his gun and used his good hand and grip the jaw of the bear that on his shoulder and us all his strength to open its jaw but that wasn't enough to open the bear jaw with one hand
Oscar us More strength Then he ever did, A few veins in the head and in his hand appeared and bulge out
"aaaaahhhhhh"
Oscar hear the system voice again in his head but this time the message were different than before
Break Strength limit
Gain 250 points
Gain 20 points to Strength
Gain 10 points to Cell Vitality
Gain 10 points to Immunization Strength
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When the voice end Oscar feel much stronger
Oscar us all his strength from his good hand and open the jaw of the dead bear
Drip
Drip
His shoulder was bleeding and some Meat was missing from there, The black bear rono was a few meters from him, Oscar didn't have time to run so he takes a defensive position with raised hands
[ this is what I get from underestimated them too much, I sorry my new friend's brothers and sisters I hope you would make it] oscar think
Some object passed Oscar and landed in front of the bear
Lee- cover your eyes
When Oscar hear lee he from instinct listen to him and cover his eyes, The black bear see the object and didn't feel danger so he keeps running to Collide, Oscar
"Flash"
Something collided with Oscar from the side and made him roll a few feet to the side, The bear was blinded temporarily and thought that Oscar was still in front of him so he keeps running until he crashed into the stone wall of the cave
"Boom"
Some stone fell on the black bear rono back
Lee- few I think I didn't make it in time
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I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. 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