《god Dimension》Eden no Ori chapter 2-1
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In Lee consciousness
The Shadow was there in the dark looking at Lee, a smirk on his face even while in chains.
Shadow-"Pathetic, you honestly think a mere seal can stop me, your useless imitation of an individual. You useless being."
Shadow used what left from the energy he got from the calorie bomb [the melon fruit] he ate before to move his teeth and start eating those damn chains.
Outside
The guide looks around to make sure everyone fainted. Satisfied with the results the guide returned to his base form of a relatively normal human being.
Guide-" Now that I am in my original form and stopped emitting any pressure I may as well help these noobs for what I have done. System heal all of them, reduce the points from me "
Greenlight covered everyone and in a few instants, all their mental and physical damage caused by the pressure was gone.
Two minutes’ after
Lee woke up and upon looking around, he sees everyone were awake and were alive.
Guide- "Finally you awake, now that your noobs beauty sleep is over I can start to explain what this world is and what will be happening to you from now on."
Everybody was a bit more than frightened by this man, they have no idea of what is going on but the fact that this man is dangerous is a real, so they unanimously nodded their heads almost perfectly in sync.
Guide-"good now to explain, This world is one stage of what can be called a survival game. You can call it God’s Dimension like we do. You will face missions continuously and every time you survive you will get some points that can be used to enhance yourselves. The mission’s and enhancements come from worlds based on manga’s, movies or light novels. There are other things like rank rewards and the like but that is for another time.”
Well, that was an info dump. So basically we are fucked and we need to survive while completing missions to get stronger to complete more missions. Well it could be worst I mean it is just anime and light novels, what is the worst that could (Marineford, Holly Grail War, Jojo’s world in and of itself) you know what I better stay quiet and try not to panic… oh fuck it I am SO DEAD.
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Guide- “Any questions?”
Everybody rise’s their hands at the exact same time
Guide-"*sigh* This will take way too long to answer you all. Okay how about this, why don't I point on three of you and those can ask me their question, if later you have any more questions I will answer them if I feel like it."
The Guide points his hand randomly and he ended up pointing at Jan, Ira, and Lee.
Ira-"How can we go back to the real world? "
Guide-" A common and fair question lady. With a certain amount of points and rank Reward you can, you can visit earth any time when not on a mission but to stay there and to not return god dimension you need a fucking lot of points and SSS-rank reward. And before you ask no there is no fucking chance in hell that you can manage that in this first mission. "
the guide look on Jan -what your question
Jan-"What sort of powers and enhancements we can get in this so-called God’s Dimension."
Guide-"You can get pretty much get any power or genes from any media you can imagine. Even twilight gay vampire transformation, powerful but too glittery for anyone with good sense. I myself have a Terra Former transformation as I like bugs and it is a powerful genetic manipulation."
Lee-"What else we can buy with points and rank Reward "
Guide-"You can also get a pet from the system or technique to attack, defend or movement type that makes you much agiler that will help you on the missions. But it not stops there. The best alcohol, cigarettes even weed if you want you can get it with a mere few points. The best food there is and is known to mankind and some no man have ever tasted for a few miser points. Honestly, the list just goes on and on as it is truly massive and I could be talking about it for a week and still not have seen all there is."
Lee-“ So I can get like Kryptonian genes and have chakra go on drinking the best boozes the world has ever seen if I survive some of these missions?”
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The guide looked at him deeply before getting a little marble from his belt and throws it in the ground. A barrier covers him and Lee.
Lee- “Wha… what is going on?”
Guide- “Calm yourself down midget. This thing just isolates the sound, so your friends can't hear us talking. first, I want to apologize to you about how I behave to you earlier and to answer your question, in theory, you can but in your case no you cannot.
Lee- “Why? I mean why I cant?”
Guide- “Because you already got something not forms the system. But genetic so your choice will be more limited than the other usually you can choose your first enhancements but you different, you what we call a son of a player when player Has sexual relations and from it a child born there is a chance the child gets an Inferior version of his parent's power. That why you Appetite Demon just have two eyes and a mouth full of sharp teeth Probably you inherited it from one parent of yours or both, beat me, but you have gourmet cells and an Appetite demon inside you.
Guide-It is a powerful thing and honestly, you are lucky to have it so early here because this is at least B rank reward and just isn’t higher because it needs to consume special foods ingredients and training to show it’s true worth. The way it is now it barely can do shit but I sealed it anyway because it would just remove the danger of this mission almost completely from you and more importantly if your appetite demon loses control it would be an inconvenience to me and the survival of everything else in this island would be put in question.”
Lee was shocked to know this. It is possible that some ancestor of his was thrown into this place. Does this have something to do with his father or his sister disappearance?
Lee-so actually I can't mix power with this demon appetite
Guide-basically you right but also wrong at the same time, it's possible to mix power with this demon appetite enhance but it depends on the connection suitability of the enhance you want with your demon appetite, take me, for example, I have a Terra Former transformation and kind of Cultivators technique so they go well together or enhance of fire dragon slayer and fire bending go well together, you see where I go with this
Lee -basically yes, what about body enhance, can I mix two bodies enhance like Spiderman and Wolverine together
The guide look on lee with expected look-you can but it Will have unwanted Results on you
Lee- what you mean be unwanted results
The guide- let me say it this way, when you get enhance all your body get it, it influenced both your body and your mind, the human mind can handle it and not change too much
Lee-so what the problem
Guide-what I say to you is when you have just one type of body enhance, if you have two types of body enhancement, the two enhance will affect the mind of the man together, what will make the man forget who he was before, his thinking will get wilder and more like an animal and he will eventually lose himself
(wow I don't want that to happen to me) Lee thinks
The guide-this is not all, the enhance will mix with each other and the results will be an abomination, what was left will be monster in body and mind so you don't want it to happen to you do you
Lee -of course not who will want that to happen to them
The Guide smile to lee -there other things but we don't have time you can ask the system when you go back to the dimension
The barrier disappeared and the bead returned to the guiding hand.
In the big screen that suddenly appeared in front of them a countdown surged.
Guide-"Now that I answered your question I just have one last thing to say to you before this shit hit the fan. Try and have some fun and survive this .”
3...2...1...0
countdown ended.
Something like glass that we did not even realize was covering us suddenly broke and a breath of fresh air went throw at us, the mission start
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