《Rise of the Evil God》Chapter 4 Mixing Fire and ice + the Ladies hold (18+)
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Message/Warning from Arkeem.
Right so this has A scene that some People may find hard to read so Eh so super (18+)
PS left a hint of what it is.
Chapter 4
Mixing Fire and ice + the Ladies hold (18+)
She really looks unhappy with this idea and it took a good day to convince her to do this for me. But now it’s finally time to mix the fire and ice runes into my dagger.
“You’re sure this will work?” Akino asked with a voice full of doubt
“No not really but hey how can you gain anything without some risks right?” I said, I mean it was all theory really if it was right I get a cool toy if it fails well
the dagger may combust or it just fails and I lose the runes who knows.
“If you lose that dagger you can’t come crying to me” she said, clearly not happy with my answer.
I held out the dagger in front of me and Akino pushed both runes into my dagger at the same time. Just as the two touched the dagger a bright light blinded us coming from where the runes touched the dagger; but then black lines reached out from my dagger and covered the two bright runes pulling them into the dagger. Next the dagger started to vibrate as I was holding the dagger I could feel the two elements fighting almost causing the dagger to combust.
But then the fighting slowed as the darkness element came and calmed them like a father calming his fighting children. After about 10 minutes the two elements had calmed and a small bright red dot and bright blue dot showed at the hilt of the blade and in the middle of the two like a sun was a black dot hard to see on the black dagger but there.
“Holy shit it worked, it actually worked” Akino said, disbelief written on her face than she looked at me “Try and use its power”
I then gripped the dagger tightly and focused on it but something unexpected happened. The power came to me from the dagger, rather than me sending power to it. It was so much power that in seconds I fainted. When I woke up Akino was by my side with a worried look and she asked me what happened and I told her I felt power from the dagger enter me.
“Hmm. I think I know why you fainted” she said
“Why” I asked
“I think that what you felt was Mana and because you have never controlled Mana before; you can’t move it through your body or soul like you need to and that caused shock making you faint” she explained
‘I have to agree with her I have never used Mana before, to have your body filled with it like that. I’m just happy I didn’t explode.’ agreeing with why it happened was good and all but how to stop it was the important question to ask. I then looked at Akino and asked her.
“Akino can you teach me how to use Mana. If you do then we can be even more powerful and maybe take grim cores” I said, smirking at the last part
“Sure I’ll teach you but forget about grims. Also we are close to our destination” she said, seeming a little happy about teaching me how to use Mana.
“Hey can I ask where we are going, I mean I have just been following you for four months without knowing even were we are” I asked with a light chuckle
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“What you didn’t know where we were going this whole time… why am I not surprised. Ok we are headed to The Ladies Hold it’s a Trading Center that deals with weapon matter, magic tents, clothing, healing vials, Blood and all sorts of other stuff” Akino replied
“That sounds like fun we should hurry then” I said, getting off the ground.
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It took us half a day but we got to our destination and the place was pretty big, with large rocks used as walls surrounding a mountain. Looking at all of the guards I can tell why this place is called ‘Ladies hold’ because all of them are females. With all my stuff I traded it for a wind rune and better clothes, I also heard that there was an ‘entertainment’ area within the mountain it cost two vials of weapon matter which I paid happily. I was happy because I found out souls could have sex; but when I had asked Akino to come with me she called me a creep and walked away. After walking in I saw men and women flirting all the women here were beauties, not at Akino’s level of beauty, but Akino was a rare flower.
As soon as I sat down in a stone chair two Beauties walked over to me, one had long black hair that reached to her butt, she had beautiful violet eyes and was tall with long legs just under my height, the second one had blond hair not as long as the other girl and she was shorter too but her deep blue eyes made you feel lost in a graceful ocean plus her larger breast. Both wore revealing black clothing showing their cleavage and upper thighs.
“Oh it’s been some time since a man as handsome as you has come around here” said the blond haired woman as she walked behind me a single finger running along my chin and biting her lower lip as the black haired one leaned forward showing off her cleavage.
‘Building my ego up huh’ after a thought I said back.
“Oh how long it’s been since I’ve seen two ladies as gorgeous as yourselves” as I was saying this I ran my right hand up the inner thigh of the blond one and with my left hand on the chin of the black haired one bringing her closer to me I whispered into her ear in a haunting voice that sent shivers through her
“you’ve found a man that can fuck you till you can’t feel your legs and I promise you I have a way with my fingers… and tongue.”
The black haired one looked me in the eyes and I winked then gave her a grin which caused her to smile and say.
“You have some big shoes to fit; Miya let’s see what he can do shall we”
(18+) Part down below YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
After that I stood up putting my arms around both ladies and we went to a room in the far back the blonde girl Miya closed the curtain in the doorway.
First I kissed the black haired girl and before she knew it her clothes were off and I was rubbing my two fingers on her clit causing light moans from her. I pushed her down onto the bed made up of rags placed on a large flat cut out rock. Next I went down on her and started to lick her pussy I inserted two fingers inside and ran them inside on the top 2 inches from the opening till I found a small bean-shaped, spongy bump (known as the G-spot) and started to rub it in a ‘come here’ way causing her hips to start shifting and her moans to become stronger. After rubbing her G-spot making it swell in size and licking and slightly nipping her clit a bit her moans got more and more powerful till her hips shot up with an orgasmic yell, I at the same time pulled out my fingers and started rubbing her clit fast as her pussy overflowed with juices and squirted them out on to my clothes and face. It ended after a few seconds and her breasts moved up and down as she gasped for air.
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“Well do I fit the shoes?” I asked with a grin licking my lips of the juices from the black haired girl’s pussy.
Next thing I knew there was a blade on my throat coming from the blonde woman.
“Yes you’re perfect. So perfect in fact I think we’ll be keeping you here to play with us ladies for a long time” she said, with a smile licking her lips.
“well the idea of sex nonstop sounds fun and all but I don’t want to be your little boy toy and I’ll say this” I looked over and looked her in the eyes with a large grin “You really shouldn’t have pissed me off I haven’t gotten any action in ten years and you’re going to help me hehe” I said, with a chuckle at the end.
Before she could react I grabbed her arm holding the blade and kneed her in her right side then disarming her I threw her onto the bed. The black haired woman tried to get up but I stepped on her chest stopping her and after a slight struggle both had their hands tied behind their back with the rags from the bed, I had tied rags around their throats that connected to the ones tied on her hands and both of their legs had their ankles tied to their thigh.
“Mother fucker I’m going to kill you, you god dam pretty boy you fucking think you will get away with this in our territory” the blonde one cursed and stared daggers at me. But I walked up to her and raised my hand and swung.
SLAP!
I slapped her face leaving a red hand print on her face that made tiers form in her eyes.
“YOU!” before she could say anymore I put my finger over her mouth stopping her and whispered in her ear.
“Now listen here you whore I have traveled with a very beautiful woman for 3 months and I can’t fuck her so you two are going to substitute and after I’m done with you; you won’t have the energy to move for a week. OK?” by the time I finished whispering I had ripped off her pants.
Slap
Slap
I did two small slaps on both girls’ vaginas, which was followed by two yelps of pain from the girls. Then I played with both pussies, till they were soaking wet I than removed my pants and said to the blonde one that was panting.
“Since you’re so fierce I’ll fuck you first” I said, inserting myself inside her which got a moan out of her.
Then I started to thrust hard. I switched between the two bringing them close to climaxing then switching and not letting them have it. This lasted for a long 2-3 hours; at the end both of them could only pant as their legs and pussy muscles twitched the black haired one had even fainted from fatigue. Then someone ran in followed by a yell
“Arthas are you ok! AHHHH!” Akino ran in but screamed and turned around upon seeing my naked lower body and the exhausted, tied and naked women.
“Oh Akino here to join in on the party” I asked, with a chuckle
“NO! And put some pants on please!” she yelled at me
With a sigh I put my pants on and said “Ya these two girls are done anyways; too bad really I was just getting started” then looking at Akino who had turned back around I asked “So why are you here? Did you get jealous and run in here?”
“No. When I was trading I overheard someone saying that good looking guys always disappear in here and are forced to be their boy toys for them to play with. But I see that they never had a chance against…” she said, as she looked at the women that had both passed out now.
“Oh so you do think I’m good looking then Akino” I said, putting my hand under her chin causing her to flush red.
“Arthas this isn’t the time!” she shouted, swatting my hand away.
“Ok let’s go but I’ll remember that you said ‘Isn’t the time’ so we’ll pick this up at a later date” I said, with a wink then leaving the room.
We snuck out the way Akino had snuck in then quickly left Ladies hold and about an hour away I turned and said to Akino
“So where do we go now?”
“Well we are about half way through Purgatory it will take us about 50 years to reach the closest gateway and add some time due to you eating cores so we have more grims to worry about but the closest gateway is guarded by a man by the name Damien and he’s been there for the past 2000 years. We could go to other one of the other gateways but that adds 20 more years to our travel.” She said, sitting down to think.
I looked at her and asked her “so you are trying to reincarnate then?”
She looked up at me and said “well ya that’s the reason we are here is the do so. But you need a powerful soul to do so plus from what I know the 3 gateways are for the 3 different major worlds and the one Damien is blocking is the world I want to go back to”
“Ok let’s go see this Damien fellow then” I said, reaching out a hand to help Akino off the ground and with a small grin on her face she grabbed it and we set out.
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We continued to travel for 6 months and in that time Akino told me how to use Mana which was taking me more time than I thought it would to learn. She kept out some details, but what she told me is Mana is refined Magic elements. In the world its splits into 6 levels or stages; it starts with Mortal Saint, Duke Saint, King Saint, Emperor Saint, and last is Earth Immortal. The saint levels are measured with how many Mana Stars you have on your dantain and immortals are measured by how many Soul test they have passed. Akino says that because I don’t have a body means I don’t have a dantain so all control on the magic has to be done mentally; which is a hundred times harder than using your dantain to push Mana through your body.
The first thing she had me do was try to take out the least amount out of the dagger at a time and then when it’s low enough keep it at that level till my control is perfect then slowly raise the amount. By the 6th month I was controlling less than a courter of its power but could keep control of it for only 4 hours before I was too exhausted to keep control; Akino says I handle mental stress well. But I guess you learn how to in a life filled with Stress. Also Akino says I’ll get less exhausted the more powerful my soul is; which means I need more cores and blood.
But as we were traveling over a hill we heard a familiar sound
RUMBLE
The ground shook and I looked up to see that the clouds were turning a blood red colour followed with hallowing winds and its blood rain and when we reached the top of the hill both our faces sunk and turned a bit pale.
What we saw were four grims one had a Flails (a spiked ball on a chain attached to a handle) one had huge Meteor Hammers (two huge metal balls that have fire inside them on a single chain) and burned with a ice blue flame the next had a huge two handed Gurz (spiked mace with a long spear tip on top) and the last one had a large halberd (axe, spear and spike/pick).
‘Fuck this doesn’t look good’ I thought as sweat ran down my back then Yelled to Akino.
“We need to run. Now!” I turned and grabbed her hand sprinting as fast as I could. But no matter where we ran they all ways just showed up.
“Fuck, fuck, fuck what are we going to do we can’t fight all of them, maybe two but not four!” I Cursed
“Arthas we can’t keep running around we have to fight them” Akino said, resolve filled her face
Seeing her like that made me breakout into a smile “no use in complaining right?” I said, taking out my dagger
My dagger now had three colours spinning around it the red and blue spun around the dagger split up by the black element. I looked at them and said to Akino
“You need to distract two and keep them off me as I fight the other two got it” I said to Akino
She nodded and we both charged at them. The two I was fighting were the ones with the Flails and the Gurz and as I got close the grim with the Gurz got in front of the one with the Flails. ‘Shit I won’t be able to get close to either like this!’
Hearing the voice in my head made me remember one thing… ‘I’m FUCKING CRAZY!’
“HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA” I laughed hysterically as I ran at the two.
Lowering myself I dodged to the left of a downward swing of the Gurz then stepped back just out of range of the Flails that struck the ground. Then without pause; jumped on to the chain of the Flails and started charging the black mist attack running at the Flails grim.
The Gurz grim spun and swung the weapon horizontally at me and as it got close I grinned and jumped over the swing stepped on the pole of the Gurz flipping forward and launching my attack to my left at the Gurz grim forcing it back. As I landed the Flails grim came at me but its weapon was tangled with the Gurz, so it threw a punch at me.
I blocked with the flat side of my dagger covering it with ice mist and supporting it with my left arm the moment the skeleton fist hit my dagger my left arm shattered. I jumped to use the force to propel myself backward the force still sent my left arm in to my chest breaking some ribs. As I landed on the ground I rolled backward.
Cough!
When I stopped the roll I coughed up some blood as I looked at the grim I see the left skeleton hand that had hit me was frozen solid and the Gurz grims weapon was stuck in the Flails grims chain and I used this time to drink one of the pink vials of liquid.
“HAHA” I laughed at the site of my awkwardly bent broken arm I grabbed it and.
Snap!
I put it back in place for it could heal. If you looked in my eyes you’d see that they were starting to turn fully black from their dark brown and have a crazed gloss, like a rabid dog’s eyes. After setting my arm the healing liquid started to work but I still needed to kill the grims so I ran back at them.
The Gurz grim had finally got its weapon untangled from the Flails and now the Flails grim had its weapon too but can’t control the length of the chain due to its left hand being frozen. I got close to the Gurz grim it stabbed at me with the spear tip but I moved out of the way toward the Flails grim as it can’t attack me in close range now without hitting the Gurz Grim.
I brought out the ice mist and fire and let them spin around the dagger I got low to the ground going for the feet of the Gurz grim but as it jumped back I turned and jumped as high as I could because the Flails grim had a low horizontal swing coming at me and as the ball and chain passed under me I sliced at the chain letting the power of fire and ice mix. It sliced the chain and exploded the ball away and I was propelled away a little too, but recovered the Flails was now broken so I took a quick look at Akino.
She was holding out as a woman she was extra flexible and had only taken light hits, slices and some, of what looked like frost bite/ burn marks but without a weapon to do damage with; it was only a matter of time till she lost. I looked at the Gurz grim as it charged at me with its weapon above its head ready to bring it down on me and at the same time the now unarmed Flails grim came at me from behind.
I started covering my blade with fire and as the two grims came at me I ducked under the Flails grims punched moving to its right slicing its right leg and punching it in its right side forcing it in the way of the unstoppable Gurz then it was crushed. I took that chance to throw the on fire dagger at the Gurz grim the dagger hit its core and the thing burst into flames.
AOOOOOO!
It howled as the flames consumed it and I jump up close to it forcing the dagger further into its core cause me to be sent back by the exploding of its core. I got off the ground fast and saw that Akino was running to me and when she reached me she said with a smile.
“Well this is starting to look better I guess right?”
“Ya. But I don’t know how long I can keep this up with my Mana that last fight to a lot out of me and I’ve exhausted more than half of my energy” I said,
taking a big breath to calm my breathing.
The Two grims with the halberd and Meteor Hammers were walking slowly at us. For some reason they then stopped and looked up at the sky then turned into globes of blood and flew into the sky and the other two dead grims bodies did the same then the clouds turn to the normal dull grey and the weather calmed. Akino and I looked at each other and we grinned and started to laugh then we fell back and lied on the ground.
“Thank god that dam Meteor Hammers grims’ fire really hurt first it would burn your skin then it would freeze the flesh when it went out haha” Akino said, with a light laugh still lying on the ground staring at the sky.
“You know Akino this is the first time I’ve heard you laugh” I said, as I turned and looked at her “I think you should do it more often it’s a cute laugh” I gave her a wink.
Akino hearing this just looked at me and sighed ‘oh no she’s getting used to my teasing, dam what do I have now that I can’t tease her.’ I thought as worry filled my mind then thought of something and asked her.
“Hey Akino why is my weapon so different than yours.”
“That’s because I don’t think your dagger is made of weapon matter. As you know weapon matter forms the weapon you’re thinking of out of your body;
then that builds a connection between your soul and the weapon. Which lets you summon the weapon back to your hand from anywhere and it means when you die the weapon disappears.” She said
“I get it now so because it’s not weapon matter I can’t summon my weapon like you but other people don’t know that which means people will think the dagger is useless in other people’s hands” I stated.
“Right but I don’t know if other people can use your dagger have you tried it before?” she asked, sitting up and looking at me.
“No I haven’t do you want to try?” I asked sitting up too and holding out the dagger to her.
She nodded and reached to grab the dagger but the second it touched her hand, she shot her hand back fear filled her eyes I said in panted breaths
“How… how evil… it felt like… it was go… going to consume my… my Soul!” she then gave me a worried panicked look.
‘Ah so the voice was most likely from the dagger’ I looked and told her and said.
“So it does that… well you’d need a soul first to have it consumed hehe” I chucked
Akino just shuck her head at me.
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After a bit of time we set up our campsite that now had tents! Ya tents and not just any kind of tents ‘magic tents’. Oh and the only thing magic about them is they set themselves up… that’s it. On to important matters I now have to decide if I add the wind rune now or wait to add it with another rune if I think of it wind helps both ice and fire elements.
I looked over at Akino to that she had fallen asleep. I got up and walked over to her and see that she’s sleeping in a ball knees to her chest and hugging them with her arms. It reminds me of how Alena used to sleep, it’s the way a person that’s lived alone for a long time sleeps or someone damaged sleeps. Its good Akino’s just the alone type… can’t say that for Alena though poor girl really.
Eh, I hate remembering the past that means I think of that old hag. Oh and to keep you guys sane I’ll tell you that hag was only in her late 30’s at the start but if you had her do some of the shit she did to you, you’d call her a hag as well but I can’t say it went to well for the next batch of kids… well let’s not think about it.
I went and picked up Akino and brought her to her tent and covered her in the black robe she uses as a blanket. Then sat in front of the fire ‘it seems like forever since you’ve been gone Alena. I just hope you have a good life this time” I keep a weak smile for a sec then start to fiddle with my dagger and the rune.
UNKNOWN BLACK CLOAKED MAN POV
“HEHE HAHAHAHA I FEEL IT A PIECE OF THE EVIL GODS SOUL IS HERE HAHAHAHA!”
TO BE CONTINUED.
So tell me what to work on please and tell me how the fight scene went and where i need to work on it and i'll see how the next chapters fight scene is and ask me if you want to see the weapons. PEACE!
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