《Naruto Otsutsuki "The Immoral Legend"》Chapter 2-Training (Part 1 out of 2)
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Chapter 2: Training
It has been 2 years since the Subete no Kami met Naruto and trained him as his successor. Many things have changed for the young Naruto. Standing at 4 feet and 5 inches, which was tall for a person his age. His previous sun-kissed blond hair is now snow white and longer and covered his right eye, just like Madara’s hair style. His eyes now with several rings with 9 tomoes. Yes, Naruto now has the rinne-sharingan in both eyes due to Naruto eating the shinju fruit given by his surrogate father and master, Subete no Kami. Since he ate the shinju fruit, not only did he get the rinne-sharingan, it also gave him the byakugan and the mangekyou sharingan in its eternal form. Naruto wears a traditional battle kimono made with fine gold and silver silk and a golden sash to hold his kimono. In the back of his kimono is a dragon and phoenix surrounding the kanji for “God” and wore traditional wooden sandals. Hanging on his kimono are his 3 zanpakutos in their sealed form. During his training with Kami, he awakened his other zanpakutos. His own zanpakuto was called Zangetsu and the zanpakuto he gained being the jinchuriki of the Kyuubi was the most powerful zanpakuto previously wielded by Yamamoto, the head captain of Soul Society, Ryujin Jakka.
--Flashback no Jutsu--
“Master what is that in your hand?” Naruto asked as he tilted his head
“That my student is the shinju fruit, a special one of its kind.” Kami replied. “Usually it’s produced by a shinju tree, but this one is one of a kind since it was personally created by me.” Kami continued. Naruto was amazed that he was able to create something out of nothing.
“This fruit gives you 3 special dojutsu, which being the rinne-sharingan, the byakugan, later the tenseigan, and the eternal mangekyou sharingan. It will also give you the ability to use Mokuton, Enton, and a special Kekkei Genkai that I will later tell you.” Kami smiled and Naruto grinned happily since he knew he was going to be powerful, more powerful than Hokage-jiji.
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--Flashback End--
“Master now that I have awakened all 3 of my zanpakuto”
“Can you finally teach me Zanjutsu, Hoho, and Kido?” Naruto asked in anticipation
Kami smiled “Aren’t you the impatient one my young successor.” Kami put his hand on his chin as he was thinking. “Very well let us begin your training in the way of the sword first then Hoho and finally Kido.” Kami said and Naruto grinned from ear to ear. Kami trained Naruto for 16 hours a day for another year. At this point Naruto mastered Zanjutsu and can give Kami a run for his money if he wasn’t careful enough. Naruto’s style was unpredictable, yet effective. He has also mastered his shunpo. His shunpo was beyond remarkable, so fast that it puts Yoruichi’s title “Flash Goddess” to shame. Out of the three arts, his Kido was the worst, but that doesn’t mean it’s weak actually it’s the opposite. Naruto almost completed his training in Hado and was able to use Hado #1 to Hado #99 without a chant. His Bakudo is a bit weaker than his Hado, but it’s normal since Naruto is more of an attacker rather than a defensive fighter.
After he completed his training with the shinigami arts, he started his shinobi training. First was his taijutsu. He had 100 pounds of weight in each limb and 200 pounds of weight in his chest, totaling in with a weight of 600 pounds. He ran 20 laps around Kami’s dimension and did push ups and daily spar with Kami. When Naruto got used to the weight, Kami doubled weight each time and made Naruto annoyed. Kami told Naruto that he should make his own style of fighting and not copy others. With trial and error and constant sparring with his master, he created his style of Zettai Ken (Absolute Fist) which relied on pure strength, similar to Goken ( Strong Fist) of Maito Gai. Naruto trained until he dropped and with continuous sparring with Kami, he finally mastered Zettai Ken. Kami also taught Naruto how to release the 8 gates and due to his Godly Essence, given by his master, he doesn’t die when he released the final gate.
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“Well Naruto show me that you have mastered taijutsu.” Kami said as he and Naruto prepare a battle stance.
“Absolute Punch!” yelled Naruto as he released one of the moves of the Zettai Ken. Naruto’s fist traveled at an insane speed that startled even Kami.
“Hoho that was quite a punch and a fast one too.” laughed Kami as he dodged Naruto’s punch. “But is that all?” mocked Kami. Naruto grew a tick mark on his forehead as Kami mocked him. Naruto was going to show him how strong he is and that his master shouldn’t underestimate him.
“Kaimon kai! Kyumon kai! Seimon kai! Shomon kai! Tomon kai! Keimon kai! Kyomon kai! Shimon KAI!” yelled Naruto as he released all the 8 gates. Naruto emanated a flaming aura of red stream around his body as his skin blackens.
“Master, let me show you the strongest technique in my arsenal. Naruto smirked and Kami raised an eyebrow and grew wary since Naruto opened all the 8 inner gates. Never did Naruto opened the 8 gates when they sparred.
Naruto moved at ridiculous speeds even for a god and screamed his attack “ Zettai no Ken no Himitsu no Gijutsu: Zettai Kami no Koka!” (Absolute Fist’s Secret Technique: Absolute God’s Descent) Naruto’s attack caused earthquakes, tornadoes, and strong shockwaves as he land his attack on Kami. Kami coughed out a huge amount of blood. What Naruto didn’t know that Kami was dying.
“What’s happening master?” Naruto asked worriedly.
“It is time for me to go my son.” Kami replied as he’s losing energy. Kami started to fade away and Naruto cried.
“I have been alive since the beginning of time and I have finally found my successor, which is you. Even Gods can die Naruto… remember live without regrets and I will watch over you from the heavens.” Kami closed his eyes as he said one last thing. “ The Kyuubi is sealed within you, her name is Kurama. She will teach you ninjutsu and how to use your dojutsu and kekkei genkai.” “Farewell Naruto, my son” Kami said as he faded away like he wasn’t there to begin with. Naruto stared with shock and sorrow at where his father and master stood. Naruto cried and fell unconscious.
When Naruto woke up, he was in a large sewer and saw a massive jail, inside in the jail was a orange and red furred 100 feet tall fox with 10 tails swinging in the air(Yep no longer 9 tails since Naruto ate the shinju fruit, so he is the juubi jinchuriki now)
“So the jailor finally came to meet the prisoner” The 10 tailed beast said with a haughty laugh.
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