《Merlin: The man who forged his own destiny》Plothole Hotline
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Howdy guys, I've seen that some of you have found, or think to have found several plotholes in my story.
I've gotta be honest with you, I've reread the story, and I don't see any. It probably is because I'm the author, and as I have the story in my head, I can't see them. That's why I'd like to ask your help with that. You can call this a "plothole hotline" of sorts if you want. Whenever you see something you think might be a plothole, please do notify me through this thread. I'll check it out ASAP and fix it if it's actually one.
I'll leave this thread open until I finish my story.
Thanks for your help!
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You can always read a chapter ahead, or support the story, at http://merlinpendragon.blogspot.com/ !
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