《The Dark Wish Maker》Chapter 10 Part 3
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Double chapter release today!
Oh! thank you for Neydomus suggestion about using a spell checker. Since my grammar is known to be terrible as I had said in the fiction page. But if anyone want to try editing this work then they are welcome to do so and sent it to me. So you guys don't have to deal with my crime against humanity English grammar.
Title: Len is Missing and Silver Plan
When Tanya saw the state of Len medical room, she felt like she was about to vomit and tear up badly. Her body shiver and tremble as tears seem to be about to burst out of her watery eyes.
Her knees felt weak and were about to collapse from despair, but suddenly a voice screams at her loudly from the inside of her head.
(Dumbass!! don't judge a book by its cover and start examining that corpse over there is Len or not.) Silver told her inside of her head. Once again she look at the blood and limbs lying around inside of the room then approach the head on the bloody bed.
She then walks. Walk closer to the disfigure head that is lying in the middle of Len bloody bed. She slowly lifts it with quivering hand and quickly turn it around to look at its face.
It was hideous like it was maw by a wild animal. However, she quickly, but gently place her shivering fingers to trace its outline and to feel its destroy face. In order to determine if this face belongs to her little brother or not.
After she trace it for a few moments. Her eyes that was red from crying now turn red out of pure rage and smash the head on the floor. Which made it burst into bloody pieces and a black tar like substance flow out from it, but she instantly stomp it out of existence with her Dragon KI and erase the black tar and the head all together.
That head was not Lens. It definitely was not her little brothers head, which then made her feel anger, wrath, and pure malice to the one who try to fool her and toy with her emotion.
“WHO IS IT!!! WHO IS IT THAT TRY TO FOOL ME!!!” She roar with Ki infuse within her screams that it cause the whole hospital building to shiver and shake like there is a earthquake.
(Calm down fool!!!! there are people that are outside, listen to their footsteps, they are coming here now!! Now move!!!!) Silver then scream at her from the inside of her mind and that snap her out of her blinded rage and begins to move to the rooftop in order to hide from those people that are coming upstairs to look for the culprit who had made that scream.
“What are we going to do? How are we going to find Len?” Tanya looks up and see the sky was at its Twilight. As she ask silver about what she should do. But to her surprise Silver then said something that is extremely shocking.
(Don't worry Tanya this was all planned out by me. So there is nothing that could go wrong now.) When Silver said this to Tanya in her mind. She made a surprised look and then asked slowly.
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“What do you mean that you had planned out everything? What do you mean that nothing could go wrong now?” she asks slowly as she felt a creeping sensation crawl up her spine.
(Tanya, did you truly believe that we could have been at peace now after we had let that shadow get away?) Silver told her a truth that she did not want to believe before.
“......”
(Tanya, you are too naïve, that shadow had said it himself that it is made of a bunch of negative emotions and so it would never stop its revenge on us as long as it lives. We could not find where its location is, but it know where we are, so we are nothing more then sitting ducks. While it is hiding in the shadows waiting for us to slip up than it will shoot us when we least expected. Naturally it is because of this that I will never feel at ease again if we do not deal with this damn shadow immediately before it becomes too much of a nuisance on my new grand plan.) As Silver explain. It is true that our location has already been leaked to the enemy, because how did that X-User know where she was in school?
However, Tanya does not understand what this grand plan of Silver was.
(If that shadow see us as prey, then we only need to make it our prey to catch. No Humans play fairly, because to them fairly is nothing more then unnecessary restraint that limits their full potential, unlike beasts that hunt in order to survive, even if it tries to trick others into believing him, it is not anything different then a beast trying to camouflage itself in order to lure in its prey. On the other hand, a human would have left a bait in order for the beast to come and try to eat it out of hunger. Then catch the beast in its trap.) When silver said this, she was at a lost to what Silver is trying to say to her.
(Judging by your face, you did not understand anything I said correct? Simply saying, to be a human one must be able to think of the long-term benefits and not the short term benefits, because short term benefits will only help you survive day by day with uncertainty like an animal that always go hunting alone when it is hungry. But a human will put its own hunger aside for a moment, in order to think of a plan to gain a bigger catch and with higher certainly of succeeding and to survive the next day.) when Silver said that, she made herself sound like a real human and Tanya was just a beast.
But still what does this have to do with finding Len? What is this plan of hers?
(Naturally it is also because of this, a single human is doom to fail since they are weak, yet try to go after a much bigger dream than they can actually turn into reality. But even if one humanity dream fails another one will complete it in its place. That is what makes humanity different from any beast in this world. Their thoughts are selfish to the extremely, but their selfishness overlap more then they differ from each other.)
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(So if that shadow is made up of the dark residue of human emotions then it is also extremely selfish like them and will try to complete its goal the moment it sees the opportunity to do so and will try to play us like the fools or a puppet dancing with is rhythm, but in reality, it is merely dancing at the palm of ours hands unknowingly like the foolish dark residue of failures that created it. It is only made up of humans who fail and fallen into eternal despair, so it will fail in the end like all of them who created it. If it is made up of thousands of failures then it will fail a thousand times like how all those who came before it did.)
(However, what makes a human fail? The answer is simple, it is merely a mistake, a unredeemable mistake that could never be taken back once they had made it. So if I want it to fail then I want it to make a mistake. What it's mistake? you should know it by now, Tanya.)
“It... taking Len?”
(Right! Before you left Len you put some of your KI inside of him correct?)
“Yes—you can mean.....”
(BINGO!!! YOU GUESS CORRECTLY!!!)
“YOU LET LEN BECOME BAIT ARE YOU CRAZY, NO, YOU ARE CRAZY SILVER!!!!”
(If humans were not crazy then they are merely simple beast with four useless limbs that is unable to make use of their potential. Tanya, I knew you would not be able to resist Lens request. That is why I had not stop you or offer you any advice to protect him, because if I did then you would not have left him alone for the enemy to take him and us to track them down by using our KI as the medium, as the beacon to take us to their headquarter and pull out the source of evil that we will have to deal with now or later. If I did not allow you to make the first mistake to allow them to exploit your mistake, then I can't exploit their mistake in return. So all this was planned out by me the moment that you had left Len alone and even if you did not put any Ki inside of him, then I would have just made a wish to track our blood that you had let him ingest in order to save him last time, after beating him to a broken meat shell.)
(Tanya, the enemy did not catch nor did they capture Len, they merely fell into our trap that we, the hunters, the alpha predictors, that are waiting for them to take the bait that, we, had wanted them to take and we to rip their heads off the moment they had taken the bait. So Tanya, the hunt for our prey has just begun.)
“.....” when Tanya heard Silver say that last part she was at a loss of what to say. But it was her fault for underestimating Silver intelligence.
It was her mistake for leaving Len alone, but it was now their mistake for taking Len from her with Silver inside of her.
She should had known that Silver was being too quiet for some reason.... when she battle that X-User, Silver did not offer a single advice of how to defeat him. But merely remain as a bystander. She must have wanted to observe the power of that X-User from her eyes in order to find his weaknesses. So she could exploit them later like at this moment.
She knows that Silver is a part of her, a dear friend to her, but she has to say, Silver is just terrifying in terms of intelligence and planning.
Silver knew that neither of them possesses a high sensory ability to look for our opponents that are hiding in the dark. So instead she made them come out in broad daylight for her to deal with them and not in the dark, and she also help her by making their enemy lower their guard on taking Len and her chasing them afterwards, which would allow her to catch them by surprise and dealing with them afterward much easier then compare to her being surprised by them instead. Which would have made her fight more difficult since, if she was still with Len right now, then she would have to fight them while under severe restraints because she does not want them to attack both her and Len at the same time and she would not be able to protect Len in the process, while under their onslaught. So what Silver had done, was not just making it easier to find them, but also easier to destroy them in surprise in the process.
So she closes her eyes and breath in deeply in order to feel her Ki that is injected into Lens body by her. She did not make use of her wish because one may not know if they need an extra one later on. So every wish counts at this moment in time.
While she is doing this, Silver only watch from inside of her. Then quietly thought.
(Although I told her a rough detail of my plans and made it seem flawless to her, it is but without flaws, since even if I am just a personality, I am her personality, which means that I am a human personality, so even I can make a mistake, a gamble at this moment, because if that shadow was to take over Len again, then it would not be easily to deal with it like last time. So what I do can be a mistake or a blessing to us. But there is no other way to deal with that shadow because it is either we let it grow stronger day by day, or we destroy it completely now and be rid of it forever...) that is what Silver thought as she witnesses Tanya opening her eyes and then said.
“I wish that I am in Italy capital, Rome!” once she said that her body glowed with a radiance and disappeared in the plain view of the rooftop. But because she was to focus on tracking Len, she did not notice a pair of golden eyes that is looking at where she had disappeared in surprise....
Chapter 10 Part 3 End
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