《God Must Be Lazy He Allowed a Cultivation Anomaly》22. Benevolence
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Kle In went home dejected. He got an answer to his question but that did not properly explain why he needed a rare high-grade medicine to advance. Comparing himself to a person with strong spiritual elemental affinity growing up at the same time, and consuming the same quality of food and receiving the same pills, he could not determine the root cause of why he could not further breakthrough while the other can.
"What exactly is spiritual elemental affinity? Does it influence the body? What about magical beasts? How do they break through? Does spiritual affinity still apply?” he thought.
When he was in a cage, he had observed many passerbies and although there are variations on their circulation patterns, he could not pinpoint where the underlying issue stands. If this is an issue with opening Qi Nodes, he had already opened up all ninety-nine Major Qi Nodes in his including the Sub-Qi Nodes in his eye.
Kle In was thinking about having a second opinion when he saw the mother and daughter weeding outside from the window. He activated his Failed Superman's Eyesight Two. He saw two floating cloud-like ball of light which are almost of the same size but is emitting reddish hue. Then he looked around where the mirror is standing.
Kle In returned his vision to normal. He just realized he could not see his soul. Even using a mirror, it is as if the soul is on another dimension. He could not make a comparison
"I guess I just added another item to my problems.” he said to himself.
When he saw that Mebiline has not entered Qi sensing phase yet, he suddenly had an inkling on observing how humans with bloodline and better spiritual elemental affinity breaks through. He suspects that the reason Aunt Mabna’y brought her daughter along is because of the existence of pills. Since she was here for it, he may as well provide her by her resources and in turn participates on his little experiment.
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Seeing they were busy, he concocted his own version of High Tier Qi Sensing and Qi Enhancement Pills he will be providing in the evening.
Evening came and after Kle In finished his dinner, he waited for Mabna'y to put away the plates. As Aunt Mabna'y was cleaning the table, he placed a bottle of Qi Sensing Pills on the table.
"I noticed your daughter has yet to become a practitioner. I am willing to assist her breakthrough, in return you must agree I can observe as she advances."
Mabna'y almost collapsed upon seeing the bottle. It was indeed her intention that Kle In would take notice of her daughter but seeing it happen is just too good for her to accept.
After the mother and daughter duo thanked him, they immediately found a spot on the living room and attempt to cultivate.
Kle In finds it surprising that Mabna'y is giving Mebiline instructions about Qi circulation as if assuming she has already entered Qi Sensing Phase. He can only be patient. Mebiline swallowed the High-Tier Qi Sensing Pill.
After around ten minutes, Kle In saw twinkling small silver lights all over Mebiline's body via his Failed Superman's Eyesight I. Then after a few moments, he saw a small cloud of Qi gathered from the center of her dantian as she tried Qi Circulation. Moments later, she broke through.
Kle In was in disbelief. What took him four days to achieve was completed by Mebiline in less than an hour using one pill. Mebiline had just become a Low-Early Qi Condensation Realm Expert after a few attempts of Qi circulation.
Kle In disregarding the envy forming in his heart as he focused on observing the newly baptized cultivator. He could see nine Major Qi Nodes lit up, and recalling the time Mebiline took the pill and to the point she broke through, he still failed to see where the Spiritual Affinity or Bloodline comes in.
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He thought, "Is it something tangible or I am not able to set it yet because of my cultivation level?"
Kle In could no longer wait and inquired.
"How come I do not see her exhibiting your bloodline?"
"Young master, we can only awaken our bloodline by taking in our clan's Bloodline Awakening Pill. The next family competition is next year. I will definitely make sure she trains diligently to become an outstanding practitioner and be allocated an awakening pill." Mabna’y kneeled and apologized for not understanding Kle In’s reasoning.
Kle In just hated when Aunt Mabna’y acts like a slave.
What he thought was simple and smooth sailing just uncovered itself to be another mystery. Since he already decided to help Mebiline breakthrough, he might as well support her properly. He just hopes Elemental Affinity shows itself up during bloodline awakening.
"See if you could purchase the Bloodline Awakening formula and buy me five sets of Earth Class ingredients of it. Make sure nobody knows what we are doing and please stop kneeling. It is very annoying."
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