Due to rereading my own work, I have come to the conclusion that I need to rewrite this project of mine. There are 2 main reasons for this.

1. I am appalled that I made you, the readers, read the earlier chapters because of the lack of so much information that could have been integrated into the story.

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2. The amount of plot holes is putting holes in my conscience and I feel I can do better with writing a story-line that is better suited to going along with the general make-up of the plot with what I have planned.

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