《In the Naruto world (1)》Chapter 35 The 17th skill
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Well here we are, the Hyuga palace. I will never get used to this magnificent sight. ‘Sigh’ the rich really do have it good.
Luna and me were at the entrance, and I met the two guards that I met a few days ago when I last visited the Hyuga place.
“Hey Josef! Long time no see.” (Chris)
“Likewise Chris. I see you brought your girlfriend with you.” (Josef)
Surprisingly Luna didn’t blush at all, and just took it as a compliment. I think she’s used to it thanks to my countless times I teased her before.
“Yes I did.” (Chris) said as I held Luna’s hand firmly.
“Now you don’t have to do anything perverted with our lady Hinata.” (Josef)
Oh crap! Why did he say that.
I felt my right hand was getting squished very hard, I then sensed a bunch of killing intent coming out from Luna. Oh god, WHY JOSEF!!! WHY!!!
“What does he mean by that, hmmmm!” (Luna) tried to sound as normal as she could, but her creepy smile wasn’t helping her at all.
“It’s just a misunderstanding Luna. Me and Hinata only have a student and teacher relationship, and nothing else.” (Chris)
To me, a teacher and student relationship is a sacred thing, and no one can interfere in it. And besides, Hinata is Naruto’s girl, so what kind of a bastard would I be if I broke the Naruhina fanbase.
“Hmmm! I’ll trust you, for now!” (Luna) said, but she is gonna keep a close eye on me.
Uh! Bluescreen.
I am Groot! ( ゚∀゚)
DON’T DO THIS TO ME BLUESCREEN CAUSE I NEED YOU NOW!!!
I said “Yes Chris!” learn how to speak Groot for god’s sake. ల(`°Δ°)
FOCUS!!!
Alright fine, what do you need. ( ̄ω ̄; )
How can I manage to get a harem, if Luna gets easily jealous. I won’t be able to give the others rings of the harem.
I dunno. Break up with her I guess. (*´ー`)
That’s not funny at all...
Then have it your way ( ̄ヘ ̄)
Aw fine. The only hope I got and he walks away from me…
Josef then let us enter the Hyuga place, where Yu was waiting for us. Our rooms were assigned right next to each other, I guess Hiashi knows that I am the only one who can calm down Luna, that's why our rooms were basically next to each other.
“Are you gonna be okay Luna.” (Chris)
“Yes! Why do you ask?” (Luna) asked me
“Because this is too sudden for you. First you unlocked your mangekyo sharigan, then you meet Itachi, we are currently moving at the Hyuga place. It’s too much for one day don’t you think.” (Chris)
“I guess. But it’s okay because I know that you’re here with me.” (Luna) said as a hint of pink could be seen on her cheeks.
I smiled a bit then I responded “Alright. If you don’t mind, i’ll train you how to use your sharigan powers.” (Chris)
“You know how to train my powers!” (Luna) said a bit surprised.
“Not really, but I have a plan that may work for you.” (Chris)
“Well okay then. I am looking forward to you teaching me again.” (Luna) said and she smiled at me.
{Relationship} Luna: Lovers 600/1000 needed for next level.
I sensed that ours powers grew, and Luna did as well. It was the second time this has happened to her, and she thought it was weird. She thought that it might be somehow related to her new mangekyo awakening, so she just shrugged it off and said nothing.
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She went to her room to do some business. I heard from Yu that it’s a culture to always wear Hyuga clothes at all times when you’re inside the Hyuga place.
I entered my room to find those clothes, then I changed into them. It was basically a very loose robe, and it was very light as well.
I felt uncomfortable with this, so I added some gravity seals on my body. Ah! Much better. I am always wearing weighted clothing, and everyday I increase the weight, it feels weird if I don’t wear something heavy.
I can now easily move in clothes that weight 4500kg. It’s almost close to what Lee’s ankle weights weigh. Im surprised that I can move freely in this kind of weight.
I slided the door open and decided to explore the Hyuga mansion. Luna was taking a shower, so i decided to kill time by visiting some of the Hyuga places.
Yu said that I can go anywhere I wanted, because I am an ‘exclusive visitor’ Whatever that means. But I cannot go to other peoples rooms for obvious reasons.
As I was exploring, I heard several people mention me, and why I was even here at all. Some of them recognized me, and called me the potential rapist, that will rape your children when I have the chance,
Damn that Sasuke. Someday i’ll get him for this day. After that, no one wanted to get close to me because of my fake status. Now I know how it feels to be like Naruto.
I didn’t care what they thought about me, and just kept exploring the place. Until I heard music, classical music to be exact. It caught my attention and I entered one of the rooms where the music was coming from.
In the room, was very spacious and had a lot of decorations on it. On the side were a bunch of guys and girls playing the violins, cellos, flutes very profesionally.
At the center of the room was Hinabi Hyuga dancing with some tall dude who was atleast in his late 30’s. He was correcting her in her mistakes very harshly. I could swear that he has a pedo stach.
It looked like Hinabi was trying really hard, but couldn’t get the moves correctly. Man, do I know how that feels.
“Chris! You’re here!” (HIna) said
I turned to see Hina sitting by the side of the room. She was on a chair and then signalled me to sit beside her. I did what she asked, and sat beside her on one of the chairs.
“I didn’t know you were here already Chris. So what brings you here to this room.” (Hina) said a bit curious.
“The sound of classical music caught my attention.” (Chris)
“You like classical!” (Hina) said.
“Of course I do!” (Chris)
I listened to classical not only because I like it, but because I used to dance to this type of music back in my past life.
I know right. For 7 years you have danced to classical, waltz, tango, and several other dances. Say, now that you have a better physique, do you think you could dance better than before.
Good question, maybe! I dunno.
“Do you know how to dance waltz.” (Hina) said to me.
“I do actually.” (Chris)
“Hm! Hinabi come here, sweety!” (Hina) said to her favourite neice.
“Yes, aunt Hina.” (Hinabi) sighed in relief, as she finally stopped to take a break from dancing with that old guy.
It’s not like they had a choice, he was the only one who is skilled in this type of dancing.
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“Is it okay if Chris teaches you how to dance waltz.” (Hina)
Hina actually didn’t plan for her neice to have a relationship with me, all she wanted was to get out of that man’s grasp. That’s why she was here, she didn’t trust that man much. She would have stopped these classes, but Hiashi insisted that she must learn to dance before her birthday.
He was in charge of the Hyuga place, so she couldn’t do much but watch her neice from the sidelines.
“Uh! Okay.” (Hinabi) was a bit confused, but said yes to her aunt’s weird request.
I didn’t read Hina’s mind so I was equally confused. But I could tell by how she was looking at that pedo-stached man, that she wanted Hinabi to get out of his teaching.
The worst part, is that he isn’t even a good teacher at all. I may not have been good at dancing waltz in my past life, but I did learn from a very experienced teacher. So I could easily tell how his teachings were nothing but full of mistakes.
I have no idea how Hiashi found this guy, but, who am I to judge.
I then decided to follow along Hina’s plan, and asked Hinabi as I kneeled on my right knee, and gently stretched my hand to her.
“Would you let me have this dance miss Hyuga.” (Chris)
HOLY!!! That was actually pretty suave of you. I didn’t think you actually had it in you. ٩(♡ε♡ )۶
I guess now that I have a better physique, I can do things that I couldn’t do before.
Hinabi and Hina were actually amazed by this, then Hinabi accepted my hand. Then the music started playing.
I took Hinabi by the hand to the centre of the room, and laid my hand on her waist as she laid her hand on my shoulder.
The reason the guy as a terrible teacher was because of his height. How was he able to reach Hinabi's waist, or how was Hinabi able to reach for his shoulder when their height difference was huge.
Me and Hinabi started waltzing through the room, she was stepping on my feet multiple times.
“Hinabi! Follow my feet with your feet.” (Chris)
“I-I don’t know how?” (Hinabi) said as she tried hard to get the moves right.
“Like this! Just follow my lead. When my left foot goes back, your right foot goes forward, then my right foot goes forward, then your left foot goes back.” (Chris)
I was going very slow for Hinabi's sake. Then slowly but surely she was getting the moves right. The other guy was basically yelling at her, that it was hard to understand him at all. He got easily mad at Hinabi for not following his moves.
I don’t know much about teaching. But after teaching Naruto, Hinata, Kat, and Luna, I learned that you should have patience to be a great teacher. Only with patience and by guiding them, can you lead them to success.
Hina and the pedo stached guy were both shocked to see Hinabi's improvement. They honestly didn’t think that Hinabi would progress her dancing skills with my teaching skills.
Hinabi was now really starting to improve, but she was looking down at our feet. I gently raised her chin with my hand to look at me.
“Don’t look down, just dance to the music while looking at me.” (Chris) this was something that my teacher always said to my class.
Hinabi gave me a small nod, and started dancing to the music perfectly. I gave her a little twirl, and I used other dance moves on her as well. She was dancing beautifully.
Hina even started to shed a bit of tears of joy because her neice danced like an angel, how could she not be happy at this moment.
The other guy was seething with rage, because he had spend a lot of time teaching Hinabi, but she has never progressed at all. But since he wasn’t a Hyuga, he had no right to say anything in their place. Unless if he had a death wish or something.
Wow Chris! I think this is the first time you have amazed me. (╯✧∇✧)╯
Ha! Maybe so. But I truly wished I could have danced like this in my past life. I never actually thought that my so called useless skills could compensate for today. I wish I could dance better though. I may have the physique, but I don’t have the skill or talent to dance like Hanabi.
It’s true. I am only using my basic knowledge that I learned from my teacher, I never had the talent like Hinabi or my sister.
Done! ☚(゚ヮ゚☚)
Done? What do you mean by done?
Well I got you your 17th skill. Dancing! .゚☆(ノё∀ё)ノ☆゚.
YOU DID WHAT!!!
What? You didn’t want too? ∑(゚ロ゚〃)
No! I just said I wished, as a figure of speech, I never actually meant it!
OH CRAP!!! ヽ(#゚Д゚)ノ
But you can remove the skill right!
...i’m so sorry Chris. I thought you wanted the skill. (・口・)
Please tell me you can remove the skill.
Sadly… no! ( ≧Д≦)
AH DAMN IT BLUE SCREEN!!!
I’m so sorry. I’ll somehow make it up for you, I promise. (╥╯﹏╰╥)
… Well there is no reason to argue about it anymore. Atleast I still have 3 more skills to chose.
I didn’t notice this, but while I was dancing with Hinabi. The music stopped playing, and everyone was looking at me with a shocked impression.
I did not know what was happening.
“Chris! Please accept me as your student.” (Hinabi) kneeled and begged for me to teach her.
“What happened?” (Chris)
“You don’t know!” (Hina) said a bit perplexed.
“Know about what?” (Chris)
“Until just a minute ago, your dancing style changed a lot. It literally looked like I just witness you grew wings and danced. And everytime you took a step, our souls were being healed or something.” (Hina)
I guess it’s the result of the MAXXED out dancing skill that blue screen just gave me.
“Aunt Hina. I know it might be selfish to ask, but I want Chris to be my dance teacher. Please!” (Hinabi) said as hope could be seen through her eyes.
“That depends on wether Chris wants to.” (Hina) said as she looked at my direction.
Sadly for Hinabi, I have to say no.
Nah just kidding, of course I would say yes!
“Of course Hinabi. Just do me one simple request.” (Chris) said as I stretched out my pointer finger.
“What is it?” (Hinabi)
“You must not call me sensei, or Chris. Call me Onii-chan.” (Chris)
I decided to not have a lovers relationship with Hinabi since she is still a child. But having a sister brother relationship is something that I could agree on.
Although it’s not what I wanted, but it’s still passable. LOLI GET! (๑´ڡ`๑)♡
Yeah I always wanted a cute sister who calls me Onii-chan.
But didn’t you had a sister? (-_-)
Yeah? So?
And she has never called you Onii-chan before.
(Author reads this part.) AHAHAHAHA! Oh blue screen ow! my sides, I can’t breath at all. For those of you who have a younger sister, you know what I am laughing about. Oh I am crying, that’s the best joke I have ever heard in my life.
…..You don’t know much about real life, do you bluescreen...
I thought that it really happened. Your world was evil, who would want to live there. ┗(`皿´)┛
“Okay! Onii-chan” (Hinabi) said cutely.
I AM A HAPPY MAN. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW LONG I HAVE WAITED FOR SOMEONE TO CALL ME THAT!!!
Hina just stood there and laughed a bit, she was amused by the way we acted with each other.
“What about me?” (Pedo stache guy)
“As for you, you are no longer needed. The guards will send you your pay for the classes. Thank you, and hopefully we never see you again bye!” (Hina) said as a bunch of guards took the pedo stached guy by force.
“NOO! You can’t do this to me, I am the best waltz teacher ever, and I will not lose to a fight to a brat.” (Pedo stache guy)
“Please throw him out of to the streets.” (Hina) said to her guards.
She never liked the way he treated her neice, and now that he called me brat, that was the last straw for Hina.
“Brat remember my name. My name is- *SLAM*” (Pedo stache guy)
The door slammed shut, and I didn’t hear his name. I guess we’ll never know his name.
“Does that mean that i’m finally free.” (Hinabi
No one here was happier right now than Hinabi. She absolutely despised that guy, and she was even jumping and cheering that she would never have to see him again.
“Yes. and it also means that your ‘Onii-chan’ gets to teach you.” (Hina)
“Yay! Best day EVER!!!” (Hinabi) couldn’t help but yell in pure happiness.
“That reminds me, what was Onii-chan doing here?” (Hinabi) asked.
“What! You don’t want me to be here.” (Chris)
I said with a bit of sadness. I knew what she meant, but I wanted to twist her words and tease her slightly.
Hinabi truly thought that she hurt me, and tried to quickly explain what she meant.
“N-no! Is just that, just that I was curious why you were here.” (Hinabi) tried to explain quickly to me.
“You hurt my feelings, Hinabi. Now i’m sad.” (Chris)
I then turned around and covered my eyes with my Hyuga sleeve, then I started making some fake cries, which I was able to pull magnificantly, thanks to my acting skill.
Hinabi was now trying everything to clear up her misunderstanding. I couldn’t help but laugh a bit, which didn’t escape Hinabi's eyes.
“Wait! You were acting.” (Hinabi) said.
“Ahahaha! You truly thought you made me cry. Wasn’t her reaction great, Hina!” (Chris)
“It was the best. I almost lost it when you started fake crying, I think i’m crying from trying to hold in my laughter.” (Hina) said as she wiped her tears from her face.
“You knew as well aunt Hina! Hm! Now i’m angry.” (Hinabi) made a cute pouting expression, and turned around angrily to avoid both our eyes.
“Aw come on Hinabi, don’t be mad. I promise i’ll do my best to teach you everything I know.” (Chris)
With the new skill that bluescreen gave me, a bunch of move sets about dancing surfaced to my mind. I basically knew everything there was about dancing.
“Hmmm! You promise!” (Hinabi) said as most of her anger subsided.
“Yes I do. Now that I am gonna be living here, you and me will have plently of time to practice.” (Chris)
“Living here? What do you mean.” (Hanabi)
“Well he’s gonna be living with us, starting from today.” (Hina)
“Really! Yay! I always wanted an older brother.” (Hinabi) said as she cheered once again. I’ll never get tired of seeing her cute expressions.
“What about Neji, isn’t he like an older brother to you.” (Chris)
I shouldn’t have said that, as both their expressions changed terribly.
“That’s not funny, Chris.” (Hina)
“Sorry.” (Chris)
I forgot. I thought that I was talking about the Neji after he was beaten by Naruto, he is still the huge prick when he was a kid.
“What’s going on here.” (Hinata) finally appeared after several chapters.
“Onee-chan! You’re finally back.” (Hinabi
“I did. Ah Sensei! I didn’t see you there.” (Hinata) said as she bowed to me.
“Please stop calling me that!” (Chris) getting called 'Onii-chan' is 100x better than being called ‘sensei’
“What are you doing here?” (Hinata) asked me.
“Hinata that is no way to speak to your guest.” (Hina)
“Sorry aunty Hina, and Sensei Chris!” (Hinata) apologized to us.
“He’s gonna be living here from now on.” (Hina) said as she pointed to me.
“Really?! That’s good to hear.” (Hinata) said a bit happy to hear the news.
“Onee-chan. Look what Onii-chan taught me.” (Hinabi) said as she took my hands and forced me to the center of the room.
We once again danced and everyones expression was the same as when me and Hinabi first danced. Never underestimate the powers of a MAXXED out skill.
“Oh my goodness. That was beautiful.” (Hinata) said as she covered her mouth in shock
“It was thanks to Hinabi that she danced so beautifully as well.” (Chris)
“Now you dance with Onee-chan.” (Hinabi) proposed the idea to me.
“Hinabi, there is no need for that.” (Hinata) blushed at the thought of dancing with a boy.
“Please! For me.” (Hinabi) made her cute anime puppy eyes, which Hinata couldn’t say no to.
“Just one dance.” (Chris)
There is nothing wrong if I just danced with Hinata, this is not enough to break the Naruhina fanbase.
“...O-okay. Just one dance” (Hinata) said and blushed.
I gently took her hand, and we both danced to the music. She already knew the basics of waltz, so I didn’t correct her at all. Some little things I corrected her on, but it was basically nothing.
Hinata was a bit more or less my height, so she was the perfect training partner. She was blushing hard, but all I thought about was dancing with her. I never felt this way about dancing, maybe it was a good idea to have this skill.
Just as we were in the middle of the song, it suddenly stopped. I was looked to see what was the problem, until I felt a chill running through my spine.
I looked over my shoulder and see Luna watching us. She loooked very beautiful with her dripping wet hair, and with the Hyuga robes as well. However, her eyes were full of rage, that you could tell that she wanted to stab me to death with those eyes.
“And you said that you didn’t do anything with Hinata hmmm!” (Luna) said as she grabbed a bat, where in the world did she get a bat from?!
“Wait Luna, it’s not what it looks like.” (Chris)
“DIE BITCH!!!” (Luna) said as she launched herself to me, and attacked me with that bat.
I pushed Hinata out of the way, and managed to avoid the attack. Then Luna starting chasing me with the intention to break that bat on my skull.
“Can you please help Onii-chan” (Hinabi) asked her aunt.
“Hinabi, you don’t understand because you’re too young, but no one else can come in between this fight.” (Hina) said.
“But Onii-chan could get hurt. All because I wanted to see Onee-chan dance with Onii-chan.” (Hinabi) said a bit sad of the mess she caused.
“I feel like I should help sensei.” (Hinata) said a bit worried for me
“Don’t worry girls, only Chris is able to participate in this fight.” (Hina) said without being worried for me at all.
Both Hinata and Hinabi didn’t know what her aunt meant, but they knew that they shouldn’t come in between this fight at all.
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