《In the Naruto world (1)》Chapter 18 The day of the Chuunin exams
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THE HOKAGE’S RESIDENCE
The Hokage was just sitting there while going through the huge pile of paperworks beside him, clearly he’s bored and he has to work out these problems by himself.
'I should retire, i’m way too old for this kind of crap’ ‘Hokage thought
“Hello.” (???)
Someone came to the Hokage’s residence without the permission from the Hokage, the Hokage looked up to the person and saw a very familiar face.
“If it isn’t jiraiya, why are you here, at this time you’d be peeping st the girls shower.” (Hokage)
“It’s for research old man, and nothing else”. (Jiraiya) complained
“Hm! What brings you here.” (Hokage)
“Well I came here for two reasons, the first is that I got your message about a kid that managed to learn the rasengan. I am here to meet him.” (Jiraiya)
“I see, his name is Chris Walker and he is training for the upcoming Chuunin exams. But enough about him, what’s your other reason for being here.” (Hokage)
“It was for this thing” (Jiraiya) then took out a scroll seal and something came out of it.
What came out from that seal was a corpse of the alien figure that Chris and the others met at the land of waves.
The Hokage was shocked to see this, then he asked Jiraiya “What is this?” (Hokage)
“I am afriad that even I don’t know the answer to that one, infact someone special gave it to me and asked me to give this to you personally.” (Jiraiya)
“Who is this person exactly.” (Hokage)
“It’s Isabella, she was the one who gave me this corpse” (Jiraiya)
Isabella is a very mysterious girl and is also one of the 5 Sages one has seen her in years. There are several people who said that she is the strongest of the 5 Sages. For her to bring this alien corpse here it must be very important or very dangerous.
“What did she say exactly.” (Hokage)
“She said to never fight these things, and if you ever encounter one, flee as fast as you can.” (Jiraiya)
“If I ever see one? So you mean to say that there are more of these things.” (Hokage)
“Well that’s what she said, apparently she fought against 2 of them, she managed to kill one but barely managed to escape the other. She says that they have super strength, speed, instant regeneration, they don’t even have their 5 senses.
Isabella says that these things can feel chakra from a long distance, she also says that these can steal chakra from anyone who is unfortunate to come accross these things.” (Jiraiya)
“Steal chakra, that is a bit dangerous even for me. But I have never seen such things in all my life, in fact I don’t think there is any scroll or book out there that even mentions these creatures.” (Hokage)
“You’re right Hokage, Isabella said the same thing as you. She also mentioned that it is possible for these creatures to have a queen.” (Jiraiya)
“What makes her think that they have a queen.” (Hokage)
“Well Isabella says that it’s just a theory, but she thinks that these are like ants, and the only way that ants are born is with a queen ant, in this case, these things have a queen that can produce them like ants. Then again this is just a theory, Isabella doesn’t have any evidence for her claims.” (Jiraiya)
“So, I have to evacuate the village. If Isabella couldn’t even face against 2 I don’t think the entire village can stand up to even one.” (Hokage) knew of Isabella’s strength. The last time he saw her she was as strong as him
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And over the years she must have gotten stronger than before, and that also means that is these things can rival her they can certainly kill everyone in the leaf village.
“I didn’t say that Hokage, where Isabella gave me this message I was more than 5 weeks away from the leaf village. But I got here as quickly as I could to deliver this message to you as soon as possible.” (Jiraiya)
“Good ‘sigh’ as long as we’re safe there is nothing to fear, but I will assign more personel to guard the leaf village. And also Jiraiya, until the Chuunin exams are over you are not allowed to leave this village.” (Hokage)
‘Kakashi also mentioned something similar to this, could this be one of the aliens he met during his mission, if so then it’s a matter of time before these things spread around the world’ Hokage thought
“Let me guess, it’s about the 3 tailed beast. Am I right.” (Jiraiya)
“So you already knew.” (Hokage)
“News like that spreads around the world like a wildfire, and don’t worry I wasn’t planning on leaving this village until after i’ve done my research.” (Jiraiya) said and a perverted look appeared on his face.
“Just get out of here.” (Hokage)
Then Jiraiya left and the Hokage was once again left with a dead alien corpse and a pile of work.
‘Now what the hell am I supposed to do with this, I guess i’ll inform the others, maybe Danzo might know a thing or two about this… thing?’ Hokage thought
CHRIS’S APARTMENT
After I left the Hyuga residence I slept through the entire day. I forgot how it felt like to sleep for so long, since I didn’t have anything better to do I thought of doing nothing but sleep in my awesome bed.
I woke up and it was very late in the day, I guess blue screen didn’t wake me up today. Good thing to because I feel super refreshed.
I checked up on Naruto and he was doing fine, he was still sleeping in his house on his bed, I didn’t go in to check on him, I can literally hear his loud snoring outside the door. Just how long does he sleep, I mean he slept through the entire day yesterday and he still is able to sleep this much.
Oh well if he doesn’t want to practice then fine by me, i’ll just practice by myself, I cannot wake him up like i’m his mother or i’m gonna end up spoiling him.
So I headed to my favourite location to practice, since i’ve already understood peace I think it’s time I understood freedom as well. Oh and I am also gonna keep practicing my air walking jutsu, I don’t know why but I have this feeling that I will be able to master it soon.
So I summoned 5000 shadow clones, half of them will stay here with me to understand freedom and the other half will practice the air walking jutsu. Even with my perfect chakra control I can’t get it at all.
It must be because I am used to walking on solid ground and not on the air, it will take some time for me to perfect this jutsu. Enough talking and let’s train.
DAY OF THE CHUUNIN EXAMS
Good news everyone I have managed to get a bit of the air walking jutsu, I can now walk on the sky like there was an invisible bridge. Bad thing is that I still can’t find my balance and I often fall from the sky and fall to the hard cold ground.
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But it’s still a work on progress and i’m glad to see that the sky walking jutsu is having some progress. But I still can’t get a good grasp on freedom, I just don’t get it at all, blue box said that my mind still feels restricted for some reason.
I don’t know what he means by that, but I must get rid of it to understand the power of freedom.
“Chris” (Luna) shouted
I heard a very familiar sound far from where I was, I turned and I swear I saw the cutest girl in the world. It was Luna and she was running to my direction, I ran up to her as well and give her a tight hug and I kissed her on the forehead.
Sorry but I couldn’t stand kissing her on her cute face, I don’t wanna go for the lips yet since our relationship hasn’t gone that far yet.
She blushed hard, but the look on her happy smile told me how happy she was to see me. After I gave her a kiss I sensed a huge amount of killing intent coming from a certain individual.
It was Sasuke glaring at me, but since he was okay with me going out with Luna he couldn’t do a thing about it.
I used my mind read and all I could hear were hateful comments for me, it’s progress because last time it was comments about killing me, burying me alive, etc.
“How are you Luna, I’ve missed you” (Chris) I said and kept hugging her tightly, and ignored Sasuk'es death glare.
“I missed you too, it feels like I haven’t seen you in years.” (Luna) said and planted her head firmly on my chest.
“*Cough* *Cough*” (Sasuke) coughed angrily on purpose, looks like he just can’t stand the sight of me hugging her little sister.
When Luna heard Sasuke’s cough she remembered that he was with her, and now her face was tomatoe red and she quikcly split up from my hug.
“Oh! Hey Sasuke, I didn’t see you there. How have you been” (Chris)
“Sure you didn’t see me, but i’m feeling good as well. I brought her here earlier because she couldn’t stop talking about you all week.” (Sasuke) said
“Brother! I told you not to say that” (Luna) stared angrily at Sasuke while her face was red from embarrasment.
Sasuke smiled a bit and just shrugged it off.
“That reminds me, have you two seen Kat anywhere. I haven’t seen her since a week ago.” (Chris)
“I’m here” (Kat) just showed up in the middle of nowhere and was eating a red apple.
“Kat! Where in the world were you all this time.” (Chris)
“I was practicing for the Chuunin exams, do I need to ask you for permission everytime I leave.” (Kat)
She’s telling the truth, I can feel that she became even stronger than before. Her chakra pool increased by 1.5x, even Sasuke and Luna are stronger than before, I think they unlocked their sharingan powers. Glad to see that they didn’t slack off.
“I see, well now all we need is Dom to be here, we cannot take our exam unless if we are accompanied by our assigned Sensei!” (Chris)
“You don’t need to worry about that, i’m taking over” (Kakashi) also came out of nowhere with a Naruto and a pink haired Sakura beside him.
“What do you mean Kakashi?” (Chris) I asked confused
“Well since Dom isn’t here the Hokage ordered me to look after your team as well, this way you will be able to join the Chuunin exams” (Kakashi)
I think he is still guilty about the fact he ruined our first date, and this is way to apologize to us.
“Thank you Kakashi.” (Chris)
“Thank you as well Kakashi sensei” (Luna)
“Same here.” (Kat)
After that was done we headed straight to where the Chuunin exams will take place, there was still 2 hours left before it started but we thought about it and decided to go early.
These past few days Naruto has been asleep, I don’t get it at all. Doesn’t the 9 tails chakra have an amazing healing ability, but why didn’t Naruto heal fast enough to recover. That’s why I haven’t seen him since that time we fought in his 2 tails form. Until now.
Hinata for some reason hasn’t left the Hyuga residence, I heard they were planning to rejoin her to the Hyuga clan but she rejected them on the spot. It was pretty obvious what she was gonna pick, and right now she is busy learning a high levelled Byakugan skill that was passed down from her ancestors.
TenTen however is a different story from the rest. For the last few days I have sensed her looking for me, clearly she wants to confess her feelings but isn’t able to because I keep hiding from her.
Lee is training even harder than ever, looks like my fight motivated him even more to beat me in a fight.
Neji woke up yesterday and is now ready for the exams, I also heard rumours of him being afraid of Hinata. If I was beaten up by a girl like Hinata I would be scared too. I just hope he doesn’t become a huge prick and plans on getting his revenge for Hinata.
I saw Gaara, Temari and Kankuro. The three of them were strolling around the leaf village, now the odd thing is that I can’t feel the anger from the Gaara that I knew in the anime. If anything he was calm and composed.
He is still the 1 tailed beasts host since he has that seal on top of his eyebrow. I wonder if this Gaara is stronger than the one in the anime, if so then it will be an interesting fight.
On our way to our destination was a bit annoying. First off all Sakura is still the same as ever, she keeps clinging onto Sasuke like a pillow, she hasn’t trained at all, she will be the one to slow down her team. I just hope that Tsunade comes here and trains Sakura, I hate to admit it but Sakura’s medical skills are top notch and so is her strength, I will need her for the future.
Sasuke however didn’t even glare at Sakura and just let her do whatever she wanted, he’s really started to behave himself. This action of his surprised Sakura but she thought it was because he had feelings for her and was afraid of hurting her. So she blushed and kept clinging onto him.
Luna didn’t mind it but she was thinking of teasing her brother in the future because of what he did to her earlier.
Even Naruto, through this whole time didn’t even spare a glance towards Sakura, Hinata really set a special place in his heart.
Kat was about the same as always, only stronger than before, so there’s really nothing much to add there.
But atleast this whole trip wasn’t a loss, I even got to hold Luna’s small and soft hand. We did look like a couple like this, but it was weird with the whole crowd all over us. It just didn’t feel right at all.
We arrived to our classrooms and sat down, strangely no tests like the Genjutsu test on the original anime. However the paper tests was the same as in the original. I met Kabuto on the way and it looks like Orochimaru was here as well.
I don’t know how his chakra feels like so I don’t have a clue where he could be, the other Genins were here too. Including Hinata’s team, Lee’s team, Gaara’s team, etc.
I was on the front row and my other teammates were behind me, Luna was on the back of the corner and Kat was two rows behind me. There were also a bunch of ninja’s on the side as well, they were the ones to monitor our every move.
Now that I remember, hey blue screen I just completed my mission and gave a kiss to Luna, hurry up and give me the rewards for completing the mission
You cheated you damn bastard, I wanted you to kiss her on the lips not on the forehead.
The mission says I only have to give her a kiss, you never mentioned where.
What are you a lawyer, you just found a loophole like that. But you’re right I didn’t make the mission very detailed, well enjoy your crappy reward you bloody wanker. 凸(¬‿¬)
Mission Completed: Give Luna a kiss when she returns
Mission rewards: 5 red rings of harem, 1 black ring of the king.
Uh! What is this.
Well at first this was to troll you, but after you mentioned that you wanted a harem I accidentally helped you make your harem easier.
Blue screen, what does it do.
The red rings are for the ones you want in your harem, they only work on girls so don’t even try to pull any of that gay shit when i’m around. The black ring is for you to wear, it will make your harem submit easier to you.
But be warned, if the girls that wear the rings don’t have any feelings for you at all, then the ring will reappear in your space inventory thingy, this is a percussion incase you want to force someone into your harem. But this is a magical tool as well
It won’t just increase your strength but your harem as well, in short you get stronger they get stronger, or if they get stronger you get stronger as well. It’s a must have for those perverts that want a harem.
Blue screen, if it wasn’t because I was in the middle of the class I would be crying tears of joy right now. What you have given me is definitely something that every man in the world wants. I WISH I CAN KISS YOU RIGHT NOW!!!
Well what are you waiting for. ( ˘ ³˘)
You know I can’t because you’re a blue screen that only I can see.
I know…
...
‘Well this just got akward’ I thought
These rings will be very good for me and Luna, and possibly other candidates. But why did blue screen give me five rings.
(Who knows) Author shruggs and plays the idiot that doesn’t know anything
Then a bald man with a serious face came to this class, it was Ibiki Morino. He first took a long look at us and said.
“Alright everyone listen up, I don’t like any of you and i’m sure any of you don't like me.” (Ibiki)
“...” (Everyone)
“This is what I want you to do, you must answer the questions on the paper you have in front of you…” (Ibiki) (Let’s skip this part since i’m sure everyone here knows what's about to happen next)
(If you don’t know what happens then read the manga or watch the anime, either one will do)
I flipped my paper then a bunch of answers were there, good think I betted that the exams would be the same. I used my mind reading powers on some people here, until I found one with the answers and copied them down.
It took a while to copy them but I noticed Luna was doing fine, she was using her sharingan and copied some guys notes on her sheet. Kat was having a bit of trouble, she hasn’t answered one single question.
I know that this test doesn’t care if you got the questions or not, what matters most it that you won’t get caught. But since this world is very different from the original i’m not gonna take any
I then froze time and headed for Kat’s direction, I switched my paper for hers and quickly headed back to my desk.
Time unfroze and everything was back to normal, Kat was shocked that her once empty sheet of paper was full of answers. She looked at my direction but I gave her a small thumps up, she knew that it was me and she was grateful.
I then re-copied the notes down and I was finished... Later some people were caught then he/she and their teams were kicked out. I didn’t help Naruto or anyone else since it makes them stronger to do things by themselves.
After a long time the class was over, and only a handful of us were left. It was good to see that no one from the original Naruto was kicked out.
“Alright you filthy maggots, I will give you one more test, if you pass it then you will move on to the next test. However if you fail this test, you will quit your ninja career forever” (Ibiki)
After Ibiki said this people began to protest, but Ibiki didn’t like that and countered with
“It’s your bad luck for getting me this year, so tell me do you want to take this test or not. But remember, if you fail you lose your right to become a ninja forever” (Ibiki)
Some people were now scared because of his words, some people were very afraid and decided to quit. Kat was very nervous as well, she almost raised her hand but I turned around and shook my head hard.
I signalled her ‘don’t worry, leave this to me’ She understood what I meant and put her hand down. Luna however was fine as well, she was kinda nervous but not as much as Kat.
Everyone else was feeling the same way, I did to, so just incase something doesn’t go my way I chose to read Ibiki’s mind
…*Whew* I knew it, it is exactly like in the anime, hey blue screen I thought you said that everything in this world will be different
I didn’t say everything, I only said some things will be different, not everything.
Fair enough.
Then soon only a few teams including mine were left out of the entire classroom. Seeing this Ibiki smiled evily at us and said once more.
“This is your last chance to quit.” (Ibiki)
None of us said anything, I was as cool as a cucumber and that’s it.
He then smiled and said.
“Gongratulations, all of you have passed the test.” (Ibiki)
“Good since you’re finished it’s my time to shine bitches!” (Anko)
“Hrr! Anko, wait your turn” (Ibiki)
None of us got a chance to say anything before Anko came here to interupt the classroom
“I did wait my turn, and you said that everyone here is finished so it is technically my turn now.” (Anko)
“Hrr! Have it your way” (Ibiki) said and left the classroom, he was angry at Anko since he doesn’t like to be interrupted
Anko turns to us and with a smile and said
“Alright everyone it’s time for my test. And it is… Capture the flag” (Anko)
“...” (Everyone)
It’s times like these that I like god mode more than the original script
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