《Time & Tied》Part 51a: The Visionaries
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TIME & TIED: DESTRUCTION
ARC 3.1 - With Chartreuse
PART 51a: THE VISIONARIES 1
"Luci! Guess what I got today!” Frank said as he opened the door for his girlfriend.
"The popcorn?" the young asian guessed, entering the Dijora house and looking at him in amusement. "I mean, that was our arrangement, you get the popcorn, I get the movie..."
"Yes, yes, but look what I received in the way of change," Frank said, fumbling in his pocket for the money. He held six coins out for inspection.
Luci stared. “They... overcharged you?"
"The dates," Frank said patiently. "Look at the dates."
Comprehension dawned. “Oh! Two more from the current year."
"Yup," Frank affirmed as he pocketed them. "It’s weird, for whatever reason, we haven’t had as many recently minted coins in circulation this year. I don’t know why, but it could be a problem for when we resume time trips."
"When? Not if? Carrie hasn’t authorized more time trips.”
"Well, no," Frank admitted. "But she can’t hold out indefinitely, can she? In particular, now that she’s gone out with Glen, we may want to use the time machine to investigate..."
"OKAY, stopping that train of thought before it leaves the station," Luci interrupted. "No Glen tonight. Movie tonight. Yes?"
“Yes, right,” Frank agreed. "What did you find?” Luci smirked as she held up the casing. Frank's eyebrow went up as he read it. "Stephen King’s 'Carrie'?," he questioned. Luci nodded.
***
Sunday afternoon found Chartreuse ringing the doorbell at the Waterson residence. Carrie's father answered it for her moments later. "Um, hi!" she began. "Is Carrie in? I think we, like, have something that we need to talk about."
Hank Waterson shook his head. “She is here, but she's not feeling very well. Could you come back another day?”
Chartreuse pursed her lips. "I could. Except I think I know what her problem is, why she’s been so, you know, withdrawn all weekend. And I think I can help."
"Really?" Hank said. "What’s wrong? I know she doesn't have a fever, but it seems to be more than an upset stomach..."
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"It’s related to our weekly sessions," Chartreuse hedged. "Can I please talk to her?”
"She refuses to speak with anyone. Insisting only aggravates her - I had to turn away both Frank and Luci when they came by. In fact, it's all I can do to get her to say anything to me."
"Carrie doesn't have to speak to me, only listen," Chartreuse pleaded. "Please, Mr. Waterson? I know what I'm talking about."
"Well... all right. Come in," Hank Waterson decided, moving aside. "I do hate to see my daughter like this and I'm at a bit of a loss as to a solution. You sure she won't mind seeing you?"
***
"Go away!" Carrie shouted through her bedroom door.
"Carrie, hear me out!" Chartreuse protested. "You're upset because of the fire at the cafe, right?”
No reply. Chartreuse knew she was right. The pink haired girl motioned with her hands for Carrie’s father to depart.
He looked at his daughter’s door, then back at her. “Call me if she starts throwing things,” Mr. Waterson said at last, before heading back downstairs.
"Look, I understand some of what you're going through," Chartreuse continued, once she was alone. "I'd like to tell you a story about the time my abilities caused trouble in my life too. Can’t I, like, say it to your face?"
Nothing.
"Fine, I'll talk through the door," Chartreuse continued stubbornly. "It all started three years ago, when I was fourteen. I'd received a disturbing vision. It was a vision of death..."
~~~
"There has to be something we can do!" Chartreuse said desperately, nibbling on a lock of her violet coloured hair. "I don't want Fluffy to die! Not like that!!"
Her mother sat down on the bed next to her. "I'm sorry, Chartreuse," she said softly. "We can warn her, but I'm not sure she'd understand us. Fluffy's always enjoyed playing in traffic, it was just a matter of time."
"But... but it's not right!" Chartreuse objected. "Can't she be kept in her house? Can't we prevent things that way?"
"She'd find a way out," Mrs. Vermilion sighed. "You know her, she's sneaky that way. There are some things you can stop, Chartreuse, and other things that are inevitable. You have to let this one go, dear. Fluffy's death is meant to happen."
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"But Mom, she's your own sister-in-law," the violet haired girl sobbed. "If this is what it means to see the future, I don't want to see it any more!"
"Chartreuse, she may have married your uncle, but me and Fluffy weren't that close," her mother insisted. "Now, please, try to work through this. You can take all the time you need."
~~~
"Hold it!" Carrie interrupted. The lock clicked, and the door of her bedroom opened a crack. "Are you telling me Fluffy was your aunt?!"
"Yes," Chartreuse sighed. "It was so horrible. She died when a tree fell on her."
Carrie glared at Chartreuse with one eye. "You're making this up.”
"I am not!" Chartreuse said indignantly. "Our other aunt, Emerald, was quite broken up about it. I think maybe my Mom was too, but of course since she can see, like, astral projections, she could still talk to Fluffy after her sister-in-law’s death."
"But... if a tree fell on Fluffy, what did playing in traffic have to do with anything?"
“If Fluffy hadn't been in the road, the tree would have, you know, missed her," Chartreuse said patiently. "Now, are you going to keep asking questions, or can I continue my story?"
Carrie hesitated, which Chartreuse took to be a yes.
~~~
"All right, Chartreuse," Mr. Vermilion said, entering the room. "I'm sorry, but we can't afford to give you any more time to grieve."
"But Dad, it's been less than an hour!” the orange haired girl wailed. "Can't I at least--"
~~~
"Stop! You said your hair was violet a minute ago," Carrie interrupted again.
"Did I?"
"You did! How can it be orange less than an hour later?"
“Maybe you, like, misheard me through the door. Can I come into your bedroom already?"
Carrie glared at Chartreuse again before finally opening the door wide enough to allow the other girl inside.
"Thank you," Chartreuse said as she walked into Carrie’s bedroom for the first time. "Ooh, you have a nice room here, Carrie. Nice pyjamas too.”
"Don't try and change the subject," Carrie said, closing the door and moving to lie back down on her bed. “Now, skip to the part where your story has something to do with the fire I was in.”
"Oh... were you actually in the cafe when your vision happened?" Chartreuse said. "I didn't realize. Maybe this isn't the most appropriate story after all."
Carrie sat back up. “I knew it! You’ve been making it up."
“No way,” Chartreuse objected. "You want to know what, like, happened next?"
"Okay," Carrie retorted. "What happened next?"
~~~
"Honey, I'm sorry," Mr. Vermilion said. "But we may need you to use your abilities--"
"I'm not ever using them again,” Chartreuse countered. "I'm renouncing my powers. I don't wanna know anything more about what might be happening around me.”
"But the Prime Minister of Canada has a very important job for us to do," her father insisted. "Won't you at least listen to what he has to say?"
The orange haired girl eyed him. “Well... all right, I'll listen. But I won't do anything I don’t want to.”
"That's my girl," Mr. Vermilion said with a smile.
He reached out to twist the bedknob on his daughter's bed, which caused the mirror on the vanity to rotate 90 degrees. The two of them jumped into the tunnel now visible behind the mirror, sliding down a chute and falling into the couch at the bottom. Mrs. Vermilion looked over and smiled at them as she reached out and clicked on a small remote. A large wall screen lit up with an image of Jean Chretien.
"'Allos!" the former Prime Minister of Canada said. "As I was saying, I am having a very important jobs for you Vermoothians.”
~~~
“CHARTREUSE!"
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