《Cheat Hero》Chapter 1 - Rewards
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When I woke up, my eyes felt fuzzy.
I glance to the side and saw a white hair child with green eyes, well the child looks like a girl but he/she gives off male kind of vibes
"Yo! Awake?" the child said.
"Yeah.. Who are you?" I said but I can't move nor feel my body at all.
" Me? I'm a god" Ehhh? He/She's a god?
"According to what you said you're a god? It means there are other gods out there." well I believe that he/she is a god after all if he/she is lying I'll find myself lying ina hospital room and not in a NEET's room but I'm somewhat astonished that there are many gods and not just one.
"Yup! To be specific I'm Lan the god of games and Im only one of the thousands pf god out there.."
"I have a question first, are you a boy or a girl?" I asked.
"Me I'm a boy" he said
"By the way where am I? Am I in hell or what?"
"Well I decided to reward you, naturally all souls will reincarnated at some time but the process for reincarnating will sometime takes thousands of years, you are lucky if you were reborn within a hundred years, well in short I'm giving you a chance to be reborn at my world by the way you won't need to wait for a long time " he said.
"Ehh me?" I was shocked that I was being rewarded but I can't helped but wonder to myself what did I did to be rewarded so I decided to ask him "But why am I being rewarded?"
"Well you play [Legend] right? You defeated me in a duel in there so I decided to reward you for defeating by the way you are the first to defeat me"
I was dumbfounded that the reason why am I being rewarded was because of game, but it also made me felt happy after all I defeated a god even if its a game but I wonder what is the name of his player after all almost thousand of players challenged and dueled with me so I asked him.
"....Lan? Can I know your name in the game..?"
"Mine? Its Dragneel. Why?" He said
Well I wasn't surprised that much after all the strongest opponent I fought was Dragneel. So I already had my suspicions regarding his character,while I was thinking this Lan spoke to me.
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"Nothing."
"Well I challenged you to a duel, 3 rounds. By the way on each round you win I'll gice you a reward so try to win all three rounds" He said to me while snapping his fingers then 2 computers appeares out of nowhere.
I can't helped but sigh to his powers"
we sat down and connected to the game and went to the forest for that is the location for our duel. After arriving I can see a dragonoid, 2 arms and legs with dark blue scales with a hint of black, a tail with a spike at the end and two straight horns on the head after seeing me arrived, he sent a duel request to me and accepted it. Then a countdown started
"5" I went to my position
"4"readied my skills
"3" I also readied my two swords on my hands with another sword on my back
"2" I saw Dragneel readied his weapon a black spear then...
"1, START!"
I activated one of my 3 buff skills [Absolute Blade] this increases my attack for 30%. Dragneel sprang out towards me at high speed to parry I activated [Meteor slash] which clash towards the enemy with the power of a meteor falling, after I parried his attack Dragneel.
I use [Retribution], it allows me to dash towarss the enemy in an instant, and successfully landed an attack, using my omni-tier item, [Eyes of eve], I check his remaining health an only 15% was reduced. By the way during my attack he also countered and reduced almost 12% of my HP.
After a few exchange both of us only have 5% health remaining, I activated [God's judgement] thousand of swords appeared above Dragneel, then a few milliseconds the swords strikes towards him, this was an unblockable skill I was sure that he will die but what happen made me astonished for he also activated a skill, but it was too late a huge black spear appeared above me piercing me, there only a few centimeters so it's too late to dodge. Both of us died at the same time resulting to draw thus the first round ended.
At the 2nd round both of us were at a stalemate until we reached 50% he activated his 30 hits combo resulting in insta-killing me. Then the last round After reaching 70% I activated [God's Judgement] reducing his life by 30% seeing his life he activated a skill but before it was activated, I also activated my 30 hits combo. I threw my 3 swords around him in triangular manner.
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Then using those swords I blinked towards the swords and use it to slash it to him, this comvo is one of the strongest, for one will not know on what sword I will blinked on.
That happen for 30 time resulting in instakilling him, thus the result was 1 win, 1 lose and 1 draw. After that we disconnected and Lan spoke to me
"Hahaha! You defeated me once and the other one ended in a draw. So I will grant you a reward. Because the first round is a draw it will only be a half, So you will be reborn as your character but you will be a baby and your powers will be sealed, as you get stronger you can unlock its power! So goodluck getting stronger, by the way you're items aren't included but if you unlock atleast 50% of your power I'll give you your [Eyes of eve] consider it as a gift" ehhh why [EoE]?
"Then the next one I will grant you one wish state it"
Well I already have a cheat power, and I can accept on where I will be born, my only regret I wasn't able to bid a proper farewell to my fiancée.
"Can I meet with my fiancée one last time? I want to say something to her before I will be reborn" I said to him
"Ahh, that's a little hard you know after all, I don't govern your world but I think with my powers it's possible if its only for only 20 seconds ok so try your best convey it as fast as possible by the she will not see you but she will feel you and hear you" I was happy after knowing I can talk to her at least 20 seconds then
I found myself in a room, it was my former room, I saw my computer can't I bring that with me, then I saw a woman crying in my bed it was my fiancée I decided to speak.
"Hon"
After hearing my voice she stand and look for me but as a soul she can't see "Where are you" she said while crying. I went beside her and said
"I'm here beside you, I can only speak to you and you can't see me, I only have a few seconds left, I want to say I love you and our child, please take care of yourself and our child, try your best to live and find some to love again" after saying those words I kissed his forehead and I can see his body tremble slightly she was crying while saying "I love you" while nodding, it makes my heart aches seeing her crying.
I found myself again in Lan's room ,he was playing a game console again then he spoked to me.
"Have you already said what you want to her?" I just nodded. "Then I'll send you now"
"wait I have something to ask, can I have a chande to become a god?" I asked, then he suddenly laugh lime he heard the funniest joke ever but being laughed like that it makes me feel anjoyed then he spoke.
"Hahha. We gods aren't former humans nor mortals, we are incarnation of your beliefs. For example hundreds of years ago in europe, they created they created their own gods, thus the greek gods were born, because of thag zeus, hades etc were born and like in japan, there is also Izanami, amaterasu so on.
So you mortals don't have the chance to be a god but if you reaches a certain strength you can be immortal,on how to become one you need to find it out by yourself. Ahh you are becoming annoying I'll send you now" he said
With that my consciousness fades.
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I woke up with my eyes feeling uncomfortable. It looks like I was reincarnated huh. I saw 2 figures looking at me with me being born my eyes were still undeveloped so I can only see blurs, but judging on their physique one is a man and the other is a woman. I can feel my hands and feet yet I can't move them
"XXXXXXX-XXXX" the female figure suddenly spoke, what the heck is that language it's not even English
"XXXXX-XXXXXXXX-XX" The other figured replied.
It like they are talking about me. I can't see their expressions but judging on their voice they are anxious about something.... I tried to figure out the reason why they are anxious but only one thing came to my mind, I didn't cry. I remember the reincarnation novels I heard where the parents were worried why their child isn't crying.
"Uwaaaa...uwaaa!" I imitated a crying infant, I think I did a good job, but why do I feel like I was an animal crying.
They spoked again but why does it feel it made them more anxious while thinking this drowsiness striked me and I fell asleep.
Ahh. By the way, do you prefer this kind of narration or the 3rd person narrative?
And I need your review fro me to know on how will i improve it.
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