《Dimensional Mage(?)》Dimensional Mage - Update
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I honestly didn't expect so many people to read my story, but I am happy that people read it even if it's not the best novel. Even I am not happy with it anymore. If you read the review I got on my novel, you know why I am doing what I am doing.
I tried too hard to speed through the "Into" dungeon that it doesn't feel like he is struggling and it doesn't feel like it's his first time and reason for that is the Willpower stat. Willpower would make him too strong mentally that he doesn't panic and keeps his calm all the time. That would make it hard to establish the character of the MC in the early chapters. So I will change Willpower to Wisdom, the only change is that wisdom won't wtop him from panicking or similar.
I won't make a pussy MC but I will make the start more realistic.
I will rewrite the novel. I will also change some stats and the o really mechanics. Nothing too fancy but I still recommend you guys to read the new chapers. I will try to make the new chapters better. I want them to be more from the MCs perspective and I want them to "feel" better. It might take a day or two to update them, but they should be better overall, now that I have some writing experience.
Thanks for your understanding and I hope you guys will still read the novel!
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