《Begsissbbdd》Abandon it??
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well, should I still continue writing this story? Mannnn a lot of reviews said that my story is unreadable or bad so I kinda lost my motivation, I’m not complaining though I appreciate their time for reading this but dude, that hurt my pride -.-😂 i’m saying this not because i’m complaining, i’m saying this because i just want to know if my readers can actually understand my english, that’s all
well, should I still continue writing this story? Mannnn a lot of reviews said that my story is unreadable or bad so I kinda lost my motivation, I’m not complaining though I appreciate their time for reading this but dude, that hurt my pride -.-😂 i’m saying this not because i’m complaining, i’m saying this because i just want to know if my readers can actually understand my english, that’s all
(need at least 500 words to upload this-)
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