《The Right Place At The Wrong Time》Character Sheet - First Edition
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'The Right Place At the Wrong Time'
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The Right Place At the Wrong Time - Official Character Sheet
by: LazDollarz
The Right Place At the Wrong Time Timeline
Present Time:
November 19, 2000 - Izzaya (Formerly Coffin Lake), Haggrew - Time Travelling Day
Past Time:
June 13, 1927 - Coffin Lake, Haggrew - Starting Point
-Steven "Stevie" Vincenzo - Main Protagonist
Born: November 13, 1982
Age: 18
Parents: Tony and Judy Vincenzo
Desire: To know more about the Grizzly Haggrew Murders and possibly prevent them. To ultimately save everyone that will die in the hands of "Triggerman". Eventually grows a liking in living in the Prohibition era and is hoping to stay there.
Motivation: Came upon the dark past when he was forced to learn more about it in the neighborhood library, having seen that it had ties to his family name -- Vincenzo.
Fear: Some inevitable circumstances will stop him from staying in 1927 to prevent the murder kidnappings and also live out his life there. Triggerman might also target him.
Misbelief: He can eventually live out his life in 1927 after all of it is over.
Strength: He is determined to solve and prevent the murders.
Weaknesses: Naïve, and can be easily overcome by his emotions.
-Charles "Ford" Mondt IV - Steven's Closest Friend in the Present Time
Born: June 13, 1982
Age: 18
Parents: Thirdy and Janice Mondt
Desire: Tried to measure Stevie's courage by daring him to go inside the old abandoned house.
Motivation: Eager to help Stevie get used to his new life in Izzaya.
Fear: His new friend fails to adapt to his new life in Izzaya.
Misbelief:
Strength: He is determined to help his friend out
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Weaknesses: Looks down on his family background, deeming himself higher than them.
-Isabelle "Izzy" Elliott - Eventually becomes Stevie's love interest in the past
Born: November 19, 1909
Age: 17 (In 1927)
Parents: Admiral/Detective Thomas Elliott and Mrs. Emma Elliott
Desire: To help Stevie in his mission to save the victims of the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
Motivation: Her belief towards Stevie.
Fear: She believes that Stevie will leave and never come back once their quest is over.
Misbelief: She doesn't believe that Stevie is from the future but entertains him, she believes him about the Grizzly Murders though, since she's open to the possibilities of seeing the future through visions.
Strength: Supportive, especially towards Stevie.
Weaknesses: Fear of people leaving her.
-Charles "Charlie" Mondt - Ford's great-grandfather, Stevie's rival in 1927
Born: October 9, 1909
Age: 17 (In 1927)
Parents: Gen. Davy and Jane Mondt
Desire: To bully and terrorize Stevie into "coming back from whence he came."
Motivation: He wants to keep his self-proclaimed "spotlight" in the neighborhood and fears that Stevie was going to steal it from him.
Fear: He's intimidated by Stevie's presence and he's scared that Stevie will soon take his "popularity."
Misbelief: He firmly believes that Stevie is there to steal his "spotlight" and become the new "talk of the town."
Strength: He's determined to achieve whatever goal he believes will help him unless proven that it will affect him negatively.
Weaknesses: His emotional quotient is quite low which is definitely a bad thing considering that he acts solely based on his emotions. He's also pretty low maintenance.
-General Davy Mondt - Charlie's Father
-Jane Mondt - Charlie's Mother
-Florentia "Lori" Wagner - Charlie's girlfriend, Ford's great-grandmother
Born: December 3, 1910
Age: 16 (In 1927)
Parents: Bill and Alissa Wagner
Desire: To stay by Charlie's side till the end.
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Motivation: Charlie.
Fear: For Charlie to abandon her. She also fears that Charlie will get himself into trouble.
Misbelief:
Strength: A sweet and kind girl that is ready to support anyone important to her.
Weaknesses: She puts people's, especially Charlie's, safety over hers.
-Bill Wagner - Lori's Father
-Alissa Wagner - Lori's Mother
-Admiral/Detective Thomas Elliot - Izzy's father
Born: 1885 (Secret Reference: Comment if you know)
Age: 42 (In 1927)
Parents: Unknown
Desire: To bring justice and safety for Coffin Lake, Haggrew.
Motivation: Left the army to protect Coffin Lake for his wife and his little girl, Izzy.
Fear: That something bad will happen to Coffin Lake, especially to his family.
Misbelief: That the city is full of vermin looking to hurt people every chance they get, hates the mob more than anything.
Strength: His sense of justice and safety is commendable.
Weaknesses: Gets too focused on his job now as a detective of Coffin Lake.
-Emma Elliott - Detective Tommy's wife
-Tony Vincenzo - Stevie's Father
-Judy Vincenzo - Stevie's Mother
-Charlie "Thirdy" Mondt III - Ford's Father
-Janice U. Mondt - Ford's Mother
-Charlie "Junior" Mondt II - Thirdy's Father, Ford's "Grampy Jun"
-Bonnie V. Mondt - Thirdy's Mother, Ford's "Nana Bonbon"
"GRIZZLY HAGGREW MURDER KIDNAPPINGS"
WARNING: EXPLICIT AND GOREY CONTENT.
YOU'VE BEEN WARNED!
Victims:
-Edward "Lil Eddie" Hertz - First victim of the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
Born: Sometime in 1915
Age: 12
Parents: Neglectful Parents.
Disappeared: July 4, 1927
Found: Laying on a bench in Haggrew Park
State of the body:
-Gunshot wounds on the torso
-Mangled body and neck
-Hands and feet were cut off and their stubs were painted black and red
-Card that wrote "Trigger" hidden inside the victim's leg
-Jackie Veronica Nelson - Second victim of the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
Born: Sometime in 1911
Age: 16
Parents: Rapist father, deceased mother.
Disappeared: August 6, 1927
Found: Outside of a brothel
State of the body:
-Gunshot wounds on the torso
-Naked
-Mangled neck
-Mons Pubis was cut open and the female reproductive system was cut out except for the vagina
-Raped(possibly by several men from the brothel): Semen and lacerations found all over the vagina
-Card that wrote "Trigger" found inside the victim's breasts
-Dewey Miller - Third victim of the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
Born: Sometime in 1912
Age: 15
Parents: Rich but absent parents.
Disappeared: September 7, 1927
Found: Laying in the fields, found by his maid and butler
State of the body:
-Gunshot wounds on the torso
-Mangled body and neck
-Skinned
-Card that wrote "Trigger" hidden inside the chest cavity
-Kim & Pedro Fernandez - twins, Fourth and Fifth victims of the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
Born: Sometime in 1911
Age: 16
Parents: Immigrants from the Philippines.
Disappeared: November 1, 1927
Found: Both floating over Lake Coffin
State of the body:
-Gunshot wounds on the torso
-Mangled Body and Neck
-Had all their teeth pulled out, gums and palate shredded, tongue had been cut
-Cards that wrote "Trigger" stuffed deep inside their throats
-Johnney "Crusty" Vincenzo - Alleged Serial Killer alias "Triggerman"
- Stevie's Ancestor
- Alleged Button Mobster (Hitman of the Mob)
Age: 43
Caught on: November 20, 1927
Died: November 20, 1927 - Shanked by all the inmates due to being "Triggerman"
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-Isabelle "Izzy" Elliott
- Had the most gruesome death in the Grizzly Haggrew Murder Kidnappings
- Had the neighborhood named after her
Born: November 19, 1927
Age: 17
Parents: Admiral/Detective Thomas Elliott and Ms. Emma Elliott
Disappeared: —#*&$+= @#-&, 1927
Found: Found on the foot of Haggrew Hill on November 19,
State of the body:
-Gunshot wounds all over the body parts
-Head and limbs were sawed off and laying on top of the torso
-Skinned
-Hands and feet were cut off from the limbs and the stubs were painted black and red
-Mons Pubis cut open and female reproductive system cut out
-Had all her teeth pulled out, gums and palate shredded, tongue had been cut
-Eyes were plucked out and eyelids were stapled wide open
-Body parts were covered by a bloodstained tarpaulin that wrote "Trigger"
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