《Would you please become the Demon Lord? (COMPLETED)》Not a chapter.
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So Today I got two people who helped me greatly. One directly edited a chapter and showed the errors while the other sent me an accurate guide on how to write the lines of my story correctly. Now that I read my chapters again, there is a whole load of errors on them. Even though most people don't comment on them, I think that writing half-ass will leave a sour taste in my mouth. I am not a native english speaker and it is only my 3rd or 4th language which I rarely use if I am not writing.
I decided that I needed to do a massive editing on this work and that means sacrificing my writing time. I don't know if I can maintain the daily updates in weekdays which I am doing so far unless I miss some days. I know some people will say that it does not affect the story much and I love all of you guys who think that way but on my part as an author, I want to create something at least to be of standard. I don't wish for it to be perfect as I write on the spot and that means inconsistency sometimes but I at least want to make it better than this.
If anyone is interested in helping me with this great task. Please... pretty please...Help me? This rooster is alone in the world... I don't want to take too much time so I can write before those ideas fly out of the window of my mind. My writing is not perfect and I know that people is only waiting for the definite hammer of the story to fall and I am still not there but I will further delay that matter until I finish editing.
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I thank all of my readers and all the lurkers who keep the views rising silently. Cheers to all people who left comments and I give my cookies to the ones which left positive reviews and encouragement. Lastly, Shout out to the two people who helped me see the bridge in writing better. Salute to
Maromar
unsealedcolt
for their unselfish help.
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