Hello everyone who's reading this. At this moment in time I'm working on revising the earlier chapters. If you'd like, the first chapter, the prologue has been finished. Chapter 60 will come soon but I'm going try and take more time on chapters now, not that I'll probably stick to that but still!

Anyways, if possible, before I edit the earlier chapters, 1-9, I'd like for you, the reader, if you'd like of course, to go back and read it. Tell me what you dislike about them and what changes I could possibly make to improve them. Even if you don't I'll still go back and rewrite the chapters while staying true to the original events, simply improving the story telling and adding in a few reactions and such.

Like I said, the prologue is finished so I'd like to ask what everyone thinks of that.

Also, I'd like to apologize for not being able to provide that kind of story telling in the first place but over time I've improved. Thanks.