《Finley- The Lost Prince》REWRITE
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OKAY!
So as I edited this entry of Finley, I realized that my writing style has changed quite a bit and I was changing a lot more than I thought I would >.
it wouldn't really be fair to have all of the lovely comments and reviews you all left me on an entirely new body of work so I decided to bite the bullet and make a new entry. Since It's mainly editing I'll be updating it pretty frequently and trying to get through it so I can focus on my newer story 'Watchtower'. But if any of you would like to revisit Finley's story with me then I would be flattered!
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