《Shonen Hero System》Last Try
Advertisement
Murakami was smiling brightly and blushing.
"That was fun!" The girl said.
"Through my belly hurts a bit…"
Silently, I stopped grasping her waist. I had been holding onto the girl through our entire dive toward the foot of the mountain. It was a pleasant experience, in some ways. However, I couldn't pay much attention to it. It's hard to pay attention to anything at all while driving at such a high speed.
"Ha…" The girl sighed.
I looked at the sun. It was lying low on the horizon. Not so long ago, it was blinking at me through the leaves while we had been driving down the mountain road.
I jumped on my feet from the bike and, while somewhat shaking, walked to the bus stop. Murakami started driving behind me. Then, I sat down on the bench. The girl stopped.
"Thanks," I told her.
"My pleasure!"
"I will ride a bus now."
"Yeah."
"…"
"…"
"Yeah" what? Why is she still here? Is she going to accompany me to the city? Why?
On the other side of the road, there was another bus stop. A wooden house was standing behind it. Suddenly, a bus approached.
"It's mine."
"Oh… See you then."
"See you too…"
The bus stopped. I walked inside of it and found myself a seat.
Soon, the bus started moving. Suburbs were passing by in the window. I found myself bored looking at them, and was about to kill some time with my phone, but then I remembered that it had been out of power. Having nothing to do, I slowly fell asleep…
When I woke up, I suddenly felt afraid. Have I missed my stop? However, soon the mechanical voice pronounced the name of the street that I have been going through, and the doors of the bus opened. I walked out.
Advertisement
There were many people on the street. It was evening already, and everyone was going home. Somehow, I managed to get through the crowd and entered the hotel.
Then, five minutes after, I entered my room.
It was dark inside.
Curtains were drawn.
I walked through the room and entered the balcony. The cold and yellow sky was hanging above. The mighty wind was blowing in my face. Trying to endure it, I gazed at the city below.
It was big. Really big.
It resembled both Hong Kong with its oversized skyscrapers and Tokyo with its abundance of advertisements shining from everywhere no matter where you look. I could see a Ferris wheel far away…
And right in the middle of the city (very far from where I was), a truly gigantic skyscraper was stretching toward the heavens. It was glassy and enormous. As I knew from the information I managed to get about the city in the meantime, that building was the headquarters of Misuragiri-corp. It was a very rich corporation, though I didn't remember what was their trade exactly.
Somehow, I felt that there was a potential for a story here.
I had been just standing there, looking at the scenery until once again I felt very hungry. I walked back into the room. A small fridge was standing there. I found a pack of sausages and ketchup.
And that was my meal.
After that, I took the suitcase with all my stuff and left the room for good.
Once again, I walked into the street. Then, I waited for the bus.
It was already evening when I came back.
I was about to walk toward the school when, suddenly, I saw a red bike near the bus stop.
I felt surprised and then I saw a girl on the bench.
Advertisement
It was Murakami.
What is she doing here? Has she been waiting for me? Why? I was about to ask her, but then I stopped myself from doing that. I saw that the girl was sleeping. Her eyes were shut. She lowered her head, and her hair was hanging almost to her knees. Her pose seemed very unstable. As if even a slight push could make her fall.
Carefully, I walked toward the girl and said:
"Hey… Get up."
Silence.
I touched her shoulder. Murakami shivered and opened her eyes. They were beautiful and blue. Then, she smiled and looked at my suitcase.
"Can I help you? We're…"
"Neighbours… Sure."
Murakami smiled and stood up.
"Guess we can tie it to the bike somehow…"
And so we did with a wire the girl had on her for some reason.
Then Murakami started pedaling while I was pushing the suitcase from behind.
We were ascending the mountain.
It was hard. I had already been very tired by that moment. However, soon, for some reason, it was becoming easier and easier. I had been confused until I noticed that it was because of the girl. Murakami was pushing harder and harder so that I will be able to relax.
Well, that's good. She's in much better shape than I am, and she had been sleeping not so long ago. So she isn't as tired as I am… If that was any other day in my life, I would have left all the work to the girl.
However:
"Go get I rest. I will do it on my own after that," I said to her.
For a simple reason.
A shonen protagonist should be overprotective of women and he shouldn't let them do any hard work even if they are stronger than he is.
That is what I thoughts, and it turned out to be right, for soon after I was granted points for my behavior:
(18+2=20)
Murakami turned and looked at me.
"No!" she said.
…
Oh well.
We continued our ascent. Soon, the girl started to whistle a song.
Yellow Submarine.
Strange, wasn't she a fan of another famous British band? Maybe in this world, every song written by the Beatles has actually been written by Queen.
What a cursed world it is then…
"Hey, look at that cloud," said the girl all of a sudden pointed at the sky. A prolate cloud, colored in yellow by the sun, was flowing up there.
"It looks like an eggplant," said Murakami.
"Yeah..."
It did.
…
I was wet from sweat when we, at last, ascended the mountain. Murakami, on the other hand, was as active as ever. There was a great difference in our strength.
We entered the forest path. The wind died down by then. The world was still and yellow as if it was frozen in a drop of amber.
Soon, I saw our dorm.
"Here we are," said Murakami with a smile on her face.
"Will be back soon," she said and started driving her bike to the storeroom.
Suddenly, watching her walk away, I had a thought. The day hasn't ended yet, so maybe I still could accomplish my mission.
It was a bit risky. And awkward, but… I should at the very least try.
"Hey."
I called her and the girl turned to me.
"Do you want to be friends?"
Advertisement
- In Serial794 Chapters
Mythran's Master Of All - Continued (Completed!)
This started out as Mythran's property. It's a tribute to his story and I wanted to continue Ren's tale. The first 16 chapters by Mythran are here: Master Of All, Jack Of None Please Note: This story has been completed at 10,010 pages or 2,752,750 words, Dec. 7th, 2018 (Previous records of 2 million March 31st 2018, First record of 1 million on May 30th, 2017) 17 year old Ren Haddon hasn’t had an easy life. His drug addict parents used him as a lab rat and left him almost crippled for life. After they were caught, he went on to spend his life in the hospital. Under constant care, the white walls of his room was all he knew... until that day. That fateful day his name was drawn out from millions of others to receive a one of a kind class in the new virtual world game called F.L.O.W. (‘Fantasy Life Online World’). These are his adventures.
8 292 - In Serial115 Chapters
Rifts in the Weave
Jes is a normal twenty-something American dealing with a 2020 that just keeps getting worse. She's driving home for the latest in that series of awful events when she runs headlong into something unexpected. Nearly 400 years ago, the continent of Charan was embroiled in a terrible war. To stop the war, its inhabitants literally tore a hole in the fabric that holds their world together. The Weave, the magical lines of reality that shape every part of Charan, were torn by great magics. Those magics left a hole in the weave that has since consumed nearly a third of the continent, creating a vast and magicless Outalnds. The Wild Weaves at the edges of the Outlands are a dangerous place. Archmagi, pushed to the edge by a pursuing army, enter the Wild Weaves and seek to repair the very fabric of reality. Howard and Clark Franklin, returning soldiers from the Civil War, come back to a home that isn't quite theirs anymore. Restless, they depart again for the West, a new frontier. They get more than they bargained for when one moment they're crossing the prairie and the next they're stepping into a whole new world. As the unraveling edges of reality fray, two worlds may never be the same. >
8 125 - In Serial9 Chapters
Game Of Thrones: Season 8 - The Right Way
Game of Thrones has been an international phenomenon... until this final season. The last few episodes went completely off the rails and everyone slams critics for saying it was bad and challenged people to write it better. I humbly want to accept that challenge and I'm giving it a shot. Some of you may like my take on things and some may not.I will (hopefully) publish each chapter as I write them, every week to two weeks, in between my daily stories and time permitting.
8 182 - In Serial37 Chapters
Strings Of The Orchestrator
Intro: The system swept over the earth, wrenching everyone from their normal lives and throwing them into new worlds made of chaos and insanity. The rules that once governed the world have shifted. The laws that once bound people, both the dangerous and the kind, have vanished. Now, life is all about advancement, pushing your numbers and skills higher and higher. Alone on a distant world, Max Grand instead must now prove himself, not to the system that now governs his entire world, but to his companions and best friends. Follow Max on his journey through space, through time, through space again, meeting people, going places, and doing things. All the nouns. Note About myself: I am only a hobbyest writer. I hope the internet doesn't expect novel level content from me. I have seen what others on the internet, and even more so this website, can produce and aspire to reach their level. I have no Idea what will come of this, but it should at least be a fun experience for all involve. The writing improves gradually as the chapters go on. I invariably learn some stuff after writing a bunch, finding what works and what doesn't. I definately need to work on paceing and dialouge and flow. Those are the three main goals for now. **Chapter lengths float around the 2300 to 2500 word range as of current chapter Thank you and happy reading.
8 83 - In Serial10 Chapters
Roadside Attraction☄DIPCIFICA STYLE
What if Pacifica was there a that day on the road-trip? Would things be different? Would Dipper get caught up with all those girls and Candy? Would Pacifica get mad? Let's find out!..A remake of "roadside attraction" with some Dipcifica moments ;)
8 173 - In Serial8 Chapters
Long, Lonely Day.
This is what boredom feels like, a day without any friends to talk to and do fun stuff with. This song inspired me to write my new chapter, it's called "BURN IT DOWN! by Linkin Park, I hope you enjoy, if you like then I will create more. If you want.
8 84

