《Rising Sovereign》Chapter 4 - Primordial Goddess Physique! (Revised)
Advertisement
Birds of navy blue and fiery red plumage chirped happily in the crisp morning air. Nearby, small furry animals scurried about gathering food in preparation for the coming winter. The sight of nature in its unadulterated state lifted Jin’s spirits. In the High Realms, he had never felt this relaxed before.
Jin had spent most of the night listening to the girl softly weep on his hammock. It wasn’t until the early morning hours did she finally fall asleep, granting him a moment of peace and reprieve.
‘What have I gotten myself into?’ he asked himself, pulling out a jade flute from his spatial ring.
Reflecting on last night’s events, Jin was aware of the trouble he invited by sticking his nose where it didn’t belong. Murder and injustice occured often in the cultivation world. What did a girl’s death have to do with him? He didn’t understand his actions - or maybe he did but didn’t want to face it. Last night, the girl reminded him of Tian Long when she had tried to convince him to run.
A single tear graced his cheek as he pressed the flute to his lips. The music that escaped the hollow pipe could only be described as ethereal, wholly unfit for the barbarity of the mortal world. Few knew that Jin was also an expert musician, favoring mostly the flute though occasionally dabbling in the zither.
Yuri stirred awake, rubbing her long eyelashes after a night of tumultuous sleep. It took her a moment to regain her bearings. Identifying the source of the music, she gazed at Jin with a complicated expression.
“It’s beautiful,” she remarked after a while, her interruption causing Jin to stop playing.
“This melody, titled the Wandering Deer, helps soothe the aching spirit. It’s especially comforting for those dealing with pain and loss. If I’m not mistaken, a great tragedy has befallen you.”
Advertisement
At the mention of her recent ordeal, Yuri’s gaze turned sorrowful. “Did you lose someone as well?” she asked thoughtfully.
Unsure of how to answer, Jin replied, “I have...lost everything.”
The girl made a barely audible ‘oh’, but her eyes indicated to Jin that she fully empathized with his pain. The two shared a moment of understanding in silence.
“So what do you plan to do now?” he inquired, slipping his flute back into his ring, an act that did not go unnoticed by Yuri.
To Jin’s surprise, she promptly got up and kowtowed before him. He could smell the fragrance of lavender on her person.
“I may not have the talent for cultivation, but I want to learn - even if it takes me a hundred years or until my spirit expires. Please teach me, so that I can protect the things I cherish and never have to lose them again,” pleaded Yuri, smothering her golden hair against the dirt.
Jin was pleasantly surprised by her request. When met with great tragedy, people often responded in one of two ways - shut down or fight. It turns out this girl was a fighter, not unlike him.
Having wandered the mortal lands alone for half a year, Jin understood and appreciated the importance of companionship. Although he didn’t mind traveling with the girl, teaching her cultivation was an entirely different matter. To achieve the pinnacle of self-enlightenment, one must have a resolute spirit and be unhindered by strong negative desires. Negativity was the bane of many a cultivator’s journey.
“I have two questions. Answer them to my satisfaction, and I will consider teaching you,” stated Jin.
The girl reacted in joy, hardly able to contain her smile.
“Master, I am willing to work hard if it means I can become stronger,” she asserted.
Advertisement
“Perhaps, but that remains to be seen,” Jin responded. “I’m actually not that much older than you in terms of mortal years. What makes you think I’m qualified to teach you?”
Yuri was somewhat surprised to learn his true age. Since cultivators aged significantly more slowly than ordinary people, she hadn’t expected his outward appearance to reflect his real age.
“That’s simple. I saw you single handedly defeat a qi adept cultivator last night, which suggests you’re ranked at least at a similar level,” the girl explained. “A qi adept cultivator at your age would be considered a prodigy among prodigies in the Ming Kingdom. Why wouldn’t you be qualified to teach me the basics?”
‘She has good observation skills even under pressure,’ the thought crossed Jin’s mind. He was impressed by the way the girl addressed his first question.
Jin cleared his throat. “You are quite knowledgeable for someone who claims to have never cultivated. Who taught you cultivation ranks?”
“No one. I am well-read and possess an eidetic memory,” the girl replied. “My mentor, Uncle Hai, forced me to read the Okada Clan’s entire private collection of scrolls, some of which included topics on kingdom politics and cultivators. Although I’m not a cultivator myself, I am familiar with their ways.”
Thinking about happier days at the Okada Manor was a saddening moment for Yuri. She stifled a tear, unwilling to show weakness in her resolve.
“Interesting. My second question is far more important, and it’s best that you be honest with me,” said Jin. “What will you do once you’ve become a cultivator? Will you seek revenge?”
Without hesitation, Yuri matched Jin’s intense stare and replied, “I’m not foolish enough to believe I’ll ever be able to exact revenge on the Qin Clan. They are powerful beyond imagination and have deep ties to influential sects in the Western Domain. I only wish to have the power to never experience such loss again.”
“That also remains to be seen,” Jin said mystically, though satisfied with her answer. At least she wasn’t fully consumed by revenge. It was a good start.
“But don’t get me wrong,” the girl quickly added. “Should the chance to crush my enemies arise, I will not shy away from the opportunity.”
“That’s understandable. Now extend your wrist. I will measure the extent of your talent myself.”
“Wait, you can do that?” Yuri exclaimed. Last she heard, all of the great sects and families had to utilize rare treasures to examine one’s potential.
“Pfft, why do you need treasures for such a simple task,” Jin quipped, holding her pale wrist and injecting pure qi into her body. The initial rate of qi diffusion and the rebounding force from her meridians would help him gauge the girl’s talent.
Looking at Yuri’s astonished face caused Jin to chuckle, something he hadn’t done in a long time. The sound of his laughter, clear and direct, was actually quite pleasing to Yuri, who turned her head in embarrassment.
Suddenly forgetting his composure, Jin’s jaw dropped in astonishment when his pure qi was completely absorbed by her body. The girl returned his look of incredulity with confusion.
‘Surely not...,’ thought Jin as he tried again. The same results occurred.
She has a heaven root! And all twelve meridians in her body were open! Jin knew that the odds of this combination were virtually nonexistent. If the High Realms ever learned of her existence, there would be an all out war to claim her.
‘Could this be...the legendary Primordial Goddess Physique!’
Advertisement
- In Serial43 Chapters
Warhammer 40k - Tyranid Project
Tags: Warhammer 40k, Tyranids, Genestealer Cult, Chaos & Corruption, Weak to strong MC, NSFW, Evolution, Grimdark Universe, War, Sci-fi, Apocalypse, RPG Elements In the grimdark universe of the 41st Millenium, there is only war. That's all that has been for over ten thousand years. -------- I became a Tyranid, a predator. And I will do what Tyranids do best, kill all my enemies, eat them, and grow. Faster, Stronger, Deadlier. If I have to give up on my humanity, so be it. I will have my answers even if I have to burn half the universe! Maybe then I will be able to save the other half. -------- As this is my first writing experience, I hope you can enjoy reading it!! This work of fiction draws inspiration upon the source material of Warhammer 40k. I do not own the rights of this IP nor of the WH40k characters presented on it. Please support the official release and know I claim no ownership or credit regarding the existence of pre-existing characters or content. ------------ Reduced to 2-3 updates per week for quality assurance. Sick new cover from the great artist Helge C. Balzer!!
8 223 - In Serial28 Chapters
Etryria [discontinued]
What will happen if a boy who loves light novels, manga,anime and video games was lucky enough to be another God of his own world.Well its time to make my own world with a video game mechanic and make my own story.It's now time to play my game.*************************************************************************This is my first time writing here, please point out if something is wrong. I would be glad to edit that out.
8 126 - In Serial56 Chapters
The Pianist || MYG || ✔
World famous pianist Min Yoongis life fell to ruins after the death of his wife. .Despite his guilt, he couldn't keep away from the piano, but could not bare to touch it..This is the story of his journey on once again learning how to love.©chimchimicorn
8 499 - In Serial26 Chapters
Demonhunter Zecruix
In the world of Xylesia, there exist beings known as Rakhe or Demons. Some of them roam free, while other were sealed. Their existence was an enigma to all the races that lived in Xylesia but one consistent thing about them was that they were always a danger to other living beings. Aside from Rakhe, there were many beings that are related to them such as Demon-corrupted or their vile worshipers, the heretical tribes and cults. To face such threats, a sacred order of warriors called Rakh-Threc-Zal or Demonhunters were created long ago by the Ehridolon, an offshoot of the human race of Xylesia, to counter the Rakhe and all the evils that it branched. This is the story of one of the demonhunters, Zecruix Valvren and his many deeds.
8 204 - In Serial39 Chapters
The Midnight Man
Summoning demons is fun, but The Midnight Man is a spirit NOT to be messed with. It's Jake's last night with Colby, Katrina and Sam, so Sam decides to play a fun, but dangerous game. Sam is basically a Pro at summoning demons, but The Midnight Man is dangerous. The Midnight Man kills with no mercy, and strikes fear into the souls of everyone who reads his terrifying story. Will they be brave enough to believe? Will they make it out alive?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Author: Gemma GoodinCover design: Gemma GoodinEdited by: Ciara Spencer-----------------------------------------------------------------Highest rankings:#3 in unexplainable#4 in ghost#6 in paranormal---------------------------------------------------------------I don't recommend doing this ritual, but if you want to here is a website with the rules: https://theghostinmymachine.com/2014/03/31/the-most-dangerous-games-the-midnight-game/
8 157 - In Serial18 Chapters
'MCYTS smutshots'
Hello all readers! :]To start off, NO MINORS!!!and what I mean about no minors is no requests of anyone under 18, only for fluff and angst chapters. There will not be any sexual written thing of any mcyts that are under 18 in this book.!I'll be respecting everyone's boundaries as well, if they don't want to be written in any type of way then please let me know, also if I did something wrong please do tell me!This will also include some angst and fluff here and there as told, most is smut though.Book cover made by me !Enjoy, you hornees
8 296

