《The Rabbit Knight》Now that Volume 1 is done
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I'm planning to do a thorough edit of the volume to remove wordiness and clear some plot holes.
But not right now though. I want to at least work on this part of volume two because the cliffhanger is killing me xD. That aside, did you guys enjoy my story so far? You are not reading because you pity me right, right? *stare*
Nonetheless, I'd like some thoughts on what to improve during my edit. Please comment what you think, should I give more detailed descriptions, develop Alice and Ellowyn relationship more? Please tell me!
...Or do you want me to do revise this volume at all?
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