《Sortis Online (The Demonborn)》Demonborn's Fjord (Book 1) now available on Amazon Kindle!
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AUTHOR'S ANNOUNCEMENTS:
Hey folks, I assure you this story is not abandoned! The reason for its haitus was mostly because I was not happy with how it was unfolding. Although I did write to my original outline, many issues started creeping up including unecessary character bloat, lack of action, an under-developed world, and lack of overall conflict. Over the many past months, I have been occasionally working on this story with overhauls to many chapters as well as additions of new scenes and plot lines. One change which I feel needs to be stated here is the supporting character Aewin has been cut. A lot of profanity and sexual content which I felt was uneeded in this story have also been toned down.
I'm happy to say I have put together a finished book 1 that at least I am satisfied with! Now available on Amazon Kindle Unlimited: https://www.royalroad.com/amazon/B08BR99Y1R
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Unfortunately, there is some not so good news, and that is most of the draft chapters that was up here on RRL have been taken down as per Amazon's terms.
Thanks for reading, and special thanks to KidBuu and Royaldarknes (and other commentors) who offered probably several thousand words worth of feedback! When the time for book 2 eventually comes, I will most likely post a draft here.
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