《Re: Immortal》Chapter 17
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The two Celestials stood quietly, each staring the other up and down. Omis's expression was calm as studied his opponent, the old man however had his mouth wide open, a grin plastered on it as he looked at Omis.
"Wait, is it really you?" He spoke as he studied Omis's features his white eyes lingering for a few seconds over his scar, a strange smirk on his face.
Looking at the old man floating in the air, Omis's scar tingled with an unfamiliar pain his brows furrowed as he refrained from replying, instead he fully rotated his cultivation base unleashing his entire aura that seemed to carry enough might to reach the heavens! Cracking sounds resounded in everyone's ears like thunder as Omis cracked his neck, his face that had an indifferent expression on it suddenly changed as a small smile made its way on his lips.
As this primordial aura was released, all the disciples alongside the elders on the Bai mountain and the clans surrounding it regardless of where they were from fainted. The only people to barely keep their senses were the three patriarchs along with Daoist Lin and the twin elders, yet none of them seemed to be in a good position. With sweat constantly falling from their brows, their hearts seemed to have come to a full stop as they could not, no they dared not try and raise their heads.
'What is with this unbelievable pressure?!'
'We are nothing but ants to them!'
'The gap between us was this big!? Is this the real power of the Immortal mentor?!'
Various thoughts occupied their minds as they struggled against the sheer power pressing on them like a giant mountain on their backs. Only one of them seemed to carry a different expression on his face, a mixture of shock, denial and ultimately hope, that person was none other then the mysterious Daoist Lin that accompanied the leader of the Void Sect, his brain was spinning as he struggled to believe what was happening.
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'T-This! Could this possibly be the legendary realm?! Wait if it is then the prophecy!'
Feeling the deep unfathomable power that Omis was unleashing, the old man's expression seemed to waver for a second.
"Y-you broke through?!"
Not bothering to reply, Omis suddenly vanished from his place and reappeared behind the old man and threw a quick punch at him. The Old man barely had the time to move his hands up in front of his chest in defense against the coming attack.
BOOOOOOOOOOM
A deafening sound echoed throughout the mountain as the old man was sent flying through the air, right behind him was Omis who with a quick wave of his hand made a blue transparent shield surround the mountain and its occupants. With the appearance of the shield, the patriarchs along with the twin elders and Daoist Lin all found themselves able to breathe and move again.
BOOOOOOOM
The sounds of the shocking battle caught their attention as they all found themselves unable to tear their eyes from it. No one had any thoughts of resuming their fight, how could they? The scale of the battle they were witnessing was something from the legends! It was two real living celestials fighting! And one of them was none other than the Immortal Mentor!
Such opportunities do not come every day! Perhaps they could learn something or even attain enlightenment! And with the shield that the mentor had created it to protect them, all of their minds were at ease. So with such thoughts, the group soon silently sat down cross-legged as they observed the fight above them.
It seemed as if the heavens were truly collapsing! The Immortal mentor's aura was materialized in a shining bright blue light that surrounded him making the onlookers unable to truly make out his figure. Black cracks opened up in the sky surrounding him, causing the entire realm to shake as if on the verge of collapsing, soon people who lost conscience earlier regained their senses, yet the first scene they all saw was that of their world collapsing.
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Chaos soon found it's way to the crowd of disciples, yet before things could escalate even further the patriarchs as if they had already agreed before stood up together.
"Calm down you damned morons! Can't you see the shield the esteemed mentor had created to protect us?" First spoke up the sword devil.
"Humph, Void sect settle down!" Then came the Old monster as he ordered his disciples and elders to calm down.
"All of you, watch closely this is not an opportunity any of you want to miss! If one is lucky, you may even attain enlightenment!" Finally added the Bai clan's patriarch.
Not long after, a strange scene could be seen on the Bai clan's mountain. The mountain that was just moments ago a battlefield, with rivers of blood and thousands of corpses was now deadly silent, the only sounds that could be heard was that of the battle raging above. Thousands of disciples sat side by side no matter their origins as they watched the fight, their breath stuck in their throats.
A little further away from the mountain, smaller similar scenes could be seen as the various smaller sects sat down observing the fight above in the heavens.
The two sides in the sky were as bright as the sun, no they overshadowed the sun... One was light blue the other an obsidian black! No one could really follow their movements, the only thing they could see was a sea of blue smashing against a sea of black.
The sky itself was split open into two sides, the sun seemed to retreat and every time the two sides clashed the shockwaves created various dark vortexes that opened out of thin air, they looked like the jaws of a monster ready to pounce on you. Just looking at them gave shivers to all those present, those vortexes seemed to lead into the abyss itself!
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