《Hatred: The Journey of the Madman [Old]》Ch 35: Lesson
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AN: Here is chapter 35. If you have any suggestions concerning my writing feel free to tell me. It is appricated. Anyway thanks for reading.
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"I wonder how long you can act like that. It is only a matter of time, you will change your attitude. I guarantee that since these are the words of a goddess." She says in an eerie manner.
Chadera stretches her arm out and a white light coats me. In an instant the scene changes. I am sitting in a class room. The classroom has only one chair and a desk. Also this classroom has a door, where does it lead to? I don't know, maybe in to an endless abyss. In front of me I see Chadera writing something on the board.
It says the way of light.
Finished writing she turns around and says.
"Welcome to the class of good manners. Today we are going to learn how to be a good person. In today's lesson we are going to learn the fundamentals of manners,respect, self sacrifice and giving compliments."
"Seriously ?"
"Thorus you can only speak if you raise your arm and I pick you."
"So what, are you going to tell my parents for misbehaving." I say without raising my hand first.
"Your rebellious act won't get you anyway. If you continue I might punish you." she says coldly with a stern face.
"I don't need to learn this bullshit, who wants to be a good guy? The good ones always give ass. Sorry but my ass is exit only."
"This is the second warning, if I am forced to warn you the third time, divine punishment will be carried out."
"Okay, okay I will comply. I hope you won't read my thoughts though. Because my thoughts can't be controlled, If I where to be punished because of my thoughts, that would be torture."
Chadera seems to be in thoughts.
"Okay, I shall do you that favor."
"Great, now when will class end?"
"It didn't even begun" Chadera says in an annoyed manner.
"Are there any breaks?"
"After a month we will take a short five minuet break."
What the hell ? This Goddess has a screw lose. If I am going to be thought how to be good guy for a month strait, I would rather commit suicide.
"Well it was nice meeting you. Can you kill me please?"
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"What? Why? Lessons didn't even begun and you already want to die?"
"Please spare me, you can put me in hell or we can get naughty but this... This is madness."
"Madness?" Chadera chuckles. "Even if it is madness, aren't you the self proclaimed madman? Where is your credibility now?"
She is right I am the madman. If I give up in this situation I would betray myself and lose face.
"Bring it on, I wavered a bit but now all those thoughts vanished."
"Good conduct will be rewarded, so behave yourself."
Chadera clears her throat and continuous on with her lesson.
"First a short introduction. As you know I am the Goddess of light and thus am qualified to teach you Thorus, the way of Light."
I raise my hand.
"Yes Thorus?" she says a bit annoyed.
"Does the way of light also contains forcing beliefs on others?"
"Of course not, forcing someone is never the right way."
"So why do you force me to take part in this class, also why do I need to be thought the way of light? Isn't your teachings contradicting with your actions?"
"So what? I am a goddess. Do you think I need YOUR approval for the things I do?"
"I am only saying, don't need to get so upset, carry on."
"* ahem* As you know there is good and there is evil..."
"You don't say."
She forces a grin and tries not show that she is annoyed.
"Anyway, the good will be rewarded in the after life and the bad.... "
She carries on telling me that to be good is better than being evil. The words enter my head and are ignored instantly. I won't spend a thought on her new age shit. My brain is like a coated frying pan, nothing sticks.
After 3 hours she still keeps going. I already forgot what she mentioned. Something about giving is love or some bullshit. I keep myself sane by blending out her words and imagining nasty things I would do to her.
"Did you understand?"
She is so beautiful too bad she is such a weirdo.
"Thorus?"
I would smack that ass.
"THORUS!!!"
"Ay, don't scream, I am not deaf."
She stares at me with eyes that could kill. No wonder, she was giving so much effort also she was shining when talking about the good.
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"Can you keep track? Did you understand everything?"
"Of course, I was listening with my whole heart. Really profound words."
"Good, than we will do a test." she says with a smirk on her face.
"A test?"
"Of course, I need to give you marks."
"What if I fail?"
"Than you will learn until you will pass this class, depending on your effort it can be over quick or last an eternity."
Okay, maybe I should have listened. I won't give in though. Let's see who has more patience.
I nod.
"Good here comes question one: You see an elderly man lying on the street, what do you do?"
She asks with a face full of anticipation..
"Minding my business and ignore him."
"You.. That is not right. Why don't you help him up?"
"My parents thaught me not to pick up trash."
An expression of slight shock can be seen on Chadera.
"You are more evil than I thought."
"I don't understand, why should I get my hands dirty. I don't want any old man's sweat on my hands. He can stay on the ground and die for all I care. Damn old men looking like raisins and smelling like death."
"There is beauty in all things, even in elderly people. They have so much to tell, they experienced so much. You could learn a lot of things."
"Yeah, they complain about how things were much better back than. They tell you how they fought for their country. Blah, blah, they are as interesting as some ancient ruins. And I don't find ancient ruins to be interesting at all."
"You are still young so you don't see the beauty of life like I do."
"So you would fuck an old man... That is very... How should I say? Exotic? But I won't judge you because of odd fetishes. I mean everyone has his or her own taste...."
"How dare you defile my good name... You..... You"
"Calm down you are scaring me. I thought you were the goddess of light and not darkness. Not that I would mind though."
Chadera takes a deep breath and exhales.
"I should stop getting irritated by you, this doesn't suite me, a goddess at all."
"Ay, poor girl, I bet you had to suppress your true feelings for the sake of keeping your image. Well only the two of us are here, so you can be at ease. I knew you didn't like old men in a sexual sense, so how about me? Do you want to see a piece of me?"
She raises a brown "NO! Back to the test."
"If you let this opportunity go you won't have the chance next time. Order me now and you get to see a sample of my big Italian salami."
"I see this foolish one wants to be punished badly."
"Hmmm, disturbing but highly intriguing."
"Can't you be serious for a while? You are making things difficult."
"I am serious."
"No you are not."
"Yes I am."
"No"
"Yes."
"NO"
"No"
"Yes."
"Ha, got you."
Her blank expression turns in to an enlightened face.
"I might have approached you in a wrong way. Maybe I need to give you a reward first. Come child let me hug you."
"This is what I am talking about."
I undress my shirt and run towards Chadera who holds her hands out.
"Lets embrace each other." I say. Some drool leaking from mouth.
Because she is wearing a bikini armor our skin touch. It was a feeling so divine.
Suddenly she holds me much tighter and it begins to hurt.
"Darling, you are a bit to eager, chill down."
"Really?" she says in cold voice.
I look up and see a face devoid of any emotion.
The force of the hug get stronger and stronger. My duranium body can't handle it any more and cracking sounds come from it.
*Snap * My back breaks and I scream in pain. Out of my mouth blood sprays on the face of Chadera. Still holding me I see her shocked expression. It was not just shock, it was a profound shocked face. The face someone makes when something really shocking happens.
She lets go of me and stands there in a daze, hands shaking. She reaches to her cheeks and wipes the my blood from her face. Looking at her hand with my blood on it, divine tears appear on her blood stained face.
"I... I..." She runs off.
"Darling *cough *" I spit a mouthful of blood. "Where are you going? The fun just begun. I know playing the sadist is difficult, I don't blame you.It is just a broken back. Come back and fix me than we can start over."
Ignoring my words she runs through the door.
Really? Damn, I think I broke that crazy woman.
"Hello? Someone there."
Maybe she will calm down. Let's wait. It is not like I have a choice. Let's get naked first so when she comes back, she will see a surprise. I hope we'll get more intimate than.
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