《Azeal Neralum》Follow Up - To Keep You Informed
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Rewrites are Hell! So much pain! So much brain melting!
I will use this to keep you informed of Chapter rewrites and Major plot changes. Will delete it after the rehaul.
Chapters Rewritten -
**** 11/30/2018 ****
Ch 1 - Split into two chapters to fix the point of views and the lack of description
Ch 2 - The second part of Ch 1
Ch 3 (Was 2) - Fixed up the tenses and made it one Pov
Ch 4 (Was 3) - Fixed a whole lot. So many mistakes it hurt my eyes!
**** 12/4/2018 *****
I may need to rewrite ch8-11 (The battle of Venral) since its too long, and a lot of complaints on it. I will make it shorter and more efficient. ---- Its finals this week and next :'( so I am going to release one more chapter before having to stay focused on Uni for a week and a half. BUT there is a silver lining! After next week Monday, I will have 3 weeks with absolutely nothing to take my time up. So, Chapter Galore! and ReWriTe ... *Shudders*
Never the less, you will get your promised chapter on Saturday! Though rewrites will continue to happen. Let me know what you think of the rewritten chapters!
Yours Truly,
Kazi223
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