《New beginning》Epilogue
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Epilogue
At the edge of Earth atmosphere on every single ship was silence. They saw whole thing on sensors and still couldn’t understand what happened. Commander took down his cap from head and looked at screen where to giant forces were fighting against each other.
There were two black hole or better said one black hole and one something else. It was like it was complete opposite of blackhole and what should have destroyed planet wasn’t doing anything. They consumed one another without doing damage to planet. Of course whole company building was destroyed but nothing else.
He didn’t know why she did it but what she did was almost impossible. He was still in awe of her piloting skills. He never saw someone to dodge plasma fire like it was child’s play.
When others looked at commander for orders they saw respect in his eyes as he looked at screen. He even took down cap, which was sign of respect in navy.
“Why would you respect someone like her?” asked one officer.
“Why wouldn’t I? She did something that was almost impossible and I don’t know why she did it but it was important enough for her to sacrifice her life. That is something I can respect. I’ll have to look at materials she sent us.” He said.
“It would be false documents…. She’s criminal…. We can’t trust anything from her.” Came from around bridge.
“Maybe, maybe not. At least we find out why she did it.” He said and looked around bridge to silence officers. They quieted and continued to look at displays.
On planet there was change in these two forces and suddenly both of them just winked out. They consumed themselves. There was shudder that went through everything and everywhere. Commander could feel that something changed.
He looked at display and there were changes in universe. There were popping up new stars and whole placement of universe changed and expanded. What they found out latter from materials Leya sent was that game they were playing wasn’t game but another universe.
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Scientist finally decided that when blackhole was closed instead of cutting them from one another it brought them closer and merged them into one universe but that was something that no one knew at time on bridge, so they were confused about what was happening.
Only captain was looking around with new vigour. Whatever she did, it would bring exciting times and he would be prepared for it. He was too long just sitting, doing nothing.
“Don’t just stand there. Use scans and collect as much data as you can. We have job to do.” He shouted.
15 years later on unknown planet
“Lara come on we’ll be late to our graduation.” Shouted woman walking from nice new house. It was obviously high tech house with many gadgets on it, even if some of them looked to be home made.
From inside could be heard woman voice, ”Don’t worry Anna we still have time. Uncle John called that he would pick us up.”
“Why didn’t you told me sooner? I didn’t have to hurry so much.” Said Anna from outside.
“Because you’re always late.” Said Lara as she came out.
They were Anna’s daughters that Leya saved from Director. Today were day they graduated from university. Both of them went to study engineering as from small age they loved to make their own toys which in later years transferred to making gadgets and finally studying it for real.
Both of them already picked their jobs. Lara who was adventurous went for ship duty as ensign on new battleship that new federation government built. Anna who liked more quiet jobs stayed on ground and went to research. She worked for company that her mother built where currently both Lee and Gordon whom they still sometimes called Rock.
Her company focused on making prosthetic limbs for disabled people. Lee was helping with making prosthetic limbs for army with weapons already worked inside. Gordon surprisingly became great manager. With his smile he could convince worse enemy that it was good move to invest in their company.
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Anna who was depressed at first finally decided to horn Leya by building this company. After five years she met her love and married. He was one of doctors who helped them with developing limbs. They had one more child and this time it was boy and they named him Leonard after Paladin that helped them so much.
About Eleanor and Paladins they couldn’t find any information. They heard sometimes about group that would protect others with asking for money but that was all. They even posted some messages on network but no one answered them.
As for Director. They found him hiding on one of his islands and imprisoned him for life. They took his money and build schools, hospitals and kindergartens. They used them for something that would help people.
There came car with one man inside. It was military car that John borrowed from military base. He would be taking Lara strait to base after graduation.
John parked car before girls, “Come on ladies. We don’t want to be late.”
“We’re waiting for you. If we’re late it would be because of you.” Said Lara.
He chuckled, “Enjoy it Lara while you can. Later today I would be Captain Merick for you.”
“Ok, but right now you’re Uncle John, so make it fast.” Grinned Anna.
“I don’t envy your employer and trainer.” Murmured John.
“Did you say anything?” asked Anna.
“No, just talking to myself.” He said.
Both of them glared at him, but then smiled and entered car. Finally they would be doing something exiting.
??? years later somewhere in galaxy
Sun went up and first rays of light shined on cave hidden in mountain. There on ground ley woman with short brown hair, mechanical arm and slender body. She wore long coat and if someone looked really good he would see shimmering in air couple of inches from her body.
“It took me longer than I planned but I finally made it.” Said voice in the air.
“I hope you’ll forgive me my tempering with your life and preparing you for what you had to do but I had to do it for them. This is last thing before I went back sleeping.” Said girl who appeared in air and changed into beautiful woman who bend down and kiss other woman on cheek.
“Farewell my friend.”
After that there was silence and woman continued to sleep peacefully on ground.
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Hi,
I'm going to continue with this story but I have dilema. I don't know how far I should move in time. I would have to think it propelly and work out basic outline of story. That would take some time (Not much I hope :D ) so be patience for now. There may be small changes in how she would be continueing but nothing big i think.
I hope you''ll enjoyed this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. I learned a lot by writing it and I'm planning to learn more.
I would try to correct my mistakes, but that would also take some time. For now I would like to continue with story.
Yours Anarin
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Sword System Academia
2/17 NOTICE: I'm putting this on hiatus, possibly permanently. I didn't want to spam with an "update chapter", so hopefully here and in the story blurb will get enough eyeballs. There are a couple reasons for ending SSA for now. 1) I wrote the next chapter but wasn't happy with it. I've been less and less satisfied with SSA's quality the more I thought about it. Part of the reason is... 2) I am seriously thinking about trying to publish some novels to help pay the bills, since I don't have my other source of income anymore. I have never asked for anything from SSA readers, no money, not even a review or rating. SSA is written for fun to amuse myself, primarily, and I would kind of feel bad actually charging someone money for something as unserious as that. I don't think it is good enough to ask anything in return. To use an analogy from music, SSA is more like a jam session with a bunch of friends. You're just chiling and having fun playing some music. I mean, if you are Mozart or even Eminem, your jam session is good enough to sell, but for an amateur beginner like myself, haha, no. If I want to publish something, I feel like I need to go the proper route of practice and rehearsals, which might be more similar to a classical concert performance. With SSA, I work from worldbuilding notes and a loose outline, but what you are essentially getting is the first draft with lots of so-called pantsing. Pushing out a web novel like this also means it is very difficult to go back and improve things without breaking everything else downstream. I wanted to try this "jamming" approach, as it was a good way to teach me about another aspect of writing, but to move forward, I think I need to hone my "classical" techniques, which emphasize rewriting, or at least, revising outlines. 3) While I intend to try to make $$$, my actual current goal is to "get gud". I've spent a lot of time recently trying to understand the self-publishing industry, and I'm pretty sure I can make some money by using short-term strategies with my current amateur skill level. But I've seen too many authors come and go/burnout, and really, the only way that I think I can enjoy writing and still make money on a long-term basis is to become a better writer. And the next step for me, which I haven't done much before, is to spend more time on rewriting and outlines. That is pretty much antithetical to the way SSA is developing. I've always been kind of 20/80 plotting/pantsing, but I want to spend a lot more time outlining before I even start writing. SSA jam sessions don't really fit my goal anymore. If you're curious about what's next, read on... Among other regrets, I regret not finishing SSA. It's the first story I've dropped, but then again, it's the first web novel I've attempted, so I suppose that's not a surprise. I don't think traditional web novel formats suit me that well. The whole SSA story I had loosely planned (beyond a first book or major arc) is way too large as well. Big story = good for neverending webnovel with Patreons, bad for penniless and fickle writer like me. I am currently outlining a complete trilogy to another story in great detail. I want the story to end concisely, and I also want the chance to really spend a lot of time on the full outline to spot pacing problems, character issues, lost themes, and so on. I'll still share this story on RR. What I intend to do is finish book 1, flash-publish the whole thing here for a few weeks, then publish on the big Zon. Repeat for books 2 and 3. The upcoming story will be about crafting heroes. The backdrop is an isekai-like setting, where elves will summon humans to their world as heroes, but the whole hero crafting business is still in its infancy. The elven mage researchers are figuring out how to imbue heroes with power, while the heroes are trying to figure out how to use the powers that they gain. Humans are the best hero templates because they are blank and have no intrinsic magic. Or at least that what the elves thought. The human MC has his own secrets... There will be some similarities with litrpgs, but I would call it more a progression fantasy or gamelit story. For example, the stats are very low, at least initially. Say we have a stat called Str. Going from Str = 1 to Str = 2 is a huge deal. Also, going from Dex = 0 to Dex = 1 is an even bigger deal. I guess you could call it a "low-stat litrpg", haha. Also, the heroes won't be gaining stats simply by killing things or leveling up. You can't increase stats arbitrarily, either. There will be rules to how stats can increase, and how they work with each other. The elven mages will be figuring out these rules in order to craft stronger and stronger heroes. Some inspiration will be from cultivation magic systems, but there won't be overt cultivation, at least for now. A theme I really want to explore is the idea of interactions. That includes things like hero crafter vs hero, tactics vs strategy, skill synergies, racial interactions (dwarves, elves, etc), and son. Yeah, so hero crafting. I'm super excited about this project and venturing into publishing. If you want to check out the upcoming story, you can follow my RR author profile to see when it drops here. Finally... THANK YOU TO EVERYONE! I'm very sorry that SSA is stopping, but I hope at least some of you will find the next story at least as enjoyable, if not more. Thanks to all the readers who gave SSA a shot. Big hug or solid fistbump to all of you, whichever you prefer! I hope this message is not a downer but an upper, because I am psyched!! -purlcray -------------- BLURB: Talen, youngest Master of the Koroi, makes his way to the Empire's capital to salvage his clan's fate. But the bustling city has few opportunities for the traditionalist. For the old sword clans are fading. With the rise of alchemy, gold can purchase strength that ordinarily took years of training to cultivate. Sword artists, once rare and accomplished, are quickly growing in number, especially among the wealthy noble class. Even with such alchemy, though, no one has advanced to the rank of Grandmaster in countless years. Talen's true dream is to walk the path of a sword artist to the very end while fulfilling his clan duties. And then the Swordgeists return, fabled founders of all sword arts, gods who had touched the world long ago and vanished. These myths turned into reality warn of a coming threat. Alongside this warning, they issue an invitation to the Sword System Academy, a path to power beyond the mortal realm. But first, they will hold an entrance exam... Story notes:Sword System Academia blends elements of western and asian fantasy such as xianxia and litrpg. I took parts from different genres I enjoyed and twisted them into my own creation. There will be an explicit system, both of the litrpg kind and the hard(ish) magic kind, but it is embedded within an academic structure that will develop over the course of the story. This is my attempt to design a unique type of system, the System Academia.
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