Okay, this is my last update until Friday the 14th.

My typesetter and I have done some amazing things for game interface mechanics in the kindle version. (Mostly my typesetter) So don't be surprised if you see something new. I would love to hear everyones' feedback on what they think of the game prompts. I'll be leaving this and the other fake chapter up so people can comment back to me. These can change if people think they are weird or throw them out of the story. Just because someone else has the same comment as you doesn't mean I don't want to hear it again. I'll need a whole lot of you to hate something before I change, not just one or two.

Also, comment if you spot a mistake.

I'm holding off publishing a paperback for a couple of weeks, so we can get the prompt elements perfect first.