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Hey folks, I was wondering at how you all feel about my writing so far, the content too. It would encourage me to get some feedback and suggestions in the comments below! Maybe there's some issue on how my chapters are presented, maybe it's the pace, maybe it's my style. I really need some feedback here! The lack of them feels disheartening so far. I can't improve my work without understanding different perspectives and opinions you know! I'll respond accordingly as best as I can!
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Reincarnated into an Unfinished Online RPG
41-year old Satou Makoto works in a Japanese sweatshop...literally. His company doesn't have a working air conditoner and he's putting in 98 hours per week at his desk, under the grinding heel of his demanding 24-year old sizzling boss. But when a sudden heat wave hits Japan, the entire floor crumbles to heat stroke. Makoto is rushed to the ER...and dies. He awakens to find himself in Heaven. Or is it Hell, because his boss and coworkers are here too?! This cloudy wonderland reminds Makoto of an MMORPG he played in his youth that was abandoned by the developers in favor of launching a sequel. The original game was left online with players unable to finish. Knowing the ultimate fate of this world, what will Makoto do? Will he try to change fate? Or will he kick back now that the heat is off?
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BOOK 3: THE REVENGE OF ASMODEUS -- [a Perth's Accidental Superheroes series] VOL 1.3 OTHER-PERTH
The devastated Paul and Jane want justice to be brought -- to the 'criminal' -- who brutally attacked their beloved friend, Alicia, who was in a coma. Meanwhile, the 'culprit' Peter was plotting the next evil move of his 'invitation' -- for his Dark Lord and Master, Asmodeus to walk on Perth City.
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Careless God
A basic careless god. Playing with high school students in japan for fun. Despite the boring character that god plays, god makes things funnier by tormenting the students for fun. Giving powers to random students from other schools and telling them about the club of the students who he gave the power to fight each other.
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I'm going to do it! I'm going to reincarnate into a fantasy world and live a great life!
Some god-damn idiot spent too much time reading web novels, and at some point in his life, he decided to waste a ton of time attempting to break into a fantasy world.Well he succeeded! Banzai~Now he’s going to live that awesome life full of rpg elements; you know, that one where he gets a great family, a female childhood friend, and a bunch of rainbow colored harem mates.And if he’s lucky, he might even end up in a world where slavery has developed into a socially acceptable form of welfare, and MAYBE he might get a ton of female slaves.The possibilities are endless~Well he’ll find out what will happen to his ass after getting sent to the fantasy world full of elves, magic, swords, and yadadadada.yadadadada.
8 173 - In Serial12 Chapters
Just Five Times
Five People.Five Crimes.Five Threats.One Murder.One Witness.One Diary.. . . . .I wish I could say it all started with one murder, but it started way gefore that.Most wish there was only one murder, but fate never let that happen.. . . . .Faye Mathews witnesses a murder, the next day she finds a diary filled with the deepest, darkest secrets of the IT gang in school. She starts realising the reason of each one of their murders.. . . .- A Paranormal Short Story -
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Mystery of Redpaw (PAW Patrol Fanfic)
Redpaw's origin is questioned when he seemingly predicts various accidents. He joins the PAW Patrol to answer one question and one question only: Who is Redpaw?*NOTE*: PAW Patrol and its respective characters, settings, etc. are property of Nick, Viacom and all respective groups. Redpaw is my OC. If you want to use him in a story, please let me know.
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