《WTF I'm a Dungeon!? (Dropped)》Changes!
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This chapter will list out all the changes done to each chapter in Spoiler Box Form. I will aim to rewrite two chapters a week however some of the early chapters need more than just an edit so don't expect me to be constant here. Whenever I finish rewriting something I will release it then put all the changes here. Mainly for you guys who want to follow the rewrite but can't be bothered rereading it to keep up with the changes.
Novel Description
Changes.
Just as an example.
The Sacred War between Order and Chaos is nearing its end. Countless die as they fight the final battle. After an eternity of war, Order has triumphed, sacrificing much to stop a Supreme Magic from Chaos to be cast. Order celebrates as Chaos is forced into the outskirts of the world.
However, there are rarely winners in war.
The magic was cast, its power was only redirected. It’s power transcending dimensions and finally, its strength greatly weakened, destroys a classroom of students. Their souls sucked into a small crack created by the magic, not large enough for a living thing to pass, but enough for a few souls to leak out of that worlds reincarnation cycle.
This is the story of a dungeon, who was inexplicably born with one of these souls.
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A dungeon. A place where abominations wander its endless corridors, its halls filled with the haunted screams of some hapless adventurer, deadly traps lie at every corner ready to claim your life at a moments notice. If you can succeed these trials then you have a chance of obtaining wealth, fame and women. If you manage to return as a whole that is.
Unfortunately, none of that fits our main character. Who's still figuring out how to make mushrooms explode. Maybe in a few hundred chapters or when the author gives up and gives you an early half-assed ending will you get to see him like that.
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What? You don't like getting an early half-assed ending? Have you even read Bound Dungeon? Hear that wires12! I'm calling you out! Complete your novel so I can have meaning in my life again!
*Ahem* Getting back on track, yeah this was supposed to be some funny call out to a great novel but now I am just sitting here awkwardly.
Please read my novel. (T_T)
Prologue
New Prologue
Now split into 4 parts.
Better explanation of power ceilings/skills/classes
War is no longer about Order vs Chaos but the Beastmen trying to survive ethnic cleansing
Mainly using it to do some world building
New chapter 1
FILLER TEXT
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And the world breaks
Amamiya Ren, 16 years old, Student, Influencer and Star, also Leader of The Phantom Thieves. The world is filled with distortion, In his quest for Rehabilitation he challenges the metaverse, to change society, to save his friends, however... as he delves deeper and deeper into this harsh new world, he and his friends slowly descends into madness, Small changes to the metaverse lead to world-changing events, wrong choices lead to a Darker approach to the story. The phantom thieves will never be the same... This Fiction is rated MA, Containing graphic gore and sexual content, slow burn, it also contains elements from Jojo's Bizzare Adventure franchise, specifically certain concept of stands, and that's it... Special thanks to Megami Tensei wiki! Cover rights goes to: lemontea Disclaimer: Rights to the persona series lay with ATLUS, not me!
8 77Area Codes // dreamwastaken
a text sent to the wrong number. a conversation between two strangers. their lives changed forever, even if they don't know who's on the other side of the screen. will they ever find out?
8 215Talk Music To Me
When Judaline gets a call from her college's latest soccer star, she doesn't expect him to be a goof. But self-proclaimed goofball, Caleb White makes it his mission to impress the sassy girl with cheesy song lyrics, childish talks and lots of laughter. One phone call. Many songs. Lots of smiles. "So do you like the Beatles?" ''Y-yeah, why do you-" "Hey Jude, don't make it bad-" "Please don't." "Take a sad song and make it better." " ............" __________________________________These are a series of dialogues over text/call.____________________________________HIGHEST RANKING: #1 Call#1 Dialogue #2 Pick up lines
8 184Flutterdash: Star Player
Fluttershy is a quiet, shy girl at Canterlot High. Her friend Rainbow Dash is the exact opposite, loud, extroverted, and a star athlete. When these two best friends fall in love, can they survive the trials that come with being a couple in high school?
8 84I'm your kid too, father
Klaus had another child before Hope.The family took him in but dont see him as part of the family until they find out differently? Will it be too late?
8 121Wii Deleted You: Swapped
There are many ways things could be different.
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