《A Journey Away - Book One of The Eternal Flame》Update! Very Important Must Read!!!
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G'Day!
How goes life over yonder? Well, I hope!
As stated before, I have been working on another project to find solutions to certain issues I had noticed a while back. Thankfully, it seems to be going decently or at least that's what I believe...
Well, either way, its another step in a long journey!
As stated before, I am in need of beta-readers to g through the manuscript and answer some vital questions. The format will be simple, I will send out 15k word intervals as a large chunk to be read by the awesome, wonderful, stupendous, fantastic, amazing volunteers!
(They will be given honorary mentions on the dedication page of the book!!!)
For those that had already mentioned they wanted to do it, I will send you a pm today with two links. The first is to the actual manuscript (On G.Docs with commenting rights--It is a first draft that will be sent to a semi-professional editor (Don't have enough money to hire one unless I can create enough revenue via Patreon and donations to do so)) and the second a beta readers form that asks vague questions.
Please, while I might not grumble and cry over one-word answers (Nice, bad, good, cool) non-answers...err...yes I will most definitely be grumbling and crying over them... I would appreciate it if you put a few more words to give me an image of what needs fixing!
Once again, for those awesome, wonderful, stupendous, fantastic, amazing volunteers(!!!!), I truly am grateful for the awesome stuff you do!
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