《A Journey Away - Book One of The Eternal Flame》Update! Very Important Must Read!!!
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G'Day!
How goes life over yonder? Well, I hope!
As stated before, I have been working on another project to find solutions to certain issues I had noticed a while back. Thankfully, it seems to be going decently or at least that's what I believe...
Well, either way, its another step in a long journey!
As stated before, I am in need of beta-readers to g through the manuscript and answer some vital questions. The format will be simple, I will send out 15k word intervals as a large chunk to be read by the awesome, wonderful, stupendous, fantastic, amazing volunteers!
(They will be given honorary mentions on the dedication page of the book!!!)
For those that had already mentioned they wanted to do it, I will send you a pm today with two links. The first is to the actual manuscript (On G.Docs with commenting rights--It is a first draft that will be sent to a semi-professional editor (Don't have enough money to hire one unless I can create enough revenue via Patreon and donations to do so)) and the second a beta readers form that asks vague questions.
Please, while I might not grumble and cry over one-word answers (Nice, bad, good, cool) non-answers...err...yes I will most definitely be grumbling and crying over them... I would appreciate it if you put a few more words to give me an image of what needs fixing!
Once again, for those awesome, wonderful, stupendous, fantastic, amazing volunteers(!!!!), I truly am grateful for the awesome stuff you do!
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The Maker departed from the world with one message: that the greatest artist would come to succeed the divine throne. Without anyone to uphold them, the very laws of the world gave way to chaos. The days of the purple sun signified the blight of more and more land. Monsters lurked about, and at nights when the moon would kiss the earth, entire civilizations would cross over the veil and enter the continent of Aetrea, plunging it into perpetual wars over what little habitable land remained. Join Bastet on his journey to uncover the mysteries of a decaying world, the kingdoms that rule it, and the magics that tear it asunder. Through struggle, friendships and love, will Bastet ever find an artist worthy of stopping the inevitable decay?
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Ghost Girl had no name or she didn’t want to use it, for she… is dead. Ghosts like her appeared due to lingering attachments to the physical world or unfinished business. Her unfinished business were her horrible parents! She will haunt them. Or kill them! Thus, the haunting (killing) adventures of Ghost Girl. Image drawn by Lizalot. I thought this image was a great fit as a cover.
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When Myth clashes with the world of hero's and villains, will the Myth be out shined by the hero's? Or will they go on to conquer all! This is a My Hero Academia fan fiction I'm doing for fun, I do not own the rights to any MHA character except for the original characters I made up for the story. I hope you all enjoy and have fun reading :) ANY critiques is welcomed!
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8 203The Hero Is Unchained, But Not Free
In a world divided, there are two types of people: the Uni and the Typpe—those with superhuman abilities, and those without. Uni are given jobs based on their abilities, becoming either Hero or Villain, and their battles are used to entertain the masses. All looks to be at peace, but a war brews in the shadows... Author Ivy McLaughlan is down on her luck. Losing her status of bestseller, she is disowned by her wealthy family and forced to take refuge in a dilapidated apartment in a city far from home. There, she meets Satsuya Harada, the most powerful Uni alive...who works as a bartender and barista. Unwittingly entangled in a war for the use of Satsuya’s abilities, Ivy uncovers not only the secrets behind the Uni, but the secrets behind her own life. Now—if only she can stay alive long enough to make use of them. Updating Tuesdays and Thursdays through the end of May, then on hiatus until September. Support my work on Ko-Fi: https://ko-fi.com/foxunderfire This story was a finalist in the “ongoing serials” category of the Laterpress 2022 Genre Fiction contest! Text, and Cover Copyright Fox Under Fire (Alexandra Lanc) 2021
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