《A Journey Away - Book One of The Eternal Flame》Announcement 2.0!
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Hello!
How goes over yonder? Great I hope!
After considerable thinking and planning. I've decided to completely and utterly outline the life of a new story in an attempt to fix this issue I find myself facing. It will consist of twenty-seven chapters (Roughly) of varying lengths (I have not decided how long to make them, but it will be more than 2k per chapter). Each chapter will be outlined, edited, and re-edited multiple times (I plan to either hire a not so expensive editor since my own skills in that field are lacking or at least find someone who will do it).
I also got a cover book in the process for it. Cost a pretty penny, but it makes my commitment more it even stronger (I spent money on it, so yea...). Got a colored sketch the day after I talked to the artist so kinda happy about that.
If you'd like to beta-read instead of waiting till I've finished writing it, then post it. Let me know down below. I will either send you Google-Docs or a link to a website I am getting done. I will post the images and advancement of the story on the website.
It will show the first drafts and how they compare to the edited ones. The cover art/character art.
It would also be of great help if you left an honest review once I do get it published in the near future (I am leaving no room for failure!).
Yours Truly,
k. The Juggernaut B.
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