《World Transcending Dragon Paragon [HIATUS]》Should I Rewrite?
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I am thinking of rewriting this story. Originally, I decided to write this as a Swallowed Star fanfic... but now the plot I want to write will not fit well with Swallowed Star.
So, I am thinking of just removing all Swallowed Star references and characters while adding some chapters for new worldbuilding and references.
It won't take long (a week or so), as I'll be using [find+replace] instead of starting it from scratch. There will be two more chapters... a prologue will be added as well.
The title [World Transcending Dragon Paragon] will be the same, but the synopsis will be obviously different.
So. should I do this? Asking for reader opinion!
New Synopsis:
The apocalypse was predicted on 21st December 2012, yet the world remained unshaken. Unfortunately, this date was only the prelude to the world's end. 4 years and 11 days later, on 31st December 2016, the world suffered a sudden collapse. Natural disasters, viral infections and beast attacks decimated humanity, destroying the law of human supremacy. Fortunately, the survivors of this calamity awakened the power within their genes. Alien ruins were revealed, holding the secrets of cultivating this mysterious force. From the year of 2018 came the Sky Rebirth Era, the beginning of a new Era of cultivation!
This is the world that Yulian Starlighter has taken rebirth into. After mysteriously transcending time-space on the date of the apocalypse, he arrives to the new world. Possessing peerless talent, Yulian takes the centre stage in exploring the new world. Creating new cultivation techniques, understanding the remnets of the Heavenly Laws that have collapsed and even creating new stages on the path of cultivation, this is the story of one man creating his own path in the brutal world of cultivation.
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