《Young Adversary》Author Note- Next Arc Update
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Yo, readers. It is I! KC
Anyway, I’m here to explain something to you guys regarding the last arc. You see, that arc was never planned. Well, it was but it was supposed be a part a much bigger arc called the Dragon Wars Arc. However when I was writing the chapters I realized that I’ll have to devote some chapters to develop Miko’s kingdom which I did. That’s when I realized that this might be longer than I thought so I made it an arc of its own. That was because I wanted the Dragon Wars Arc to be an action filled arc since I’ve realized that YA lacks action compared to MC which was its original version. This arc is to make for that. Also it’s to do something which MC didn’t which is to focus more on Miko’s battles with proxies.
In MC Miko fought a lot of people but only fought three proxies Luka, Killo Who is now renamed Kylian and Tang. There was a big war with a lot of proxies but that’s different. Dragon Wars Arc will probably be a long arc but I want to make it the best arc I’ve ever written. I don’t plan to make a single chapter boring and give it my all. To show what I mean, here’s a preview of the arc below. The wording in the actual chapters as well as the events might be different though:
“I was just thinking that it’s about time that my enemies will start sending assassins after me.”
“I think that they want to mentally exhaust you before sending the real assassin when you least expect it.”
“Real assassin? I wonder who that will be?”
“Please reconsider! You’re the only one that can kill Miko, Princess!”
“I refuse.”
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“Even if you don’t kill Miko someone else will.”
“There’s no stopping this! Either way, Miko must die and a war is inevitable!”
“This is a cruel fate thrown at Luka. If she kills Miko she’ll lose a loved one, but if she doesn’t she’ll lose the chance to heal her mother.”
“Do the Flamehearts really believe that Miko will just allow himself to be killed?”
“Regardless of who it is, I will kill anyone that stands in my way.”
“Miko.”
“I see. So it’s you, Luka.”
*BOOM!*
“W-What an intense battle! I wouldn’t be surprised if either of them dies in the next second!”
“She was someone I refused to accept. The only person I truly feared.”
“He was someone that refused to acknowledge me, someone I truly admired.”
“Miko, Luka! Stop!”
“Die, Miko!”
“Drop dead, Luka!”
“Goodbye, my first love.”
“NOOOOOO!”
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“Big Brother, it’s been a long time.”
“Tessa, Kristen?”
“Miko, you’re going to the academy.”
“The academy is the best place to make connections with talented youths from all over the world.”
“What, There’s someone harassing my cute little brother and sister? Which bastard is it?!”
“Nice to meet you, Miko. My name is Kaido Khan.”
“There are other dragon proxies here?”
“Tang, Zora, Klaus, Kaido. These guys aren’t easy to handle Miko.”
“Dragon here dragon there dragon everywhere. What’s up with this place?”
“When too many stars gather a massacre is sure to happen.”
“Tang, you piece a shit!”
“Zora!”
“Damn you, Miko!”
“Kaido, stop them!”
“Calm down all of you!”
“Looks like this place is too small for six dragons. Some of you gotta die.”
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“The target is Renacido!”
“Miko, what’s wrong?”
“Get out of there immediately before it’s too late!”
*BOOM!*
“I can’t stop the bleeding!”
“Miko, I’m sorry.”
“DAMMIT!”
“I’m gonna Kill every single one of you!”
“That’s fine by me! This means war!”
“Ace, Sora Calm down!”
“You brats, do you plan on destroying my empire?”
“Demon Dragon God, Nero?!”
“I don’t even know what the fuck is going on anymore....But I like it.”
“Ascending Satan- Second Gate!”
“Welcome to the Dragon Wars.”
“Hahahahahaha!
“I”
“I”
“I”
“I”
“I”
“I”
“I WILL BE THE LAST DRAGON STANDING!”
the actual arc will begin sometime next week. Also sorry for the slow updates juggling two stories is starting to get to me.
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