《Young Master Has a Daughter》Announcement
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Major Announcement
I'm sorry that it took me this long to post and for letting you guys wait, but after 2 months of rest due to the typhoon, I've come into a decision regarding this story.
I want to remake it.
Yun Xia is too much of an ideal child, and it's unrealistic; Yun Ling is a bad father; This story is titled Young Master has a Daughter, but his daughter is barely in it in the story.
I want to redo it and make Yun Xia one of the most important characters in the story. I want her to have a good role than just wait for Yun Ling and then Yun Ling leaving her again. I want to change Yun Ling's fighting style in a way that would make the most use of his eyes. I want to give him more challenging opponents despite being a Divine Being. I want him to try harder to become a good father to Yun Xia. I want to make their family more relevant in the story as well. And I promise you that this will be much much better than the original Young Master Has a Daughter.
So I want to make a poll first if you guys want me to redo it or to just continue this despite the bad quality. If I ever make a remake, it will have 2k words per chapter, and it won't be rushed. It will be planned well, not a mess like this. I will continue revising it and only put out quality content unlike this one where I prioritize quantity more than quality.
But for now, I will publish another story. The title is Tower Eternal, and unlike YMHD, this one was planned well and have been edited at least once. To be honest, I don't deserve you guys. YMHD is merely a first draft of mine, I didn't even bother revising it because I was caught up in my daily goal of 2 chapters a day. You can read the bad reviews in this story and I agree on most of them. This one really sucks, I won't deny that because I've been uploading chapters without too much thought. After making a draft, I just put it on grammarly and then upload it. However, Tower Eternal is different. I started this book in just this month and already completed the first draft. Next month, I'm going to slowly post chapters after revising it and making sure it's good.
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If you want to vote, please go to my patreon and vote. I made it public so anyone can vote on it.
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