《An ordinary novel but every 10,000 words the audience kills the least interesting character》1.5
Advertisement


As they followed the skipping child back to the democracy chamber, the number zipped from Faust to Eirlys, glowing out of her hand. She had a splitting headache stemming from her ears, probably a remnant of the sub-zero wind. Even looking at the lanterns on the walls set it off.
Welcome back, she thought. I'm busy. Get used to bullet points.
— It was all Eirlys' fault.
— She hadn't been strong enough.
— She hadn't been clever enough.
— She'd thought that freefalling for the rest of her life would be punishment enough, but now she was back she had to carry the burden of Greer's death.
— A lump in her throat; slight blurring of vision. Tremors in her voicebox. All this was unhelpful. She had to get strong. She had to get clever. She had to be competent enough that something like this would never happen again.
— Tarquin, the man skipping alongside the child to try and make friends: exploitable. If he'd helped her with no expectation of a reward, then he'd do it again. He'd actually looked uncomfortable when she offered to vote on a reform of their choice.
— Kari, the child with a big grin: dangerous. Aside from the fact that Eirlys distrusted happy people, as well as silent people, the child must have seen what happened down there. It was possible they were being led into a trap. In response, Eirlys drifted to the back of the line.
— Connie, the woman fighting back imaginary enemies with her axe: exploitable. Prone to vanity. She would probably go along with anything if she thought she were manipulating Eirlys.
— Faust, the man shuffling behind with his hands in his pockets: not a threat. He didn't look assertive enough to stand up to serious criticism, and she'd already put him on the back foot with a comment about him being moody.
Advertisement
— The democratisation of reality: a real thing. Saheel had been right to consider other strategies. She would have to apologise. Unfortunately, she wouldn't be able to apologise to Greer.
— It was Eirlys' fault.
— Eirlys had forced Greer into an uninteresting situation, condemning her.
Eirlys slapped herself, loud as a whip crack, and Faust turned back to squint at her. She shrugged, so he shook his head and kept walking, bowed over under the weight of his own damn problems. Now her face stung in multiple places. A red mark formed on her cheek.
— Unhelpful thoughts wouldn't fix the situation, but competence would.
— Analyse to understand.
— The first motion they needed to pass, then: majority rule. Saheel had wanted to minimise the chance of bad actors before anybody could completely derail the process. Had he been too pressed for time to debate it, or had the others rejected it out of hand?
She tapped Faust on the shoulder, the least patronising of the three. "Excuse me, Faust."
Even though all she said was his name, he physically recoiled, holding his arms out in a cross to shield him. Did she think he was a vampire?
"Who invokes the name of the moody one?" he said. "What are you after? A vial of tears?"
"Ha," said Eirlys, trying to smile.
Faust frowned. "Go ahead, poke your fun like the rest of them. What's one more insult on a pile of thousands?"
"I'm sorry," said Eirlys.
"No you're not."
She shrugged. "Did Saheel say anything about changing the democratisation of reality to a majority rule?"
"Considering he was there for all of two minutes, after which Greer dropped dead? I'm surprised I even remember his name. They were going on about having a spa day, or something."
"Thank you," said Eirlys. "Watch your step."
Advertisement
Because he was walking backwards, Faust nearly tumbled down the gigantic set of stairs, and Eirlys absentmindedly used her climbing reflexes to catch him. He brushed himself off and kept walking.
— Nearly there. The child hadn't changed behaviour. Still, she needed to be careful. Let the others go in first.
"Hey." Eirlys grabbed Faust by the arm, pulling him back into a fork on the staircase that presumably led to another team's rooms.
"WHAT?" he said, shoving her into the wall. "That makes three people, now! Why does everyone think they can just push me around?"
"Sorry." She tried not to fall over, but her legs bent backwards, slipping on the smooth marble and she quickly found herself on the ground. It smelt dusty. Her glasses bounced down the steps.
"Oh, shit, sorry," said Faust, chasing after them, then passing them back to her. "Uh, you look a lot stronger than you are."
She yanked on his hand, hard, bringing him down to her level, and said, "I am strong, you just caught me off guard."
— Eirlys had to stop getting caught off guard.
"God, of course you are," cried Faust, nursing the arm she'd yanked. "I was almost feeling a little bit of remorse, but instead you had to double down on your campaign of harassment! Were your cutting words not enough? Must you thirst so for my blood? I swear, everywhere I go people just give me nothing but shit!"
— Maybe he actually believed she was a vampire.
"I'm sorry," said Eirlys. "I'm bad at being a people person. I just wanted to a) wait to see whether Connie and Tarquin were about to spring a trap, and b) ask your opinion on changing the democratisation of reality to a majority rule."
"You're saying my team might be in TROUBLE?" Faust spat at her feet, then dashed back down the stairs.
Eirlys lay there, listening for gunshots. None came, so she picked herself back up, dusted herself down, and crept into the central chamber past a stunned, shellshocked Team Shame. The kid was... doing some kind of jig next to a park ranger who had an ice pick — Eirlys' ice pick — lodged in his windpipe.
— He's still alive.
Indeed, the ranger was gargling, wide eyed, and letting out a horrible wheeze that sounded like somebody blowing through a vacuum tube.
— Saheel?
She found him a couple of paces from the ranger, choking on a puddle of his own blood. His priest's robe was torn ragged by bullets. Eirlys counted eleven holes. Somehow, he was still breathing. But then they all were.
"The twelfth bullet?" she asked.
Tarquin motioned to a schoolteacher slumped in front of a door labelled 70,000, a streak of blood running down it. Her cardigan was stained by a wound spreading out from her chest. She was clutching, white-knuckled, a clipboard. Alive.
— Greer. Don’t look at her body.
"We need to heal them, now," said Tarquin. "I can’t stand just watching them suffer. All those in favour?"
— Thumbs down.
7👍 1👎 — INSUFFICIENT MAJORITY
Eirlys stepped over to the park ranger, bent down, picked up his gun, rested it square on his forehead, and pulled the trigger.
Click.
— He must have emptied everything he had into Saheel.
"What the fuck, Eirlys?" shouted Connie.
"You might want to look away," said Eirlys, grabbing hold of the pick, pushing against the body with her foot to shunt it free.
"What do you think you're doing?" said Tarquin.
"First things first," she said, swinging down the ice pick.
— Force his hand.
Advertisement
- In Serial7 Chapters
To Conquer the World and To Win Women
Yi Xiang is a son of blacksmith from small fishing village He aims to become a powerful monster hunter and wish to forge the weapon that his father has failed to forge in his lifetime Born with ordinary luck and without any special talent Although his cultivation is also ordinary, his will is extraordinary He is sure that through hard work, he can still become a top monster hunter in the continent Oh yeah, he is also a hidden pervert that has been caged all his lifetime at his hometown Do you want to know what will happen when he sees all pretty girls as he travel the world? Come and see how Yi Xiang conquer the world and to win women!
8 161 - In Serial40 Chapters
Mistaken Land: A Gamer's life in an another world
"My Sole Motive is to return back home with you guys." Sejiyoi Midaro, he loved playing games, especially MMOs. and one day he started a game called Anire Online. He met a girl in that game with whom he fell love with and soon was going to meet her on December 25th, 2019 after years of dating. But, He got into an accident on 24th. Upon death Seji was transported to another world whe he gained magical powers. Those magical powers were extra ordinary even among others in that world. He made friends, foes, and found other players from his world. Over confidence always hindered his success and he couldn't protect what he wanted to. He founds out some of other players, who were also summoned to this world. Without knowing who summoned them, Seji goes on adventure to find the answers. Even tho, he continues his quest to find who summon him and to go back home...Only to have tragedies... PS: this is first hand version. I try to put chapters per week,
8 184 - In Serial10 Chapters
I just had a realisation recently that I am surrounded by bishies and...
Full title is: I just had a realisation recently that I am surrounded by bishies and now I am the main character of a reverse harem that I did not sign up for but have to put up with and now I can't get out of because someone is writing a light novel about me A lighthearted high school drama inspired by shojo manga, shojo anime and cold reality. This novel follows the not so average daily life of Kelly and her friends. But the title really explains it all. This work is also on Wattpad, I have ownership to the story and art on both sites. Currently teamed up with ednal.org and working on visual novels and anime project
8 109 - In Serial174 Chapters
DEAD IN BED By Bailey Simms: The Complete First Book
You've never, ever read a book like this.When a sexually-transmitted plague breaks out in Ashley Young's small town, leaving its victims with a bizarrely amplified libido, everything about her life changes. DEAD IN BED is partly a suspense thriller with a strikingly unique story, partly a page-turning mystery about a disease that makes people hopelessly crave sexual contact, and partly a neo-western adventure in the American heartland. For readers who can handle a smart, controversial female protagonist who's willing to do anything -- no matter how difficult or morally questionable -- in order to survive, the series pulls them in like an unshakeable addiction. . . . Bailey Simms, teen author of DEAD IN BED, is stuck at home with a rare medical condition. Writing is her only escape, so she's determined to keep her salacious series hidden from her strict father. Soon an older boy starts to secretly help her, and Bailey finds new opportunities for freedom she's never had. But as DEAD IN BED grows in popularity, and Bailey's fans start to clamor for the sequel, she learns that being a successful Wattpad author may come with a terrifyingly dangerous price.
8 60 - In Serial444 Chapters
Nameless Sovereign
Red awakens with no memory of his past inside a dangerous mine. Previously resigned to his fate, he discovers the power necessary to escape these caves and finally grasp destiny with his own two hands. Accompany Red as he grows from a mere slave into a man who will forever change the world around him. Gods, devils, and much worse things await to face him as he struggles to reach the pinnacle of this world. What to expect from this story: - Intelligent, determined, and independent MC. - Detailed worldbuilding involving western and eastern influences. - Broad but deep, strategy-oriented power system. - Cultivation mechanics. - A steadfast focus on the MC's quest; a story enriched by mystery and memorable side characters. New chapter every day. Winner in the October 2021, April 2022 Writathon Challenge!Listed on TopWebFictions.Join the novel's discord server. I also want to thank my friend for helping me edit my story!
8 196 - In Serial8 Chapters
The Untamed Mates
One Dark , One light. One protected her. The other loved her. But in the end, she'll have to choose. No matter who will she chooses, her soul will be ripped apart forever. Eva, a eighteen years old girl, wants a simple life after her parents death. But her life turns upside down when she started urban academy. Rich and high class brats are trained here. They think Eva have supernatural powers which can both save and destroy thier world. She have to find a way to survive.
8 175

