《Greed》Apology and New Novel
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I don't know where to start, really :/ Probably, I'm sorry. Really. Really. Really sorry. I messed up. Big time. Even if I started off by making a chapter a day in the beginning, I should have at least informed you guys about how I was feeling burnt out and how I should have slowed down with the release dates and just kept going at least twice a week since the chapters were short (even then we'd probably be at chapter 200+ by now!) . Instead, I would look more at the negative reviews instead of the positive reviews which ended up in me losing my confidence when it comes to writing novels. It's also ironic how I despised writers who took long breaks, then ended up taking one myself. All this, lead me to fear checking my account and even continue writing at all. Despite the fact that I wrote the whole novel for my own enjoyment because I liked Re:monster and other types of system novels so much! I thought it would cool for you guys to also join me on this journey as I thought it'd be cool to let you guys in on it. My love for writing became clouded and I lost the initial reason that I started. This was a huge mistake.
From there on, it's been another 2 years almost. I've dreaded coming back, but after thinking through things, it's the least I can do. I don't know if you guys can forgive me, but I honestly don't expect you to. It was disrespectful to you guys who were actually looking forward to new chapters. Since then, Ive probably read 1000s of novels of all sorts. Now, I feel like I'm at-least a higher-tier critique in the novel world. But, I can also recognize that there's always a higher mountain and I shouldn't be a fool and think I'm the best in front of Mt.Tai. Anyways, enough sulking!
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About a few months ago, I ran out of novels that really made me feel the same way I did when I started. I wanted to write a novel in which I could explore my own inner mind (being a loner who fears doing a lot of things), and also write about character in a modern world who evolves through a system and works towards mastering all skills and achieving immortality. I wrote 20+ chapters, before even posting it online (on qidian). And this time, I will consider advice with presentation of the novel, but I'll write something that I personally love. Because how can you guys enjoy the story if I'm not right?
The novel is called Wish-Fulfilling System and you can find it here. It's up to you if you want to read it. I feel like it's a whole new me in terms of skill and mental-state when writing. I personally feel that it also has much more substance, and themes, not just skills/abilities and filler.
You can find it here: https://www.webnovel.com/book/11907034606601905/Wish-Fulfilling-System
P.S. I just realized that this might come off as wrong, since I'm introducing a new novel while also apologizing. But I think that only way to make this right is to make a kick-ass novel with a consistent schedule (even if it's only once a week with a decently long chapter, and well-thought out long-term plan for the story).
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Dimensional Originator
Adam is having a terrible time. To start the day off he died in a car accident. And that isn't even the most painful thing that happened to him. That would be merging with a strange crystal. After that he ended up stuck in an endless black void. He does eventually get rescued. But quickly realizes his soul has been put in the body of a fallen noble and his fate is to be little more than a breeding slave for the cultivation clan that purchased him. To top it all off his new body had been bedridden for weeks and he can barely get out of bed. Not everything is terrible though. The crystal he merged with is called a dimensional originator. Using life and death energy he can create miniature universes. Given enough energy and time he could even create an entire universe. For a moment Adam thought things were looking up. Too bad the author finds things going horribly wrong far more entertaining. Warning: If this fiction was a movie I'd rate it as somewhere between PG-13 and R for violence, gore, and nudity.
8 241World Game!
-:- Currently on indefinite hiatus -:- Kicked from her home, Sarah Weatherford finds herself struggling to survive everyday life. Having found what she hopes to be a relief from her day job, turns out to be a war for the fate of another planet entirely. Will Sarah make it to the top of the World Game Trading Card Game ladder? Will she be able to save her friend’s home? Card set list right here! : https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/17cBjNBprDXuhNV0I-bDJ-w_vHkACgD-j7zNWSPu-lNI/edit?usp=sharing Follow here for updates on Twitter: https://twitter.com/WorldGameTCG
8 118Change of Fate
Ben Scat Stolen from the peaceful world that Ben once resided in, he has come face with the dark cult of another world. The saviors of the world that he now resides in has failed in their duties to defeat the evil that lurks within this world's fate. Now the saviors left their remaining wishes to Ben, as he had just come to understand the world that he resides in was a sword and magic tale. Little did he know, the world that he is on has already begun to unveil its sinister backings of the dark god. Now it is up to Ben, to solve the mystery of the savior's failure and to learn about the world to change its fate... for better or worst. Princess Kalo / Celestine As Ben fumbles around with his own life choices. Princess Kalo is faced with the aftermath of a nefarious scheme by an unknown organization that had taken her mother and father's consciousness. Left with the royal duty to keep her Kingdom standing, she takes the throne with her trusted Uncle Selis, a renowned general that personified the ideal general, loyal subject and honors itself in the Kingdom of Vincol. However, the world of nobility is a difficult one, littered with danger Princess Kalo continues forward on her own accord as she, herself knows of the future that lays in front of the kingdom if she were to idle by. As she is titled as the Prophetic Mage. A young boy stood in a white world, there was no sun, no moon, nor darkness. He looked forward, he looked down. There were no boundaries, it was endless, nothing to indicate that there was something within the distance. He grasped his hands and looked upwards towards the sky as he lifted his hands up. A dark void appeared in front of him, but only to disappear once again. Voices entered his thoughts, pain struck his head, he gripped onto his hair and groaned in agony. He looked forward and saw an image blurred in front of him, fading in and out. “Young one... “ the blurred image simply spoke. The young boy didn’t say anything and only looked down at his wound on his chest. It was a large gaping hole that passed through him, however there was no blood spilling out from it, the veins and arteries only dangled in place where a heart was supposed to be. Realising the cause of this scene the boy asked. “Am… I dead?” “Hahaha, no not at all.” A wispy tired voice simply chuckled “Then… what do you want with a dead man… but my hands...boy?” “ Well Do you…” “Do I?” “Want to change fate?” Welcomed edits and suggestions.
8 228Malevolent
Within a generation, the sky, once blue, bled a deep scarlet. Feral beasts roamed the lands and mutated men ravaged civilisations. They carved destruction in their wake. The spawning of new idols worshiped by cultists marked a terrible turn. Finally, a crippling insanity plagued the very few survivors left. Written in the journals of antiquity, lost in time, a scholar wrote: ‘This horrific cataclysm that we face was brought about by humans…’ However, these events are long gone. A longstanding peace has descended to Orbis. Yet, to spite the efforts of the saviours of yore, a progenitor of this calamity has been invited back by ritual. It seeks the return of these very ancient events. A silent peril is on the way.
8 71My Sister is Destined to Be a Warlock! Volume One: Family
All her life, Sabrina Bellerose knew that her big sister, Evia, a newly inducted warlock, is to fulfill the prophecy of bringing a new age of harmony and an age of renaissance to the country of Covania after defeating the "lion king". However, to her surprise, Evia asks Sabrina to join her, even though she is just a Witch. The two journey as they learn about destiny, family, the darkness within, and forgiveness.
8 128Hornless
Adarra is a land ruled by a cruel minotaur empire. Kreet, the mountain kingdom, prevents vile lycan from spreading to the human cities beyond its walls. As humans and half breeds rebel, the wolf plague spreads mysteriously across the land causing chaos to run rampant. Anula survives an attack on her city, but is captured. Her people are dead or enslaved and she must survive the horror and cruelty of her captors. As a dark stain on his royal blood for his primal, blood thirsty urges, Draxz is denied the minotaur throne in favor of his younger brother Rurak. Giving in to his anger, he continues down his path of bloodshed. Aύok’s land is a wasteland, his ancient people starved of food and culture. As king of the druid elves, Aύok decides its long past time that his people claim back their land. If he fails, he and his people will perish. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I try to update at least one chapter a week.
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