《Monster》Hello
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Hey guys, long time no see.
If you hadn't known by now, this novel is pretty dropped (not sure if I announced it before). Anyways, if I did, I feel like I need to offer a better explanation. School. Yep, things were starting to get a bit hectic for year 11, and fortunately I did get quite good results but, especially with the last year of high school, I need to keep a sustained and constant effort in studying.
Which brings me to the next point. For my studies, I am currently taking extension 2 English, so I wanted to ask you if you guys thought there were any scenes in this short-lived little book that stood out amongst the trash (if there were any) so that I could refer them to my mentor.
Also, I was thinking of creating another fiction thread for the development of my major work, which is meant to be a 5-6k short story, so that you guys could provide any feedback. (Honestly, go ballistic with the feedback, permission to take off the sugarcoating behind your criticism, I'll need it if I want to improve)
So yeah, comment thought below, also sorry again for never finishing this story, especially since it was like one chapter before finishing.
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VRMMO: The Unrivaled
Lu Chen used to be a ranker of the most popular VRMMO game, Spirit of Grief. After a car accident turned his dreams into dust, his disability left him incapable of escaping the pit of mediocrity he was thrown into. Helpless and defeated, his story ended.Two years later, the Eternal Moon Corporation launched a new VRMMO called "Heavenblessed", and Lu Chen stumbled into another terrible accident that left him in a complicated situation far beyond his ability to handle. That won't stop him from rising to the top, however. Not again.Come witness the rise of the sword-wielding zombie and the relationships he makes during his journey to the apex! For riches and bi- ahem, for career and love!He wields a demonic sword from Hell, he dons armor shining with Heaven's light. His boots stride across the sky as his helmet devours the souls of his enemies. On his left side sits the Goddess of Death. On the other, the Angel of Beauty.From the land of ice and death, a generation of Asura Kings rises, their roars reverberating throughout the world.Tremble in fear, noobs!
8 8156The Union of Breaths (Dropped)
The path of an elementalist is long and dangerous, but in a world where a single strong beast or expert is capable of deciding the fate of thousands one should strive to be strong. Famous sects, mighty clans and powerful trade conglomerates litter the continent. How could a young man from a troupe of travelling musicians and actors, armed only with the skills of his trade, ever hope to achieve true greatness in such a world?
8 180Rise of The Anti God
He was chased to the very ends of the earth by those he once protected. Betrayed by his friends and the ones he cared about, he lost his wife and unborn child. Ending it all by throwing himself into the abyss, just to be reincarnated into a world with Cultivation, where every being seeks to be the strongest. Love or hatred? Which is it that drives him in this new life? Will he ever be able to take revenge on the one who destroyed his previous life? Find out how the fate of the universe lies in Damien's hands by following Damien Godwin on his thorny path of vengeance and his journey to see what lies beyond... [ Try out at least the first chapter before moving on! ] Rest of the chapters are available on Webnovel -> https://www.webnovel.com/book/rise-of-the-anti-god_18484302906005805
8 145Time Turner
We were born alone, we were also doomed to die alone. But on that fateful night, he didn't die alone. That's his biggest regret. If only he gets a second chance. He will make sure... His family... his comrade... would be safe... From that traitor... *Modern Fiction* Betrayed by the most trusted person in his family, cost him his parents. They were at war against each other. Trying to win back something they believed were supposed to be theirs. He lost the game, also his life, his remaining family, friends, and comrade. All because of that traitor. Now that he is back. He will not fall into that death trap again. Even if he can't remember it. He won't fail. He will protect everyone. Alfizar looked at the face he sees every day in the mirror. "Nothing's wrong with it, but.... shouldn't my face look older?" Time passed by quickly and he realized that he had indeed died. But, who killed him? [Editor: LazyBoy] *At least 3 chapters a week in Webnovel*
8 82Prelude to a quest for employment
Niccolo had always dreamt of becoming an adventurer and all the fame and glory that went with it. As a young noble, he spent most time lying around and drinking, but when he hadn’t been doing that, he’d been practicing his swordplay. Now, he's finally out there in the world, together with a few companions that are motivated by more mundane and duller concerns, such as escaping poverty and famine. Set in a faux-Renaissance setting, with more heroism, snark and magic and less realism.
8 116Are you for real?! (Naruto various x reader)
Welp, you read the title.It's one of those OP modern reader ones.........!I do not own Naruto, credits to Masashi Kishimoto for making it!Status: OngoingStarted: March 20, 2022Ended: -Book 1.
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