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Hey guys, long time no see.
If you hadn't known by now, this novel is pretty dropped (not sure if I announced it before). Anyways, if I did, I feel like I need to offer a better explanation. School. Yep, things were starting to get a bit hectic for year 11, and fortunately I did get quite good results but, especially with the last year of high school, I need to keep a sustained and constant effort in studying.
Which brings me to the next point. For my studies, I am currently taking extension 2 English, so I wanted to ask you if you guys thought there were any scenes in this short-lived little book that stood out amongst the trash (if there were any) so that I could refer them to my mentor.
Also, I was thinking of creating another fiction thread for the development of my major work, which is meant to be a 5-6k short story, so that you guys could provide any feedback. (Honestly, go ballistic with the feedback, permission to take off the sugarcoating behind your criticism, I'll need it if I want to improve)
So yeah, comment thought below, also sorry again for never finishing this story, especially since it was like one chapter before finishing.
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